It's been three years since Jim accepted the promotion to New York. After two years of silence, Pam sends Jim a gift.
Of course he still thought of Pam- did he think that would go away??! lol
It's always interesting to read AU where Jim took the NY job.
You paint a beautiful picture with your words, VB. I can see Pam's painting in my mind
Go Kelly for convincing her to send it!
The perspective/time change what flawless, VB!
The descriptions of Pam's grandparents broke my heart in two :( Very well written
YAY! This was great!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for all the reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I sure enjoyed writing it.
When Jim can't be there when Pam needs him, he sends a little love through the mail.
My contribution to the "Pam in New York" theme
I love this story. I've been thinking about this, but didn't remember what the title was or who wrote it, until someone rec'ed it on the forums... Glad they did. Adding to my faves, so I don't 'lose' it again!
A golf pencil, two hot sauce packets, a Boggle timer, a mixtape, a high school yearbook photo, a card, and a teapot. Yup.
10 I haven't read this one in a while, so I figured I needed to. I forgot how much there was to love in all the chapters. How sweet that he still gets embarrassed about the card.
The boggle timer was my favorite, but I love the banter in Sales Call, too. It's all so precise, everything you write.
10 I was excited to see this continued. I sent you an email awhile ago about these stories, but I finally created an account to review. I LOVE Dottie, so bringing her poems into the Office leaves me satisfied and smiling. This one is great- sad, but great.
I have to say my favorite is "Unfortunate Coincidence, Second Love, and But Not Forgoten" because I love those poems.
Some really short ones that I love are Prophetic Soul (Dwight or Andy/Erin), Godspeed (Michael/Holly after he found out about AJ), For Unknown Lady or The Lady's Reward (Don't know who for, just really love these), Men (this one kind of reminds me of Jim/Karen, only Karen being the 'Men'), Experience (this one could be Jim/Pam- for he was all three men at one time or another,) Cheating the Fiddler or On Being a Woman (for Ryan/Kelly, Ryan being the 'Woman'), Distance... Maybe you could work one or two in
*Wishful thinking*
Keep it up! Can not wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad there\'s a fellow Dorothy fan out there who\'s enjoying this. I was toying with \"Distance,\" \"Godspeed\" and \"Experience\" before the whole flash drive/computer fiasco, so those are probably going to crop up at some point (probably soon, as they\'re the ones who offer me most inspiration at the moment). I\'ve also been thinking about \"Frustration\" for the way Michael feels about Toby haha. Or \"Lullaby\" from Karen to Pam, especially the last two lines. Definitely \"Mortal Enemy\" from Karen to Pam. Gah! So many good choices. Gotta love Dottie!
Anywho, thanks for reviewing. :)
10 Being this is so well written I can feel the tension, see the facial and body expressions, and hear the words rounding in their heads. I love this one, it's one of my new favorites of the group! Well done and please, please keep it up!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) I will definitely keep this going. I don\'t think I\'ll have to worry about running out of DP poems. ;)
Hee-hee! Too funny!
"I’ve seen pictures." "I bet you have."
Great stuff
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Andastainonmyshirt!
This is the second Story of the Moment that I've not previously read. I like this. Lots. I'm going to reread your other stories, for sure :)
"It's always been Jim and Pam." What if it always was? What twists and turns do a lifelong friendship take? A story of Jim and Pam and love, in varying incarnations.Oh this is getting so much better! I'm very much enjoying their repartee
I finally get to read this! I'm so excited! I read the first chapter (which I shouldn't have, yet, cause now I'm late for class) and I want to read it all in one sitting! I'm glad I waited until it was complete.
How sweet that their mothers were friends first, original idea, this story. I know nothing about the upcoming chapters, but I do hope the two ladies stay friends. And that Smelden and Muffin do really end up at the alter ;)
Author's Response: Keep on and find out... I'll be happy to hear more from you. Thanks for reading!
YES! I've been waiting for Dwight to be introduced! The Jim/Pam/Dwight part of this chapter is my favorite so far!
I giggled through this! Way to go :)
I didn't get to finish this last night, but I'm trying to finish as fast as I can. This has really sucked me in. I'm liking more and more in the latest chapters
I like how you mingle this AU story with moments and people from the show. Th BC 27 SOS was done well
Cute :)
yayyayyayyay!! That was so sweet!
“What?” she slurred. “You think you can just command it and I’ll come running?” that's awesome! Beautiful ring. And “Mom,” came the teary voice through the phone. “You call me Mom.” Guh!
This was a sweet story. I'm glad I finally got the chance to read it. :)
Yes, wedding planning IS enough to drive someone insane! But it's oh so much fun!
Wow, that was... very dirty. I even skipped over most of that and I still feel as though I need a bath
I was hoping he'd warn her that he had a penis. Too funny!
They're like bunnies, aren't they? lol