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Liquid Courage by bnbrice Rated: M [Reviews - 28] 8
Summary: Jim and Pam picking up right after Back from Vacation
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10554 Read Count: 18934 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2007 Updated: February 06, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed
Date: February 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Don't stop now-- I want to see how it ends... Although I don't like the Pam/Ryan thing it looks like they are only friends so I'm hoping Pam will straighten out Jim's jealousy. I'm really liking this story.

Author's Response: Don't worry, the Pam/Ryan thing is more in Jim's head. Thanks for your review!

Summary: Something is going on between Jim Halpert and Pam Beesly.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Roy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13550 Read Count: 61073 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2007 Updated: February 23, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 10
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Tomorrow is just a few hours away

Great story, I really like how you've been able to keep them in character. I can really see Jim and Pam eloping like that. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I really had myself convinced last August that Jim and Pam would be married by the time season 4 rolled around.  I guess I'm still dreaming!

More to come soon.

Summary: Jim and Pam go through the motions of an unexpected addition.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49311 Read Count: 57430 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: February 25, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: January 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Arguments that make up sex can't fix

I'm not usually one for angst... but this was great to read that their relationship isn't all happy, but that they can forgive each other and move on. I also love that Pam signed him up for the class knowing he really wanted it.

Excellent chapter- can't wait for the debut of baby JAM!

Summary:

I got this idea from the JAM Therapy thread on the NBC boards.  A fellow board member brought up an article stating the 10 ways a woman can best compliment her man.  I am taking each one and implementing it into JAM.  Pretty simple, really. 

RC, this one goes out to you.  ;)  meow.

Spoilers thru S4 so far.

I don't own any of this.  Don't sue.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3216 Read Count: 39919 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2007 Updated: March 26, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 7
Date: January 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: "You the man."

I really like the idea and the story, but in this chapter you've written Jim a little harsher than I see him. But I do want to see what you have in mind for the next 5 chapters.

Author's Response:

I meant him to be teasing Mark and playing with Pam.  It's good to know how it comes off, though.  Thank you for the input!  :)

--receptionist

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam on familiar ground. Spoilers (perhaps) up to mid-Season 4.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11996 Read Count: 82891 ePub Downloads: 17
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2007 Updated: September 09, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: February 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Elements

This was bleak- to the bleak degree... not bad but certainly not happy- though you never promised fluff- I liked it, but want to get to the more happy aspects... post the job, please??? I'm addicted though and will read regardless!

Author's Response: Post The Job is finally here, nearly two months later!  Thank you, dreamscribe70!

Summary: Seriously ridiculous season 4 fluff. Pre-premiere.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1347 Read Count: 4017 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2008 Updated: January 11, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed
Date: January 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked your story- especially the use of flashbacks-very appropriate.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it!

Summary: When they fought, they fought.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 783 Read Count: 2460 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 6
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked your idea for the story and the characterization of Pam was great. I guess I wanted to get a little more of Jim... maybe more dialog between them, but I do see what you were doing and enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying not to have too much dialogue, and there definitely was a lack of Jim, but I\'m glad you enjoyed it.

Summary: Jim and Pam are engaged. The office reacts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1916 Read Count: 5620 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods

Very funny talking heads... you captured Jim and Pam's banter really well. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184376 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: July 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Friday Morning

So sorry to hear about your personal medical issue- I have psoriasis so I understand about the rash/swelling/itching combo- it really sucks- I hope you feel better soon...
This chapter was really interesting I think Jim's questions were very realistic due to the circumstance and thought you handled it well.

Though I can't wait to see them over come their issues and finally get together!!!
Hope you can update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks, dreamscribe70!  I sure hope to feel better soon, too.  This happened once before, with DIFFERENT makeup, and the prednisone kicked in right away.  Not nearly so fortunate this time.  It will improve in the next dose or so, though ... I hope.  I'm a great believer in that old DuPont slogan:  Better living through chemistry.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  And thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291229 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 10
Date: April 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved, loved loved this chapter! It totally shows that you had fun writing it. The passion and restraint was an excellent mix showing how much they want to be together and not want to mess it up by going to fast. And Jim gets that.

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it, because god knows I had a ball writing it!  ;O) So glad you found the taking-it-slow bit to be believable, too.  Thanks so much for reviewing!

Summary: AU- Starts with Jim leaving for Stamford, ends in a happy place. Inspired by "Message in a Bottle" by The Police.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5750 Read Count: 19452 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: February 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

Oh! Totally getting good I loved this chapter!!!! Please write more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Summary: Jim's biggest fan guides him through Season 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13735 Read Count: 39993 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2008 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 10
Date: February 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Hand Delivered

I absolutely loved how you turned the tables on her in this chapter-- brilliant. I can't wait to read about the fan club meeting!!!! Update soon please, I've been loving this story and have missed it.

Summary: Jim has a way with words, and Pam likes it. Five sweet things he says to her that make her fall in love.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19056 Read Count: 23704 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2008 Updated: March 19, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: March 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Anyone Else But You

Awww so sweet. I really loved your ending. Great story all around.

Breakdown by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 131] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37702 Read Count: 96764 ePub Downloads: 59
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: April 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Coda

Really, really well done, loved it.

I can't wait for the next installment.

Summary: Past Featured StoryTotally finished! Feel-good and gooey. The build up to, and actually including, Jim and Pam's first time together.
I added one more chapter for a letter on Monday morning, following their date.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: First Dates
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8495 Read Count: 59567 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Tonight's the Night

Loved this chapter- very hot!

However, I would like to see it continue with more of their letters to each other, I've missed that the last two chapters.

But overall I've really loved this story.

Author's Response: Your wish is my command. I posted one for the Monday after their date.

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: March 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Write Me

Challenge accepted... I love it! Great chapter.

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: March 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Basketball Metaphors and Michelangelo

Another homerun (I'm mixing sports metaphors for you) Loved it- where can I find a guy like that, do they even exist? That letter sounded so like Jim, it was great. I'm going to continue begging for more!!

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: February 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: To Be Conventional

Loved her letter and love this idea! So sweet- I can't wait to read his response. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9
Date: March 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Stinky Jim

2 in 1 day! Yay!-- sorry, I tend to rhyme when I'm excited.... can't wait to see his response to her challenge.
Keep it up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of stories and vignettes in response to the Word challenge.  They all involve the conference room in some way. The chapter titles are the prompt words from the challenge.


Categories: Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Word: Two-Week Fanfic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7156 Read Count: 23384 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: March 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Table

Very cute, really enjoyed the story. I can totally see Fancy New Beesly standing up like that.

Author's Response: Yes and Michael did see it, and liked it. I appreciate your reading and reviewing.

Sheet Music by wendolf Rated: MA [Reviews - 120] 64
Summary: Past Featured StoryA look at what might have happened between The Job and 'round about Money. Lots of steam in the beginning, then some angst for good measure.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14947 Read Count: 55058 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2008 Updated: March 07, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: March 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Argh... cliffhanger... update soon!!! Please???

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: March 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter... It sounds like you already have this planned (so maybe I'm right...) but I would really like to see Pam come to the realization that she might have to fight for what she wants (Jim). So I guess I'm asking to see her going back on her own.

Please add more soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10705 Read Count: 46487 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: We're living in the future and none of this has happened yet

Yay-- She said yes on Casion Night... although, does this mean she's cheating on Roy???? Please say it aint so!

Can't wait to read the last chapter!

Summary: Past Featured StoryMEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18424 Read Count: 132777 ePub Downloads: 40
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 10
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Really really loved this story. Thank you for writing it.

This chaper wrapped it up well, it was very satisfying.

Author's Response: You\'re welcome dreamscribe! Glad you were satisfied! Thanks so much for letting me know what you thought!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91635 Read Count: 137249 ePub Downloads: 35
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: July 22, 2008
Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8
Date: March 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: she has your hair

I really enjoyed this chapter- more Jim and Franny(aka Frank) it was sooooo adorable- and very Jim. I like that he is relating to both of them not just Pam, and it seems like you are heading toward having him admit his love for Franny first. At least that's my hope! I'm really curious to see what happens next and if he will give himself permission to move on.