i'm really confused here. it seemed like she was having second thoughts about leaving roy - then was roy kissing her at the end? can yo please explain to me? thanks.

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sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, i decided to choose reading them all and no reviewing, versus reviews on all, and not finishing.

anyway, i love how we're really seeing jill grow up, and what great parents jim and pam are. i especially liked reading the chapter about lauren-elisabeth, it was so creative to do something from her point of view.

and lastly, as always, your writing is so fluid and seamless, it's delightful to just read what's going on in your idea of their life.

great job lovefool, and i must admit i was singing that song for about half and hour today! update soon!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much Pamelamorganhalpert.  Thank you for taking the time to read for so long and now reviewing as well, it means a lot to me.  Jim and Pam and their little family has been such an exciting thing for me to write. I'm glad I could entertain you.

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Wow, that was sweet and just beautifully written. Great job and I can't wait for #31! P.S. At the beginning (sorry to not be more specific then that, I can't remember!) there was one sentence where you mixed up the order of the last two words. That's the only typo, though, nice work!

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TBC???????!!!!!!!!!!????? Hello, it's been ages! I need to see Jim solve the dreaded Auntie Flo conundrum!! Please, rose, I'm dying of lack of proper reading material and I *really* don't want to finish my paper on Hugo Chavez and the similarities to Haiti. Sound fun? Not at all. Keep going!!! (And oh how I wish the "You just got a review!" email feature still worked so that you'd know I just left a really annoying, I imagine, review nagging you.)

So sorry, but keep going, this is really fun! I'll beta if it helps! :) Seriously, this is awesome. Could you get JAM to make out in the supply closet, too? Sorry, just having fun here!

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That was incredible! So sweet. I love how Jim just shows up there - and they're ready to move forwards in harmony. Ack - this is so great!

wow! that was different, but i really liked it. keep going!

that was such a sweet chapter, albeit short. nice job with this story and i love the last line. it was so romantic to have her parents to come to the wedding, great idea. and i loved the orange dress and last line in this chapter about the pina coladas.

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My favorite funny lines...

"She likes the taste of his beer mingling with her margarita." I was laughing so much at this one at first. then a minute later I was like, Wait why was that funny. The things you do at 1:15 in the morning...

"No Joking With The Bride The Day Before The Ceremony, Under Penalty Of Death." that was funny at first, too. then i didn't understand what I was thinking at first... again.

The best BY FAR: "Come on, loser. I'll protect you from the dinosaurs." you gotta admit, that one's just great.

Alright, that was my substitute for a review. hope you liked it.

I think i'll just read the rest of the story and not review for the rest of it. sorry. i'm forgetting to capitalize things. must be getting tired. still want to read. the choices. one. must. make. in. life...

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oh my god - that was so sweet with the gazebo. great description!

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i'm so sorry i haven't reviewed yet, i guess i was just so happy you'd written 11 chapters of a GREAT story for me to read. this is soooo cute, and so fun to read! this chapter was way too cute! i love the part about the letter, 'mr halpert' goes from being a friend to a gentleman to a boss in one chapter! i love it, nice job with staying in the time-period! can't wait to keep reading!!

wait, is that the end? i'm confused. it didn't make sense... pam's a virgin, and then jim suddenly left? i don't get it. i guess you'll just have to write some more!!

that was beautiful! i loved how the scarf had such a presence and importance, how it brought the together and then could be replaced by the man himself. great job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, pamelamorganhalpert - you're not supposed to have a favorite child, but it's always especially gratifying when someone likes this story.

LOL! Oh my god, I love Gordon. Let's see if Jim does something about it. On never mind, Michael's right there... oh well. Gordon is still great! "It is I, Gordon!"