Penname: Comfect Real name:
Member Since: September 14, 2017

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AOTM March 2018
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Reviews by Comfect
Summary: Set in S3, Jim and Pam are forced to interact as an office outing at Poor Richards
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Drug Use/Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1730 Read Count: 1227 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2020 Updated: July 23, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Shots of Karaoke

This is interesting as a one shot. I like Jim being known by everyone there, and I enjoy Pam kissing Dwight's cheek. Good moments throughout.

Summary: At the Company Picnic, Jim has to reunite with the Scranton employees.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1141 Read Count: 972 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2020 Updated: July 24, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Scranton vs Stamford

Oh man. This is a good setup and story, and I can totally see a Dwandy fight in this kind of context. Thanks for sharing!

Summary: Jim is at home sick with a virus (not THE virus...), and sick Jim seems confused about stuff. Which might explain how it comes to be that Pam is in his apartment looking after him, and Karen is selling paper...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47288 Read Count: 12649 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2020 Updated: November 16, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear. I mean, I really like how you're filling in a Karen backstory here and I think it makes her really sympathetic, but holy moley girl see the red flags in front of you and run!

Author's Response:

Quite. She seems smart - it's a bit of a puzzle she allowed herself to get dragged into this. IMO, obvs.   :0)

Thanks for your review, Comfect! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm very much looking forward to the perspective of hallucinatory Jim. This is a really good story so far, especially Pam/Karen, so I'm excited for where you go with it next!

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope hallucinatory Jim worked for you.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well then. Where to start. I love Pam's section most, but honestly all three are great. Good work on getting them all thinking but also SHOWING the thinking, not just implying it. Good work with Tom. I really enjoy this, glad to hear more is on the way (and yes, if you want to cliffhang I personally would appreciate a quick update after).

Author's Response:

Thanks, Comfect! Glad you enjoyed Tom. 

Introspection by Dernhelm Rated: K [Reviews - 6] 6
Summary: The good thing about mirrors is that they always tell the truth. The bad thing is that they never lie. Even if you need some comfort so much. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 459 Read Count: 676 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2020 Updated: July 25, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Mirror, mirror on the wall...

I don't usually like 2nd person but I think this worked. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! 

Summary:

 

Look at this idiotic fool that you made me

You taught me a secret language I can't speak with anyone else

And you know damn well

For you I would ruin myself

...a million little times

 

Song fic based off of illicit affairs by Taylor Swift 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3172 Read Count: 1380 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2020 Updated: July 25, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I was so worried you were going to have Karen there. Instead, I really liked the ending. Good use of canon words in a non-canon moment and good of Jim to listen more than he did in canon.

Summary:


It takes a few endings to get to a beginning. Season 3, but make it exile


(When I was talking about folklore inspiring fics I didn’t mean me, whoops...) 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2452 Read Count: 1366 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2020 Updated: July 25, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice use of a very good song. Glad you were inspired by it!

Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! I feel like there’s plenty of inspiration still to come from Taylor’s latest offering... 

Potential by InAllentown Rated: T [Reviews - 8] 14
Summary:

S3 angst + folklore.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1923 Read Count: 928 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2020 Updated: July 30, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good use of the song. I'm glad to see this song being so inspiring on the board! Well done.

Summary:

 She leaves Phyllis’ wedding reception with Roy and unbeknownst to her the last remnants of her friendship with Jim up and follow them out the door.  


Yes, it’s another Season 3 fix-it... don’t judge me...


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10544 Read Count: 5012 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2020 Updated: August 11, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ouch. Like, good ouch in that it definitely hits that S3 angst pocket, but nonetheless. He's so very prickly. Bad Jim. No biscuit.

Author's Response: No biscuit indeed. He’s definitely not the most endearing version of Jim I’ve ever written... Thanks Comfect! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"She decides that not-Dwight is more of an Andy and she likes him a whole lot less for it. " I loved this line.

Overall, this chapter was a welcome one. I really enjoyed their communication finally, and I hope you continue enjoying writing this!

Author's Response: Comfect, I’m so glad you’ve reappeared (& in a flurry of reviews no less). Can we tell I’m definitely not Andy’s number one fan... 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I loved it! The ending is great. Buty favorite word smithing was "She’s constructed careful barricades around her mind since she realized that Jim hadn’t returned from

Stamford alone. We’re just friends she’s been instructing her brain. His words have to push past the construction before they sink in." Lovely use of the metaphor.

Just in general, top notch all round.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I’m glad my millions of metaphors can still hit the mark from time to time! 

Summary: People don't show up in the small town of Hinton, West Virginia for nothing. Who would want to live in a town as small as this? When Pam Beesly arrives and has an accidental run-in with a local whose tragic backstory leaves him "undesirable," could her own tragic backstory come back to haunt her? AU. TW:DV. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drama, Kids/Family, Romance, Steamy, Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2329 Read Count: 481 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 01, 2020 Updated: August 01, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've never encountered your source material but I'm here for the story. Good setup, nice use of Karen, looking forward to where it goes!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! No worries, I will be straying a bit from the source material, but the plot is very similar. You're not missing anything. I love this Karen, ngl. Thanks again!

Summary:

Sometimes, even the kindest of hearts could get furious.

And Pam had enough. 

Set during 'Phyllis' Wedding.'  


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2778 Read Count: 2319 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2020 Updated: August 06, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Of fire scorching

That last line is excellent. I liked the whole thing (this show could use more honesty!). But the last line was killer.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! 

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Of ashes cooling

I understand why you say it's done, but if you later decided you wanted to show what actually, maturely, fixing it would look like, I wouldn't mind. It's nice to see Pam working out of despair without jumping straight to elation. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Comfect, I truly appreciate your feedback. I'd like to write something like that in the future, but for now, I don't think I'm skillful enough (or mature myself) to make this story realistic and complete. 

5 Years On by onedaymore Rated: M [Reviews - 3] 3
Summary: 5 years after Jim takes the job at corporate and marries Karen, he runs into Pam at a store back in Scranton. What's different? What's the same? I think this idea has been done before, but I wanted to give my own personal take on the concept.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1934 Read Count: 547 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2020 Updated: August 10, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Store In Scranton

I would like to see this continue. There are bits that take me out of the story (moving from NYC to Scranton he'd have more money, since cost of living is lower; Albany/NYC is 100% not a doable commute for a marriage, though I suppose you could use that as a reason it failed). But I like Cassie and I'm interested in where this might go now they've yelled at each other enough to get some truths out.

Neon Moon by beth9501 Rated: T [Reviews - 13] 19
Summary:

Casino night one shot of what happens under the neon moon in Poor Richards. Based on the song Neon Moon by Brooks and Dunn- specifically the version with Kacey Musgraves I heard for the first time last night.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: Country Songs
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1011 Read Count: 1109 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2020 Updated: August 13, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well I did not expect that ending but I did enjoy it. And also the buildup with Jim's thought process, which definitely felt realistic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!

Postcards by BigTuna Rated: K [Reviews - 33] 33
Summary: Every time Michael goes on a trip, he sends Pam a postcard.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Michael, Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 489 Read Count: 6176 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2020 Updated: August 13, 2020
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Atlantic City

Hah. Very much Michael.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Busch Gardens, Virginia

This one Roy would like. But not Jim, no.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Sandals

Heh. "Man." Still quite in character.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Hershey, Virginia

Lol. Mike Teevee, come on guys.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Scranton

So cute. Of course Michael sends to that mailbox.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Niagara

Good idea not to put that in the postcard. Smart, Michael.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Colorado

Aww. Would Holly not sign on too?

Reviewer: Comfect Signed
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Las Vegas

Hah. Get a new user name. But on brand.