Fanfic is a fun outlet for me after a long day at the office, but it's also a chance to work on some writing issues: character development, style, pacing. So thanks to anyone who gives me reviews! Summary: ...we pay cash for an hour in a motel room a few miles down the highway. Another to add to the stack of post premier fic.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 411 Read Count: 3850 ePub Downloads: 1
Penname: NeverEnoughJam Real name: N. E. Jam
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[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Superb, as always, unfold. A polished jewel. It's tough to pick out any one moment over another, but if I had to, I would say
We are sloppy and frantic and love you love you love you against our skin
sums up that moment after "Yes" so, so beautifully. And your last paragraph should go in the Fanfic Hall of Fame.
Summary: 
S3 AU. She twists the gold band on her finger around and around. She waits to feel regret or guilt or something else besides this buzzing excitement.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4207 Read Count: 5898 ePub Downloads: 3
S3 AU. She twists the gold band on her finger around and around. She waits to feel regret or guilt or something else besides this buzzing excitement.Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4207 Read Count: 5898 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ow.
Beautifully done. *sniff*
Summary: Post-Customer Survey. Jim's thoughts
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1867 Read Count: 4998 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1867 Read Count: 4998 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: November 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awwwww. I love the puppy/nun/small child with special needs references. And darn it, now I have a craving for barbecue chicken pizza...
Well done. Thanks for sharing this.
Summary: Really short little bit of post Frame Toby fluff. So spoilers, obviously.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 275 Read Count: 4608 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 275 Read Count: 4608 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: November 20, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: November 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: November 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The house is full of imperfections, but you have found perfection here.
Amen, sistah. Gorgeous, as is all your work. Thanks for posting this.
Summary: Todd Packer, Hotlanta, and pathos. Well, as much pathos as Todd Packer can offer. No spoilers, set during Season 4.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Todd Packer
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1603 Read Count: 495 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Todd Packer
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1603 Read Count: 495 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: November 22, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 
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Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
9 Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Fantastic! This is a wonderful portrait of a character we haven't seen much of lately. It's always easy to dismiss secondary (or tertiary!) characters as one-dimensional, but here you have given Todd Packer humanity and even pathos. I actually feel sorry for the guy. And this...
it's an infomercial for something he can't make out with bleary eyes. He bets that, whatever it is, Michael owns it.
is pure genius. Yes, I completely believe Michael Scott owns everything ever shown on late night TV.
You might want to consider adding this as a response to the Sleepless challenge. I think it would fit.
Congratulations on a fine portrait.
Summary: One part for each season. Pam's p.o.v. Nothing could be more innocent than a freckle, right?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Mark, Meredith
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5981 Read Count: 27564 ePub Downloads: 7
One part for each season. Pam's p.o.v. Nothing could be more innocent than a freckle, right?Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Mark, Meredith
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5981 Read Count: 27564 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: a faint pulse
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope I made perfectly clear how completely disinterested she was in him. ;-) Thanks, NEJ!
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: a faint pulse
It occurred to her that she couldn’t get that intense a reaction from Roy if she reached out and grabbed his crotch.
:-O
I like your S1 Pam. She's not really watching Jim. Not at all. Nope.
Heh heh heh.
Author's Response: Yeah, I hope I made perfectly clear how completely disinterested she was in him. ;-) Thanks, NEJ!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: accidentally on purpose
Author's Response:
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: accidentally on purpose
Saturday afternoon Pam finds herself diving over to his place
Mental image of Pam in SCUBA gear...
It’s as if it snaps him into sharp focus, makes him suddenly, aggressively real.
I like how you put this, capturing that moment of recognition when Jim acquires a sexual identity for Pam, or at least that moment when she acknowledges it on some level. That's always a tense moment, maybe because we didn't really see a moment like that onscreen that often (Basketball? Casino Night?).
And there it is again: that sliver of skin between the hem of his t-shirt and his non-existent belt.
Oooooo.Thank you for that image. And why is BeerDrinking!Jim so hot? Did not expect that, but he is.
Author's Response:
Oops! Thanks for catching the typo (or was it a Freudian slip, you decide ;-) And yes, that moment is tense - perhaps even a bit threatening to her, at that point anyway.She'll figure it out.....thanks again, NEJ!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: mistaken identity
Author's Response: Kind of liked that 'forensic' line myself, have to admit. Glad you noticed. Oh and that particular scene is shown regularly in your (and my) head...am I right, lol? Thanks much, NEJ!
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: mistaken identity
She’d want to know what all of him felt like and tasted like.
Can we get that scene, please? :D
that freckle on his neck is like a forensic record of his true identity
Wow, what a great line.
And the line at the end is a real heartbreaker. Brava!
Author's Response: Kind of liked that 'forensic' line myself, have to admit. Glad you noticed. Oh and that particular scene is shown regularly in your (and my) head...am I right, lol? Thanks much, NEJ!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: constellation
Author's Response: It does make sense - I think even that early on, while the physicality would have obviously felt new (even a bit shocking), their emotional intimacy would have helped leapfrog their comfort level - in other words, I don't think Pam felt uninhibited due only to the summertime or the wine ;-) Anyway, pleased a sense of that came through. Thanks encore, NEJ!
10 Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: constellation
He’d lain with his head resting on her lap under the stars
Aw, what a wonderfully romantic image.
she’s learning him by touch
Mamma mia....!
I love the way you write that connecting-the-freckles scene--sensual and yet comfy and homey. Does that make sense? I love sleepy Jim not quite able to form words but more than able to communicate by other means.
Author's Response: It does make sense - I think even that early on, while the physicality would have obviously felt new (even a bit shocking), their emotional intimacy would have helped leapfrog their comfort level - in other words, I don't think Pam felt uninhibited due only to the summertime or the wine ;-) Anyway, pleased a sense of that came through. Thanks encore, NEJ!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: just this feeling i have
Author's Response: Sorry about the cranial explosion (how Dwight is that?) But glad you so clearly saw the arc I intended...who knew freckles could be so metaphorical (at least to someone as obsessed with minutiae as I am, lol.) Thank you for all the feedback, NEJ!
10 Date: December 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: just this feeling i have
Yeah,’ Pam added. ‘Plus there’s been no creepy parental sex on it.’
‘Well, not yet anyway,’ Jim concluded.
LOL! I love this! I can just imagine their faces.
sleeping without him began to seem like an endurance contest.
For ALL of us...
‘No virgin could know how to do that thing with your tongue you did this afternoon.’
I think my head exploded. Yup, there it is in the corner.
Loved this whole series so much. I'm glad I held off until you finished it, because it arcs so seamlessly (and joyously) from S1 Pam pretending not to notice or care about a freckle, to S5 Pam claiming it for her future children. Thanks again for this lovely story.
Author's Response: Sorry about the cranial explosion (how Dwight is that?) But glad you so clearly saw the arc I intended...who knew freckles could be so metaphorical (at least to someone as obsessed with minutiae as I am, lol.) Thank you for all the feedback, NEJ!
Summary: A response to Grape Soda's mistletoe challenge. Set during S2.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Mistletoe
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3120 Read Count: 6924 ePub Downloads: 2
A response to Grape Soda's mistletoe challenge. Set during S2.Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Mistletoe
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3120 Read Count: 6924 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: December 15, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I started out copying some lines I liked in this, but then tossed them all out because they're all good enough to quote. I love how you have captured that mood between Pam and Jim pre-Casino Night, the sense of them tiptoeing along the edge of something, the breathless feeling when the submerged sexual tension bubbles to the surface, the hint of desperation in their flirting, joking relationship...you caught all of that perfectly. I am very jealous. :)
Author's Response: Hiya, NEJ, thanks for the love & sorry for the delayed response. The holidays, you know... I\'m glad you liked it. Sexual tension is a pain to write without being over-the-top or too understated. I\'m glad you think I succeeded. Cheers!
Summary: One of these is true: he is not himself or he has never been himself until this moment. Post "The Job" first date nonsense.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1021 Read Count: 3911 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1021 Read Count: 3911 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: i beg you open the gates
10 Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: i beg you open the gates
Brilliant, as always. You leave me breathless with envy with every story you write. I could quote every single line of this as evidence, but these really caught me:
He reaches back into his mind for those careful words he had chosen, but they’ve all vanished. He has dropped them in the woods among the twigs and the leaves. There must have been a hole in the pocket he put them in.
Wonderful, wonderful. Thank you so much for this fine story.
Summary: Jim and Pam ring in 2006. Spoilers through "Christmas Party."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Other, Katy, Pam/Roy
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5399 Read Count: 4410 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Other, Katy, Pam/Roy
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5399 Read Count: 4410 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: December 31, 2008
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: And it's not because I'm lonely, and it's not because it's New Year's Eve.
Author's Response: You may certainly borrow that phrase! I feel rather honored. :) I\'m glad you enjoyed and yes, poor S2 Jim.
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: And it's not because I'm lonely, and it's not because it's New Year's Eve.
as he laughed and felt something heavy in his gut.
Very descriptive turn of phrase! Mind if I borrow it? :D
his resolution had been the same for 2003, 2004, and 2005, a depressing march of years... It’s only seven-and-a-quarter hours since 2006 began, but his New Year’s resolution already lies in pieces, all around him.
Poor Jim. That says SO much about him and Pam's relationship. Or non-relationship. I liked this story very much. You made me remember how much I ached for poor Jim. In a good way. Thanks for this story!
Author's Response: You may certainly borrow that phrase! I feel rather honored. :) I\'m glad you enjoyed and yes, poor S2 Jim.
Summary: A response to BeckySue's "The Weather Outside is Frightful" challenge, set... well, yesterday, actually.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: The Weather Outside Is Frightful
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1839 Read Count: 4787 ePub Downloads: 2
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: The Weather Outside Is Frightful
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1839 Read Count: 4787 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2009
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 8
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
8 Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You had me at the title, one of my favorite cummings poems. And then this...every line artfully done, and the way you tell the story of the wedding by interleaving it into their everyday, ordinary life--wonderful. Just wonderful. I applaud you.
Author's Response: NEJ, you\'re sweet. Thank you so much for your kind review. I\'ve always loved e.e. cummings\' love poems, so I was glad to have a reason to use him here.
Summary: Post 'The Dundies' Jim is wallowing only to be interrupted.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1813 Read Count: 5982 ePub Downloads: 5
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1813 Read Count: 5982 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2009
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Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One.
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One.
Stablergirl, reading you is like doing acid inside a rainbow: it's a flood of wonderful color and metaphor and simile. Thanks for another great trip!
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1270 Read Count: 4945 ePub Downloads: 1
That last Jim and Pam scene in Stress Relief has been playing on my mind since Sunday...and begging me to expand upon it. So here is a little missing scene from Stress Relief.
*Please forgive the uninspired title...it's late.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1270 Read Count: 4945 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2009 Updated: February 04, 2009
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: February 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sounds EXACTLY like Jim Halpert. Well done!
Summary: Set about one month after The Job. Pure, romantic smuff, straight up. Not angsty, not edgy, no apologies.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4118 Read Count: 21608 ePub Downloads: 12
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4118 Read Count: 21608 ePub Downloads: 12
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2009
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Night...
10 Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Night...
Nummy! I like it that he's shaved and showered in anticipation of her coming home, another reminder of how long he waited for her and how precious she (still) is to Jim. And for all that I love the hot-n-heavy stuff, there's something just so sweet about her snuggling up with Jim. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks, NEJ - glad the sweet and snuggly worked for you ;-)
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: ...and Day
Author's Response: I like your 'warm' as a description - just what I hoped. And pleased you liked those lines...the bouncy thing (ahem) - you know, it is a strange gizmo (at least to the female eye), isn't it? Glad I'm not the only one who thinks so, lol. Thanks again, NEJ!
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: ...and Day
sent a warm whiskey wave rushing through her
That's a delightful phrase!
He was just so…buoyant...It’s just the way it popped up, like this bouncy pink jack-in-the-box or something…’
*giggle* Funny. And so true.
he cradled his hand protectively behind it.
Awww. Such a tender gesture, so sweet and sexy!
like a lightning rod for her to break around
Whoa! Sexy! Me likey!
You've captured a nice, warm, sexy moment in the life of these two new lovers. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: I like your 'warm' as a description - just what I hoped. And pleased you liked those lines...the bouncy thing (ahem) - you know, it is a strange gizmo (at least to the female eye), isn't it? Glad I'm not the only one who thinks so, lol. Thanks again, NEJ!
Tesserae by xoxoxo, Colette, sophia_helix, Annabel Winslow, Paper Jam, LoveFool, Sweetpea, thirtypercent, Steph, callisto, Talkative, bashert, Blanca Rated: M [Reviews - 233] 61
61 Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47542 Read Count: 78788 ePub Downloads: 16
A series of Season 5 episode related stories.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47542 Read Count: 78788 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: June 15, 2009 Updated: September 10, 2009
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Weight Loss: Someone Just a Little More Funky by sophia_helix
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Weight Loss: Someone Just a Little More Funky by sophia_helix
God, I'd forgotten how In Sync Holly and Michael were. For one tiny moment, Michael was sympathetic and lovable.
Love the last two lines. I can hear them in my head.
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Business Ethics: Father, Brother, Lover (Dance Instructor) by: Paper Jam
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Business Ethics: Father, Brother, Lover (Dance Instructor) by: Paper Jam
"Jim is rapping on the glass and miming hanging up the phone. Michael gets up and closes the blinds. Jim clearly has no respect for his privacy"
This.
Now I have to go explain to my co-workers why I was guffawing. Yes, I said guffawing. I can just see this happening. Absolutely I can.
Also: How do you feel about mud wrestling?
LOLOL
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Shower: Synchronicity by Blanca
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Shower: Synchronicity by Blanca
I'm always down for a Jim/Pam phone convo, and I really enjoyed this one.
And "So... what are you wearing?" is just as sexy now as it would have been in Season One. :)
However, there IS a small and wicked corner of me that wanted Jim to try on some of Pam's undies. After all, if she can feel sexy and confident in baggy boxers, what would Jim feel like in black lace? :D
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Crime Aid: Oh simple thing, where have you gone? by: thirtypercent
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Crime Aid: Oh simple thing, where have you gone? by: thirtypercent
His inner relationship counselor is a thirteen-year-old girl. That explains a lot of his problems.
LOL! Yeah, it explains a lot. hee!
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Employee Transfer: Louis Armstrong by Annabel Winslow
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Employee Transfer: Louis Armstrong by Annabel Winslow
The "business closings" made me giggle like the twelve year old I am.
You know what really offends me? Your sleeves, rolled up like that all the time. What are you, butchering a chicken?
::snarf::
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Customer Survey: Ain't No Party Like a Scranton Party by: Steph
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Customer Survey: Ain't No Party Like a Scranton Party by: Steph
A-maaaaaazing how well you've caught Kelly here. She's so superficial and yet...not. And you make me feel sorry for her, there at the end when she cannot say no to Ryan, who is SO BAD FOR HER.
*applause*
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Business Trip: If you try sometimes, you get what you need by: Sweetpea
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Business Trip: If you try sometimes, you get what you need by: Sweetpea
It isn't love as much as belonging that he wants.
Nobody can make us weep like a sad buffoon. :(
I also appreciate that you make Michael look like a grownup when he decides to tell David Wallace the truth. Or at least the truth as Michael sees it. And then this heartbreaker:
He loves her and he knows she loves him. They just didn't get the timing right but maybe they will someday.
Talk about shades of S1!