How could you possibly end it there?

Author's Response: I could be evil.

The waiting is going to kill me! If you didn't update as often as you do I'd probably be a puddle on the floor. Please keep them coming....and kick Jim's butt in to gear for me. I'd really appriciate it.

Author's Response: Haha, I shall. I try to be quick like a bunny with the updates. :)

I don't understand why after everything he and Pam are going through that he'd still be hanging out with Karen. I really just want to smack him around a bit.

Author's Response: Well... I'd like to think it's a good thing that my story makes people have such a reaction... not that I intended to incite violence... haha, but yeah -- like I've said before, it's just a confusing time for them both, and even though people don't like it, in reality things like that happen. I'm just staying true to what I believe is a plausible real-life storyline. But you won't need to smack him around -- I have a feeling a few characters within the story will get to him first! :)

I'm not enjoying the Natalie/Jim dynamic. Mainly because if this is like a soap opera it's going to go to an unhappy place. If Jim had answered his phone it would seem a lot less suspicious and be more like a brother/sister thing seeing as how she's currently dating his brother. I really want to know where Pam's head is at right now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review- writing Natalie and Jim as \"friends\" is somewhat of a challenge because I want to have her there as somewhat of a helpful \"sisterly\" figure without taking their relationship too far. Jim seems to always be there for everyone else, but we\'ve never really seen someone, outside of Pam, who\'s really there for him as a friend. \r\n\r\nBy him not answering the phone, I guess I saw that he just didn\'t know how to tell Pam he turned down the promotion and that, even though he\'s very happy with Pam, he\'s deeply unhappy with his career. I can totally see him keeping those feelings from her, and afraid to tell her she\'s the only thing that has been keeping him there. I definitely want to bring Pam in soon. I can totally envision the party planning committee putting together a Fourth of July party that would allow Pam to come visit, because she would probably be on a short break from school around that time.

Anytime. If you ever need a beta or anyone else to talk out things with go to my profile. There are so many ways to contact me it's kind of sad.

More more more more more more more....before the babies stop coming....

I'm so glad Pam's back. Less glad that for a moment it felt like Natalie was outright replacing her in the office and with Jim. They're banter is kind of the same. I like that it doesn't seem like Pam's all that warm to the idea either. I'm can't wait to see where you take this. I mean...another Dundies!

My review got lost when the server went down. Basically I love that you had a little French in there because I love French. Also, I thought the story was really sweet and it sucks that it had to end.
I would type up my whole review it was a little long. Sorry.

Author's Response: That\'s okay! Stupid servers! I\'m glad you liked it!

MORE! Seriously!

How about more? That could save you.

I'm interested.

Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)