Post-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
10 wow! Not just one, but two updates, all in the course of a week? I didn't think Christmas came this early in the year... :)
I will be sad to see this dear story go! I have to admit, it was the one that got me hooked on JAM fanfiction in the first place! I started reading this one over at fanfiction.net, and you recommended that I come over here! I owe my addiction to you!
I do hope you are still planning on writing a sequel. I just love the way you write them so well in this story...
10 I'm so sad to see this story go! I hope you write a sequel someday! I feel like this story has been such a big part of me for so long!
10 Pardon me while I do a happy dance...
I was beginning to wonder if you had forgotten this dear ol' story...
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! Always love seeing new chapters of this story!
9 That was probably one of the cutest things that I have ever read! I really think that you portrayed them quite well, and definitely stayed with their characters.
Jim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward? 10 of course you have me addicted to another one of your stories! I almost do a little happy dance when I see you've updated this story! Even though I'm pretty sure it's Pam sending the presents, I'm still eagerly awaiting the unveiling!
YAY!
10 As always, what an amazing chapter, and well worth the wait!
How on earth could you have been worried! This was absolutely fantastic!
While I loved the shower scene, and the well written ending, I have to say my favorite was Jim's awkwardness in the kitchen. So cute!
Absolutely can't wait for the ending! (although I'm going to be said to see this one go...)
Per nomadshan's planting the irresistible notion in my head of writing an Out of Control Jim story (along with encouragement from other posters at TWoP - you know who you are).... This is an exploration of what could happen if (when?) Jim and Pam were pushed to the point of losing all control.
wow. That was so incredibly intense. I can't WAIT to see angry Pam!
8 oh wow! What a fabulous beginning! I would love to hear about Jim's perspective, and then I think from Karen's. That's such a shocking way for her to find out the truth, I would love to hear her take on it!
10 oh how sad! I'm so glad you updated, I have been wondering about this fic! Please continue soon!
Good for Jim! Because who has two thumbs and hates Todd Packer?
<---- This girl!
Ugh, that guy is so annoying, and just crass... I think you portrayed him quite accurately!
Can't wait to see where this little trip to Florida will take us!
oh that's just brilliant...
Written in response to the Evening Coming (aka the Scarf) challenge. Not usually one for prompts, but this one got me thinking.
10 I have to say that this is so incredibly well written! Definitely my favorite of all of the scarf submissions. Just touching and sad when she's by herself with the scarf, and so beautiful and fulfilling when they are together and it's literally the scarf that breaks their barrier!
Fabulous!
My comment would be in regards to formatting. I'm kind of a stickler on formatting the story so that it's slightly easier to read...
Other than that, pretty good start!
Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
So not cool... :)
Author's Response: ;) That may be one of the nicest reviews I ever got. Have you considered writing haikus? You have a way with words.
Pam finally gets pushed over the edge when it comes to Jim and his new girlfriend. Post-Ben Franklin. oh wow. That was intense! That was so hard to read Pam's heart practically breaking!
ugh, I need a tissue...
It all starts at Phyllis' Wedding. Jim and Pam's lives completely change after they've both moved on....to New York City, that is.
10 Nope, nope, nop!
Nope, sorry! You simply CAN NOT leave it there!
That was seriously one of the most heart wrenching stories I think that I have read here!
Pardon me, while I grab a tissue...
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!! You're comment made me smile. I appreciate all the support here on MTT! You all are great. I hope to be writing another chapter to this story so keep an eye out. Your review was great. Thanks!
Becky
Eight years has passed since Jim and Pam have spoken. Many things have changed in their lives including a little girl that captures their hearts.
9 I am really enjoying this story. Very sweet! Sad that they didn't talk for so long, and it upsets me that Pam had married another, but at least JAM have found their way back to another!
Okay, I have been reading all along and I'm so lazy I haven't reviewed! I'm sorry!
But, just wanted you to know that I am loving this story! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Especially Jim's little tease at the end...
Keep up the good work!
10 AH! So NOT where I was expecting this chapter to end up!
10 Okay, as a fellow Alias lover, this is cracking me up! I love that you set this at Season 2, because that was the best season BY FAR! And Sark? Words cannot express how much I LOVE HIM!
I am hoping that Michael somehow destroys the manuscript page (or at least inadvertantly foils Sark...) and that Pam's little bad-boy crush on Sark provokes Jim into some action!
Although, chosing between Sark and Jim? That's a tough call...
oooh, that was such a great tease! I can't wait to see how Jim explains that... Can't wait to read more!
Of course I want you to continue! I want to see where you take this!
I think it's an excellent beginning!
Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. 10 Mox! I seriously think I am going to burn a hole in my stomach, i'm so eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Definitely my new favorite story (but then, I'm not really surprised by that...)
10 Aw! That's cute! I was so happy to see you had updated!
10 YAYYYYYY!!!!!! I was SO happy to see you had updated already! They are just too cute!
I hope you are feeling better by the way!