Michael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.um... wow. this is the first time ever i've been tempted to cheer for something besides Jam... that was amazing. right now, there really aren't words. this fic is so not what i was expecting, but i really like how it's turning out. i'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. it feels like there are so many options. i mean what happens when they get back to the office? what about kelly? and karen? and just... gah. i can't wait for the next update. you're awesome. it's good to let fancy new beesly out to play. she's a fun girl. you're doing a great job. keep up the amazing writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you said all that because I'd hate for the story to be ruined for people just because its not full-on JAMmy.
That was such a surprise! Pam taking an internship alone in New York. Wow. I'm really sad that Jam is falling apart, but I have to say I've become a fan of your Ryan. He's pretty amazing. This story just keeps progressing in all kinds of interesting new ways :)
keep up the great work. I love it!
SO SWEET! what a great way to end a wonderful fic! it's so awesome that Pam can become a haven for someone else to talk them out of the hole they've put themself in. i love Heather's character, even though it's so opposite of where Pam was, there's such a strong parallel. great job! i hate that it's over!
Author's Response: Sorry I somehow missed responding to this sooner. Thanks so much for thie kind review. I had this ending in mind before I started. I may come back to this little universe and check up on Heather and Mr. and Mrs. Halpert at some point.
GAH! best. cliffhanger. EVER!!! you're updating again in, what? 5 minutes???
seriously though, this is a really great fic so far. i like your writing style. you captured my attention from the very beginning. great job.
Michael’s leaning forward on his elbows, staring at her across his desk. “That was definitely heroic and, if I may say so, romantical of you. Well done.” While he shoots her what is meant to be a congratulatory grin, Pam stares down at the teal glass shards in her laps, still clutching the ice pack, trying desperately to pretend that the tears have stopped.
Post-Cocktails.
oh my goodness!!! drama!!! i want to say that i can't believe Jim would be this mean to Pam, but after The Negotiation... who knows. anyway, it's great. thanks for keeping me on the edge of my seat.
and i get what Pam's saying with the love and hate at the same time. i'm feeling a little of that for Jim Halpert myself right about now.
Five different scenarios in which our man finds out Pam is pregnant.the perfect way to finish it :) way to go!!!
Author's Response: Yay, thanks!!! I'm glad people like it...I was afraid it would be too sappy!
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“God, Jim. There’s been an…there was an accident and…Roy came back and he got upset and…God, he shot Della Jim, Roy shot her.” And suddenly Jim’s not even breathing.
wow. what a "resolution." seriously though. awesome! i love it! it was a wonderful ending to a great story. i mean, how else does a Jam baby story end except for Jim and Pam together? but you did a great job of making this new and interesting. I love how he's immediately shocked and even though they're so in love they are all about not communicating effectively. you got the characters perfectly! great job.
my heart just shattered into a million little pieces. oh goodness... poor jim. it's not his fault!! roy's just crazy! oh please tell me adele's ok??? you are gonna keep going with this yeah?
Post The Negotiation (no spoilers).
My attempt at working it all out. This will span ten chapters and will include flashbacks to previous episodes/seasons.
i love this so much. but especially that last line! oh my goodness! so good!!! thanks for finishing it off beautifully.
Pam and Jim decide to get it out of their system...Literally. This idea just wouldn't get out of head, especially after all the fight fics, I figure there has to be another way to get rid of the sexual tension- why not actual 'casual' sex. Oh and it's going to really backfire. P.S. This is way fluffier than my usual stuff AND almost finished too. So there's that.
i completely forgot that we've been privy to Jim's thoughts this whole time, but Pam has no idea that he's having a GREAT time! gosh... you're great at sucking us into the story. anyway, it's amazing and i can't wait to see how you show Pam that Jim is oh-so-in-love with her :)
Crossover between the Saw movies and The Office. The Jigsaw killer kidnaps Jim and puts him to a horrific test. Like all games with this deranged killer, however, there are cruel twists waiting at every juncture. Updated CH4 -- Everyone is in a tough spot-- How does it all end?
wow. i was terrified to read this, i didn't know if i would like it, but i just read it all at once and now i'm glad i did b/c no cliffhangers. that was so amazing. moving in so many ways. i wanted to cry and scream and i gasped out loud a few times. great job. good story.
21 ABSOLUTELY PRECIOUS! oh my goodness i needed some light fluffy happiness this morning and you definately delivered. thanks. i love that she forgot she had him on the mailing list. it just goes to show that he wasn't as removed from her life as she thought he was :)
Author's Response: Heh... I'm glad that this story made your morning. Yeah, I checked my mailing group after I wrote this and realize that I had a certain someone still on it... Oops... Heh...
WONDERFUL!!! Michael and David dressed up at the end is PRICELESS!
What can you do, she thought. That’s Michael. He was ready to celebrate because while up on the roof, he had stared death right in the eyes, and death blinked. This called for a celebration. ....pure fluff. SPOILERS for SAFETY TRAINING.
ok this fic has several intriguing elements:
1. no karen!!! essential for good jam
2. a moon bounce = soft cushy place for jim and pam to... bounce around hehe
3. drunk!pam :) we know how that usually ends up!
i'm looking forward to this... more please?
He should've been happy that Karen had finally warmed up to his joking ways. He wasn't.it was wonderful!
wait... it's 5:01... and we have to wait all weekend for your next update? what? j/k i'm just anxiously awaiting your return so you can get back to the important things, like Jim and Pam's love life!
it's a wonderfully written story. you did a great job capturing their characters in this chapter!
the kiss is absolutely perfect. i kind of love the fact that there's no sex. no i REALLY love it. i mean honestly, i can't really see Jim and Pam ripping each other's clothes off in the first ten minutes they're alone together. especially not in the office. it's wonderful! i love that she's such a tease. :) they're just precious. i can totally see this conversation happening. ok i'll stop with the huge review and just remind you that i love it!
SO SO SO SO SO SO SO PRECIOUS! Jim Dear? so sweet. oh i love these two. you got it just right. congratulations and thankyou!
Author's Response: Yay--thank you!!
"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
oh my goodness... my heart breaks AGAIN reading this. i just can't imagine... and jim's trying to be so strong but he's so hurt. and realizing that he was a jerk... i'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. this is wonderfully heartbreaking.
oh my gosh. wow. that was... intense. i mean, i hate to say i love this story, but it's so well written i just can't help it. you've made it seem so real and scary and... just... wow. i knew that when jim found out he'd blame himself. i just feel sorry for pam even more now b/c he's going to want to push her into talking about it. this is going great places and i'm enjoying it.
woah. good stuff. he just woke up all of a sudden and for a second there i couldn't decide whether he was dying or waking up. great job with that chapter.
wow! where are you going with this? i can't wait to find out. your writing is SO beautiful!
aww i love that last line. she would definately be what keeps him from the nothing.
Jim needs a second opinion about a song he heard.
Based on a challenge from the TWoP forums to write something based on the line, "You don't do it on purpose but you make me shake." General season 3 spoilers.
i REALLY love this! *sigh* there's nothing else to say. it's simply wonderful.
i really love it. we've always wondered what it was that first drew her to roy and what kept her there. this is a great explanation. as a sister, i feel pam's pain.