Penname: Strider Real name: Strider
Member Since: March 04, 2008

Bio:
I am new to the Office fandoms, but I can't get enough of Jim and Pam.
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Reviews by Strider
Summary: The other Dunder Mifflin receptionist recounts the events of "The Job".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Other
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: All About a Peripheral Character
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4235 Read Count: 8784 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Amazing Grace

I love this point of view. I love that you are writing a character that few people seem to see, but who herself sees everything. I am also really impressed at how you work in Grace's point of referece--theater and singing-- into the way she speaks about everything. Really, really good.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just thought about all the wackiness that went on in that room that day, and we had an observer sitting right there who, unlike us, doesn't really know these people (at least the Scranton folks). It was fun to create a new character and try to build a voice instead of trying to capture one we are all so familiar with.

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: A wretch like me

I really love Grace's take on Jim and Karen. Very nice.

Author's Response: Thanks! Again, I was trying to figure out what someone neutral would see when looking at those two. I'm not sure that Jim was really as aloof as I portrayed him here, but I think I got Karen spot-on. Heh. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Was blind, but now I see

I absolutely loved this! The story from Grace's point of view was just perfect! This was so clever and creative. Really great work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so pleased that you found this older story. I had a fabulous time writing it (I was totally on a "It's a date" high at the time, of course). I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, it means a lot to me. And I'm also glad you enjoyed it!

Paper guy by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 7] 1
Summary:

Ryan gets an email from a friend.  In response to the 55 words leaving scranton challenge.  Ryan does not belong to me.  Neither does his promotion.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ryan
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 820 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: emails

Very clever! Do you count the to/froms in the 55 words?

Summary: Karen returns a Christmas gift.

Categories: Future, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Karen
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 2041 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Karen. Good job on this!

Summary: Jan's love for Michael has gone public.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Michael/Jan
Genres: Humor, Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1489 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: MIchael Scott sees the countryside.

LOL...I guess Michael could use some of that kind of help!

Dry by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 5
Summary:

Pam had learned two things from her years with Roy. Speculative for season 4, unspoiled.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54 Read Count: 2850 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2007 Updated: August 07, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh no! I mean, very well written and powerful, but all the more heartbreaking for that!

--Strider

Author's Response: Thank you. This one was sort of a downer, huh? :) Believe me, I'm usually all about the fluff!

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, NO! That's so sad!

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that! I don't think this will happen, at all, but if it does I like knowing that Pam is strong enough to get through it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!

Summary: Free at last.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Stanley
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56 Read Count: 1369 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2007 Updated: August 08, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Go, Stanley! If anyone deserves it... And he's so calm! You nailed his character!

--Strider

Summary: Roy leaves Scranton for a new start in California.
Response to the 55 words to leave Scranton challenge.
Categories: Present
Characters: Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103 Read Count: 1325 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2007 Updated: August 09, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But he doesn't understand her, so... I like how Roy just sounds confused, not angry.

--Strider

Summary: Response to "55-Words To Leave Scranton" challenge. Toby's last day at Dunder-Mifflin.
Categories: Other
Characters: Toby
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 2178 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2007 Updated: August 21, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Gargamel Strikes Back

Awesome...still waters run deep, I guess!

Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 66454 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Fold

At least he had one of his dreams come true! Good insight into his character. I'm a little disturbed that Kevin is younger than me, though.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Pictures

I hope that Michael really does find that kind of contentment.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Memories

That was very poignant...she's literally lost without Jim. Beautiful.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Separation

At least they grew old together...very old. Thank you for giving them that.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Boredom

It's so hard to imagine her without her cats. That seems like the final indignity. Good job.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Music

Not a bad way to go when you're that age! I wouldn't mind it...

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Forget

Of course she would go. I can see Roy going that way, too.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Lonely

That's nice; I'm glad she found someone.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Hero

He would do that, God bless him. And that's exactly how he would want to have gone, too. Sad, but real.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Success

That's tragic. For a minute I thought that he might kill himself. Again, I am still so impressed by how well you're carrying this out!

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Smile

Isn't it "wept?" Anyway, Toby's got such a serious presence, I'm sad that it might mask that kind of pain. But I'm glad he had his little girl.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Vacation

Sad, tragic. Great characterization, though, because Oscar is an open, giving person who would great a stranger. I think this series is a brilliant idea.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Positive

This is both sad and cheerful--very "Phyllis." I feel like I've lost a dear aunt.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: DUI

That's tragically ironic, considering how long it must have taken her to finally get herself together. Good insight!

--Strider