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Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Drug Use/Abuse
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1730 Read Count: 1227 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Shots of Karaoke
This is interesting as a one shot. I like Jim being known by everyone there, and I enjoy Pam kissing Dwight's cheek. Good moments throughout.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1141 Read Count: 972 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Scranton vs Stamford
Oh man. This is a good setup and story, and I can totally see a Dwandy fight in this kind of context. Thanks for sharing!
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47288 Read Count: 12649 ePub Downloads: 11
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh dear. I mean, I really like how you're filling in a Karen backstory here and I think it makes her really sympathetic, but holy moley girl see the red flags in front of you and run!
Author's Response:
Quite. She seems smart - it's a bit of a puzzle she allowed herself to get dragged into this. IMO, obvs. :0)
Thanks for your review, Comfect!
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm very much looking forward to the perspective of hallucinatory Jim. This is a really good story so far, especially Pam/Karen, so I'm excited for where you go with it next!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope hallucinatory Jim worked for you.
Date: August 17, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Well then. Where to start. I love Pam's section most, but honestly all three are great. Good work on getting them all thinking but also SHOWING the thinking, not just implying it. Good work with Tom. I really enjoy this, glad to hear more is on the way (and yes, if you want to cliffhang I personally would appreciate a quick update after).
Author's Response:
Thanks, Comfect! Glad you enjoyed Tom.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 459 Read Count: 676 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Mirror, mirror on the wall...
I don't usually like 2nd person but I think this worked. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Look at this idiotic fool that you made me
You taught me a secret language I can't speak with anyone else
And you know damn well
For you I would ruin myself
...a million little times
Song fic based off of illicit affairs by Taylor Swift
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3172 Read Count: 1380 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh I was so worried you were going to have Karen there. Instead, I really liked the ending. Good use of canon words in a non-canon moment and good of Jim to listen more than he did in canon.
It takes a few endings to get to a beginning. Season 3, but make it exile.
(When I was talking about folklore inspiring fics I didn’t mean me, whoops...)
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2452 Read Count: 1366 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Nice use of a very good song. Glad you were inspired by it!
Author's Response: Thanks Comfect! I feel like there’s plenty of inspiration still to come from Taylor’s latest offering...
S3 angst + folklore.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1923 Read Count: 928 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very good use of the song. I'm glad to see this song being so inspiring on the board! Well done.
She leaves Phyllis’ wedding reception with Roy and unbeknownst to her the last remnants of her friendship with Jim up and follow them out the door.
Yes, it’s another Season 3 fix-it... don’t judge me...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10544 Read Count: 5012 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ouch. Like, good ouch in that it definitely hits that S3 angst pocket, but nonetheless. He's so very prickly. Bad Jim. No biscuit.
Author's Response: No biscuit indeed. He’s definitely not the most endearing version of Jim I’ve ever written... Thanks Comfect!
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
"She decides that not-Dwight is more of an Andy and she likes him a whole lot less for it. " I loved this line.
Overall, this chapter was a welcome one. I really enjoyed their communication finally, and I hope you continue enjoying writing this!
Author's Response: Comfect, I’m so glad you’ve reappeared (& in a flurry of reviews no less). Can we tell I’m definitely not Andy’s number one fan...
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I loved it! The ending is great. Buty favorite word smithing was "She’s constructed careful barricades around her mind since she realized that Jim hadn’t returned from
Stamford alone. We’re just friends she’s been instructing her brain. His words have to push past the construction before they sink in." Lovely use of the metaphor.
Just in general, top notch all round.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I’m glad my millions of metaphors can still hit the mark from time to time!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drama, Kids/Family, Romance, Steamy, Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme, Possible Triggers, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2329 Read Count: 481 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 15, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I've never encountered your source material but I'm here for the story. Good setup, nice use of Karen, looking forward to where it goes!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! No worries, I will be straying a bit from the source material, but the plot is very similar. You're not missing anything. I love this Karen, ngl. Thanks again!
Sometimes, even the kindest of hearts could get furious.
And Pam had enough.
Set during 'Phyllis' Wedding.'
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2778 Read Count: 2319 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Of fire scorching
That last line is excellent. I liked the whole thing (this show could use more honesty!). But the last line was killer.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Of ashes cooling
I understand why you say it's done, but if you later decided you wanted to show what actually, maturely, fixing it would look like, I wouldn't mind. It's nice to see Pam working out of despair without jumping straight to elation. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Comfect, I truly appreciate your feedback. I'd like to write something like that in the future, but for now, I don't think I'm skillful enough (or mature myself) to make this story realistic and complete.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1934 Read Count: 547 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: The Store In Scranton
I would like to see this continue. There are bits that take me out of the story (moving from NYC to Scranton he'd have more money, since cost of living is lower; Albany/NYC is 100% not a doable commute for a marriage, though I suppose you could use that as a reason it failed). But I like Cassie and I'm interested in where this might go now they've yelled at each other enough to get some truths out.
Casino night one shot of what happens under the neon moon in Poor Richards. Based on the song Neon Moon by Brooks and Dunn- specifically the version with Kacey Musgraves I heard for the first time last night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: Country Songs
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1011 Read Count: 1109 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Well I did not expect that ending but I did enjoy it. And also the buildup with Jim's thought process, which definitely felt realistic.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading!
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Michael, Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 489 Read Count: 6176 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Atlantic City
Hah. Very much Michael.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Busch Gardens, Virginia
This one Roy would like. But not Jim, no.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Sandals
Heh. "Man." Still quite in character.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Hershey, Virginia
Lol. Mike Teevee, come on guys.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Scranton
So cute. Of course Michael sends to that mailbox.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Niagara
Good idea not to put that in the postcard. Smart, Michael.
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Colorado
Aww. Would Holly not sign on too?
Date: August 16, 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Las Vegas
Hah. Get a new user name. But on brand.