A young nurse who still dreams of being a writer someday. And being married to John Krasinski.
Roy cannot lean like Jim, and Karen cannot prank like Pam. It's just my opinion, but it's true.
The aftermath of Cocktails (NOT part of my AU universe).
10 YAY!!!! THANK YOU! at least someone's listening to what the people want! this was awesome lovefool. very different from your usual fluff, but absolutely terrific job!
Author's Response: yay!!! So glad you liked it! I wish the OFFICE would GIVE THE PEOPLE WHAT THEY WANT ALREADY!!!
MEMBER'S CHOICE - "You've felt unsettled all weekend, and as your mother's words come crashing down around you, you have the uncanny feeling that you knew this was coming."your imagery is simply beautiful. you really get lost in the moment. great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 Moxie. i know i can always count on you to make my days just a little brighter! your five things are woven in so seamlessly, i forgot to look for them and had to reread! which of course, was no problem for me. ^_^ i love this because i can see it happening! now don't you feel better knowing you've made the (Office) world a better place?
btw, this line:
"You are in love with Jim." Dwight said it more as a statement-of-fact than a question.
that got me right here. wow.
10 YAY FOR FLUFF!! awesome improve, was trying to guess which were the five items, and i was completely off on some of them, so, great job on weaving them in! i love the thought of pam bonding with larissa. just beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! Sorry to trick you but I'm glad you couldn't tell - I was a tad worried. :)
10 oh, colette! this was absolutely precious! it's nearly impossible to go wrong with a JAM baby in my book, but all the background and the songs just puts this WAAAAY over the top and in a whole 'nother league! i LOVE the song "if i loved you" (yes, i'm a corny showtunes girl myself), and "i will" makes me melt into a little puddle (seriously, you can't go wrong with the beatles)! this was just the fix i needed...
Author's Response: So glad you knew the songs (wondered if many would)...how could I not go all sentimental, using them as inspiration? Thanks so much for the generous review!
9 Yay! Great job with those prompts! And wow.. I've never read a Pam/Toby story.. different, but I like!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've always been a fan of Pam/Toby and I don't recall there being any Pam/Toby married fics. Everything is always overshadowed by Jim and Toby kind of knowing he's a second choice. I thought Happy!Toby would be a nice change, but I feel he sounds a lot like Jim at times. He's kind of difficult to write since we don't know how he behaves too much outside of the office. So hopefully it's a first of its kind!
Jim would like to accomplish a few cynical asperations.
9 OUCH!! This hurts so much! And yet, I really really like it...
10 Awww...Jim really does need to get a clue... stupid men.. Great job with hitting two challenges at once! Very impressive! And yes, Leon needs to slip that DVD to Jim because, as he said, "Those two need a freakin' bulldozer."
Author's Response: LOL! I don't think Leon really wants to lose his job. Although, if one of the camera crew got fired, they might slip some footage to one of the victims...interesting idea for someone else to write...:D
A visit from Sasha, a secret code, and some tummyweather. Slightly angsty, but ends with the promise of fluff. Some spoilers for "Business School".
10 I REALLY like this. I fell in love with Sasha in "Take Your Daughter to Work Day," and I really love how you portrayed her. Funny how sometimes kids can provide so much insight!
Author's Response: oh, i know. i based her on my little brother, who's the same way. mostly just cute, but every now and then, he just says the most unbelievably smart things. like, what the hell? :0) thank you so much!
12 The beginning of Dwight and Jim's relationship, from their very first sales call together up to their latest. Spoilers through Traveling Salesmen.
10 This was too much fun to read! Awesome job you guys! I like the idea that once upon a time, Jim actually liked his job. ^_^
They've been here before. Jim and Pam and their parking lot stuff. 10 I was so sure you were gonna have Pam say, "I just want you to be happy," and let him marry Karen! This hurts so much, but it's so beautiful, and the ending is just breathtaking, and wow, I really love your writing.
Something has changed. Takes place between Email Surveillance and Christmas Party. 10 Loved it! How I wish Jim gave her that card!
Author's Response: Thank you! If only Jim had given her that card....or let the audience know what he wrote in it. ;)
9 I felt really guilty about liking this--actually felt like I was cheating on JAM!--then I got to the last line, and felt better. ^_^ Beautiful. It takes a lot for me to like a Jim/Karen fic!
10 YAY!!! Ryan/Kelly! Seriously great job with your five, sure didn't pick them out! And in just over an hour? Crazy good! Oh, and of course bonus points for throwing in the little Karim breakup fact! ^_^
10 i like it, honestly. it works for me. it's nice to see a JAM story where she bows out gracefully. and yes, you need an epilogue.. because i wanna read more!! ^_^
10 oooh.. i like!!! i like that karen and pam are friends, that karen helps pick out the ring, and that karen accidentally spills the beans! Great ending! hehe.. yay for fluff!
10 AAGGH!!! she touched his boxers! why am i squealling like an elementary school girl?! ok.. i'm calm. seriously, please write more, and quickly!
Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. HOLY HELL IS RIGHT!!!! again, i love you. and, (please don't hate me for this) but Matthew Czerny is HOT. ^_^ but i refuse to say he's hotter than Jim, that's just wrong. oh, and btw, i LOVE that you/Jim came up with the name Czerny, that was the name of the composer of my first "real" piano piece! ah, memories..
Ok, i was feeling really crappy, but WHOA!!!!! ALL BETTER NOW!!!! So giddy, i KNEW pam was too smart to not know! i KNEW IT!! and are you vexin? i wanna know! i just wanna know who vexin is! seriously, as i saw the side bar get closer and closer to the bottom of the screen, i was like, NO!!!!!! oh, if this is the result of you taking time to post, TAKE AS MUCH TIME AS YOU NEED!!!!
this vexin character is killing me! it's you isn't it? who is it!?!?!?! i wanna know! and i'm pretty sure pam doesn't know anymore.. gah.. i'm dying.. love it as usual... still, i'm dying...
I LOVE YOU!!!! What a weird name for a color.. and how ironic.. John's "favorite" vegetable. So sneaky, Mox! I LOVE IT!!!
Aw, Moxie! I can't put my finger on it, but something about this chapter really touched me. I'm actually crying as I type this! Thank you!
10 *sigh* Awesome. Just... awesome. Love every word. Love Vixen Pam, love Jim, love the pizzas, everything. But I ESPECIALLY love those PJ's! Thanks to you, my friends give me weird looks because of the girly sqees whenever I see or hear anything squirrel-related.
There is more coming, right? Right?
10 oh, i loved it, of course... but i'm so sad to see it's ending! can't we just make it go on and on forever? please? i had to hold back the tears when i reached the end!
and that's right, fondle is so much better than grope. ^_^
"Okay, but I'm going to love you tomorrow, too."
THUD. *Paramedics begin CPR on Starshine, successfully reviving her. she sits up and giggles like a mad... squirrel*