Penname: Invisiblecynic Real name: Lisa Verger
Member Since: November 23, 2020

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i don't know about you, but i'm feeling 2022 by Coley Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 13
Summary: A totally normal and not creepy New Year's Eve Party at Dunder Mifflin. Written for the 2021 Secret Santa Fanfic Exchange.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Secret Santa Fic Exchange 2021
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5104 Read Count: 1088 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2022 Updated: January 30, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: January 31, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fun from start to finish! This would've made a great episode. The key party made me nervous but of course Jim made sure he & Handsy New Beesly ended up together.

Cupid's Sparrow by WanderingWatchtower Rated: K [Reviews - 99] 53
Summary: Funny little bird, but he gets the job done.

A Dunder Mifflin Valentine's story, as told by none other than Cupid himself.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16487 Read Count: 9633 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2022 Updated: March 01, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: February 03, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: An Introduction

This is a Cupid that I'd love to have drinks with, maybe slip a sparrow or two in my pocket.

The way you slip canon in, fill in their backstories, tug at the heartstrings and make it all hilarious is brilliant.

from the perspective of by BigTuna Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 15
Summary: A series of: thoughts, drabble, maybe poems? From the perspective of—
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drabble, Poetry
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 361 Read Count: 1330 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2022 Updated: April 19, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed
Date: February 02, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Pam

I've read this twice, so far, and I kind of wish that I hadn't seen in tonight because it hit me so hard.

When I saw it was yours, I couldn't wait until tomorrow.

I love it, I hate it, I feel it.

Now I will search frantically for some fluff.

Author's Response: I know exactly how you feel. I am sorry to give a gut punch but also is it mean of me to say that that?s the reaction I wanted? Either way, I hope the fluff you find is the fluffiest, and thank you.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: April 25, 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Jim

Poignant, heart-wrenching, such beautiful melancholy. Again I might add.

Keep them coming.

How the Tables Have Turned by FireGuy Rated: MA [Reviews - 17] 13
Summary:

A glimpse into the story at Benihana Christmas and what unfolds after.

My stories are always quasi-canon compliant. Don't come at me! 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6482 Read Count: 4776 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2022 Updated: March 09, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: March 08, 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'd like to knock their heads together but mostly Jim's. Season 3 Jim was difficult to stomach at times. Cannot wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I agree, season 3 Jim is such a sad sack. Ugh, I can't take it!

Up in the Air by WanderingWatchtower Rated: K [Reviews - 71] 78
Summary: "Make music with the chatter in here
And whisper all the notes in my ear."
-Oviedo -- Blind Pilot

An Airport AU.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Travel
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18625 Read Count: 5157 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2022 Updated: December 16, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: December 03, 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So sweet and that kiss! Perfection. I was really happy to see an update and it didn't disappoint.

Looking forward to the next chapter, not looking forward to the story ending.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: May 10, 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok,I may ne used to mood swings (along with hot flashes) but that my dear, gave me emotional whiplash! Yay, he's going after her!! How romantic and ballsy! Oh crap, who is THAT with Pam? Just hope it isn't Roy. It is, it's Roy isn't it? Then Karen? Ooof.

Kelly as a flight attendant was brilliant, Jim & Pam's banter, Pam falling asleep on Jim, loved it all.

I am so looking forward to what comes next.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed
Date: April 11, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Who knew an airport could be this intriguing? This setup is fantastic, believable, and they are recognizable, no small feat. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter (or 20). For some reason I'd like a pickpocket to swipe Jim's phone. I have the feeling the caller is going to throw a wrench into this budding friendship.

Always laugh at the Mavis Beacon line. More please!

Hello Daddy by MrsKHalpert Rated: MA [Reviews - 237] 122 New!
Summary: When these two CEOs meet, they'll create more than just a business deal.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 166432 Read Count: 35880 ePub Downloads: 26
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2022 Updated: March 01, 2024
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: April 25, 2022 Title: Chapter 2: The Pitch

Oh I am enjoying this!! Everyone's personality and dialogue is right on the money. Stories where Kelly, Angela, and Pam are a team or friends & are among my favorites. The dynamic between the three is a blast.

So many good things here. Love the Karen shutdown! Jim & Pam hitting it off, the banter, and the bet are all gold. It is also nice that Pam & Jim are on equal footing, running successful businesses.

Excited for chapter 3!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I’m so happy you’re enjoying this!

Chapter 3 shouldn’t be too far away

Thanks so much for the review! 

More by Maxine Abbott Rated: T [Reviews - 7] 9
Summary: With the wedding approaching, Pam and Jim make a big decision.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Niagara Ten
Series: Gold Mine
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3929 Read Count: 1098 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2022 Updated: May 05, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: May 10, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Hug and Rock

So sweet, funny & JAMmy. Love their give and take, the amount of thought they (you) put into their choices. Really enjoyed this.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Invisiblecynic. 

Always so nice to hear from my fellow Jam fans. 

I had a lot of fun going through the songs  -so many good 'Jams' for a first dance. 

Thanks again!!! 

Death First by Rach3l Rated: MA [Reviews - 13] 17
Summary:

An unexpected threat surfaces, testing Jim and Pam's deepening bond in ways neither could have anticipated. Just how far do they need to go to outrun their troubles? How far can they go?

AU: Cameras, cameras everywhere, with a far more sinister purpose. Set in a dystopian version of America. The people aren't taking it lying down!

*Book 3 in the Freedom First trilogy. This story picks up after Safety First. If you haven't read the series, this installment may fall short of sensical.*


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: David Wallace, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Steamy, Suspense, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: Give Us Liberty or Give Us Death
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23761 Read Count: 1634 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2022 Updated: October 19, 2023
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: July 24, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So excited to see this. Your fics are among my favorites and this gives me a great reason to revisit them (again). Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Heart heart heart

Right Now by ThePinkButterfly Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 17
Summary: The year leading up to Jim’s proposal. Written in second person because I don’t know how to do anything else anymore.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 601 Read Count: 654 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 16, 2022 Updated: August 16, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: August 17, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just lovely, gooey, fluffy, PB&J goodness from start to finish. Thoroughly enjoyed as I have everything you have written.

The Beacon by warrior4 Rated: M [Reviews - 19] 23
Summary: Pam sets out a guiding light to bring Jim home. Written for the 2022 Christmas story exchange.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kevin, Roy
Genres: Drama, Fluff, Holiday, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: Holiday Fic Challenge 2022, Hope in the Dark
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10909 Read Count: 1947 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2022 Updated: December 29, 2022
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: December 17, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Set the Lay

Great start! Pam is right, Stamford Jim did not seem very happy. Almost everything about him seemed muted. She can recognize the flashes of Scranton Jim when she sees them so she knows he's in there.

Kevin characterization was brilliant.
Looking forward to more I'd this story!

Author's Response: Stamford Jim had good reason to be dull and muted. Looks like it's up to Pam to bring some more light to him. Glad you liked Kevin, he can be fun to bring in from time to time. Thanks for the review!

Exorcism by Yeza Rated: M [Reviews - 4] 3
Summary: Jim dealing with his feelings for Pam
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3673 Read Count: 532 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2023 Updated: February 04, 2023
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: February 06, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this a lot. I also have a bit of a problem with season 3 & 9 Jim, LOL.

Author's Response:

Yes, Jim has a dark side, right?

Thanks por your review! 

Number One Day by Thats what she said Rated: K+ [Reviews - 6] 9
Summary: Jim and Pam talk on the phone after their first 'real' date.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 540 Read Count: 712 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 05, 2023 Updated: February 06, 2023
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: February 06, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was adorable and something I could imagine happening.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you thought it was adorable.

You Oughta Know by grc73 Rated: M [Reviews - 34] 31
Summary: Been sitting on this for a while. 

Set late(ish) -S3, possibly after Cocktails/The Negotiation (post Pam splitting up with Roy mk.II)

A bit steamy and a bit sweary at points. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Isabel Poreba, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Mark, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drama, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9981 Read Count: 3109 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2023 Updated: January 03, 2024
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: June 12, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh this is off to a great start. Season 3 Jim was kind of a dick. Pam had every reason to think he wouldn't want to hear from her due to how he left. It was a great song choice. He did move on awfully quick for a guy in love. Can't wait for this conversation! #TeamPam

Author's Response: Thank you IC and I agree! I'm #TeamPam too!

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed
Date: June 25, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another great chapter! Jim will have more to think about later then hot, clothed, wall sex (HCWS). Hopefully he remembers all that was said and not just HCWS. When the chapter ended where it did I was as frustrated as Dwight with a stapler stuck in jello. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, Jim's thinking very hard (TWSS) about the HCWS. And an old friend is going to help him... (no, not like that; talk therapy!)

A Movie Script Ending by Coley Rated: M [Reviews - 8] 18
Summary: Jim and Pam go to a concert. Things happen.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2580 Read Count: 612 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2023 Updated: June 18, 2023
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: June 20, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am extremely excited to see something new from you and this didn't disappoint. This was so cute and so "them". Pam's a really good dancer? Yes please. Hot yet vaguely uncomfortable car sex? Yup, want that too.

Reading this prompted me to reread your other stories. I have hope that we may see new chapters for the incomplete fics as well as more of concert Jim & Pam.

little indulgences by onedaymore Rated: M [Reviews - 5] 5 New!
Summary: Wrong person. Right time? Cross-posted on AO3.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jan, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael/Jan
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4441 Read Count: 222 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2024 Updated: March 26, 2024
Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: little indulgences

This was really well done. You write them in a way that's easily recognizable as their characters. I think they both would've had to have been very drunk to get to this point. Jan is attractive but kind of terrifying. I can't help but wonder what would've happened in this world you created if Pam had decided to drive over to his place to ask Jim to give her time or talk about things.