Penname: MissCorporate Real name:
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Spare by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 16
Summary: In bowling, a spare is a chance for completion.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594 Read Count: 2995 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2006 Updated: July 10, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed
Date: July 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An idyllic day for Jim and Pam with a bittersweet ending. Good one!

Summary: Jim and Pam find themselves alone. Responding to the Confined Spaces challenge.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3355 Read Count: 3456 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2006 Updated: July 12, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed
Date: June 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very entertaining. Be careful with switching into the present tense if the story is written in the past. Easy to picture Pam from episode 2x06 here.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim reflects on losing something that isn't his to lose. Post Casino Night.



Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 678 Read Count: 2511 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2006 Updated: July 14, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: May 23, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Marvellous imagery and prose. An incredible glimpse into this popular episode. Wel done!

Reality by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 13] 12
Summary: The documentary has aired, and Jim has found a new way to use his time.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: Reality TV Hit
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1029 Read Count: 2757 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

VERY clever and funny!

Author's Response: Thank you! This was a very early effort. I'm not sure it entirely works but I still like the idea behind it. 

The Umbrella by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 24
Summary: Jim and Pam run an errand.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: None
Challenges: Confined Spaces, Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1254 Read Count: 3486 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 17, 2006 Updated: July 17, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The smile mentioned here reminded me of when Pam condemned Jim to more chatter from Kelly in 'Drug Testing'. Very in character. The POVs were kind of mixed, but I guess that's not a big problem in such a short piece. Nice job!

Author's Response: I think this was the second Office fic I ever wrote, so I"m not surprised that I wasn't yet good at POV. I remember trying to mimic the style of an episode, which is something I mostly abandoned over the years. 

In His Space by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 30] 35
Summary: Past Featured StoryA oneshot, inspired by the photo in Jane magazine (imagining, of course, that it's of Pam, not Jenna F.)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1722 Read Count: 7183 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2006 Updated: July 26, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: July 05, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A nice glimpse into one of the little moments that keeps the magic going between Jim and Pam.

Shipwrecked by Jodithgrace Rated: T [Reviews - 4] 5
Summary: Five days surrounding the events of The Booze Cruise.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Katy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Jam Sessions
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10288 Read Count: 16752 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2006 Updated: August 09, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: February 23, 2023 Title: Chapter 5: January 19, 2006

I thoroughly enjoyed reading these insights into the tragic Booze Cruise episode. The lawyer jokes and email exchanges were priceless. The only feedback I would give concerns taking care with the dialogue tags and reducing the summary for big scenes. I understand that it's difficult to avoid repetition with that crucial scene in Booze Cruise, but I still thought that some repetition of the events in real-time would be effective for capturing Jim's heartbreak. I am very impressed with all the additional details about Jim's life and Pam as well. The banter was very much in character. Nice on!

Summary:

It's the hottest June on record and desperate times call for desperate measures. 

I don't know exactly where to place this story.  It's June - but Pam definitely isn't married and Jim hasn't said anything.  So maybe June of Season 1?  Just work w/me people. :)


Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4746 Read Count: 6558 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2006 Updated: September 05, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: April 12, 2023 Title: Chapter 3: The Party's Over :(

That was an entertaining Office adventure and very easy to picture. Only thing I would say is just a quick post-publication edit to correct the dialogue tag punctuation. Another drunk kiss from Pam and Jim's flustered reaction was fantastic.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim's thoughts...pre-Casino Night.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2204 Read Count: 8729 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2006 Updated: August 15, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: September 10, 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a marvellous and intricate character portrait of Pam Beesly, which could only have come from the perspective of Jim Halpert, the man who loves detail. Will be reading this many times to help my own characterisation of both these characters. I admire how you've got a combination of details explicitly mentioned in canon mixed in with characteristics that we could reasonably infer based on small details in canon episodes. This is an amazing character vignette, which has given me good ideas for my own work. Great job!

Summary: Pam and Jim celebrate. They have no idea who is listening.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Roy
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Overheard
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1040 Read Count: 4180 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You can't read this and not feel bad for Roy here. So, a bittersweet read. The only thing I would say here is that lines with Roy's POV were sometimes mingled with the dialogue from Jim and Pam, so a separation would have been clearer to read. I enjoyed the marriage twist at the end, but, as I said, painful for Roy.

Author's Response: I always thought that the show did a good job of mixing comedy with a whole range of other emotions. "Bittersweet" is exactly what I was going for. Thanks for reading and replying!

Summary: Jim is homesick, but he harbors a secret.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 Read Count: 2505 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: September 27, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: The letter

The letter by Pam was definitely true to her voice, heartfelt and romantic. Great job!

Author's Response: MissCorporate, I'm so sorry I didn't respond when you were reviewing back in March. I really appreciate your reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed these old pieces of mine-- this show was very special to me. 

Pretty by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 16
Summary:

He had come here to make a fresh start, so he decided to make an effort.  Spoilers through "The Coup," unspoiled speculation thereafter.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532 Read Count: 1233 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2006 Updated: October 06, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed
Date: March 25, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great glimpse into the combination of attraction and restraint that Jim showed towards Karen. I totally reject the idea that Jim just used her. For sure, he was wrong, but he was genuinely attracted to Karen and he genuinely liked her as a person. It's what makes the demise of their relationship so sad. I definitely caught those lustful looks that Karen gave to Jim. They were an enjoyable aspect of early Season 3. You definitely captured the fact that Karen's only major problem was not being Jim's true love.

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's exactly what I was going for (I think. It was a long time ago!). Had Jim never come back to Scranton, things might still have fallen apart for Jim & Karen, but there was just no hope for her with Pam right. there. I find myself having a lot more compassion on Karen now than I did when I was actively rooting for her to get hit by a bus to get her out of the way...ha.

 

Summary: There are but two things that get Jim through a workday: abusing Dwight and making Pam smile.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 426 Read Count: 1440 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2006 Updated: October 17, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: February 18, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hilarious!

Summary: Jim's back in Scranton, but he and Pam are worlds apart. What do you do when you can't seem to talk to each other anymore?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3463 Read Count: 6892 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2006 Updated: October 18, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: July 10, 2023 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I enjoyed this!

Consolation by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 24] 19
Summary: When the person you love is marrying someone else, sometimes you need someone to drink with.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 462 Read Count: 2262 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2006 Updated: October 24, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

VERY clever! I usually prefer given names at the beginning of a story, but I can see why it was necessary to omit this. Good one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I went through a phase of trying to be tricky. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

Summary: Five Things Jim and Pam Do Not Speak About. Inspired by a line from Rose's fic, "A Visit From Auntie Flo"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Humor, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1404 Read Count: 9994 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: May 03, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A great representation of the barriers in Jim and Pam's friendship. Will be using this for ideas going forward. I would just advise rereading this to correct the dialogue punctuation. Great piece!

Summary:

No couples perfect. Sometimes they disagree on things. But some things...it doesn't really matter.


Categories: Future, Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1175 Read Count: 3772 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2006 Updated: November 27, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: May 03, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Five Things Jim and Pam (do )don't get along on

A lively and hilarious portrait of Jim and Pam's relationship. I'd just draw attention to the tense issues in section 4. Otherwise, it made me laugh a lot.

Summary: Throughout her life, Pam has some experiences that make her dislike certain things, all of which Jim used as ammunition in "The Convict"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1060 Read Count: 2177 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2006 Updated: December 04, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: May 03, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Five Things

I found this very funny!

Vignettes II by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 41] 13
Summary:

A few light bits and pieces I'd accumulated (have written enough angst lately, thanks.) Since they were just languishing, I figured I'd resurrect Vignettes and send them out into the world. Each is a stand-alone, NOT a chapter in a work-in-progress, so feel free to jump in and out. (I'm thinking there will be 3-5 pieces, but will have to see how the mood strikes me.)

If I owned these characters, would I be writing this stuff? Seriously. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3971 Read Count: 10732 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2006 Updated: January 02, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: January 09, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Birthday Cake

Ah, yes, the birthday suit image is very a propos! A funny chapter!

Summary: The revelation of the truth makes things far less easy to understand. Set during "The Secret"

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1405 Read Count: 1938 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2006 Updated: December 30, 2006
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed
Date: November 09, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the bittersweet nature of this story. The only thing that held back the prose was the variation between tenses. I think you meant to use the present, but kept using past forms instead of the present and future forms. Anyhow, it did not prevent me from enjoying the story!

Resolved by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 5
Summary: Pam rings in the New Year. Purely speculative.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 748 Read Count: 2264 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2007 Updated: January 01, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very funny ending, and a lifelike portrayal of a heartbroken and lovelorn Pam Beesly during Season 3.

Author's Response: Thank you! 

The Balloon by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 11
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's mom remembers.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Other, Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Mom
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 500 Read Count: 3210 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2007 Updated: January 10, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wonderful prose, characterisation, setting, and metaphor!

Author's Response: Thank you! Pam's sadness was contagious for a while.

Happy Hour by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 7
Summary: Karen and Meredith go out for a drink after the events of "Traveling Salesman."
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Karen, Meredith
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 914 Read Count: 1726 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2007 Updated: January 13, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: March 28, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

An extremely unfortunate situation for Karen, well portrayed here. I don't fault Jim for not discussing Pam while in Stamford, but his biggest mistake was the dramatic half-truth he told her at Starbucks. Though I think that as much as he was trying to convince her, he was trying harder to convince himself. Sad situation all round. Even though I adore Jim/Pam, I think that Jim/Karen made a great couple.

Author's Response: Karen was a great character and her only real flaw was being Not Pam. I think the show handled all of that really well. Thank you for reading and writing- I"m glad you enjoyed it! 

A New Life by Peskipiksi Rated: T [Reviews - 7] 12
Summary: Pam doesn't show up for work on Monday, and Jim is left to wonder.  Written post-The Secret and pre-Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Michael
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3327 Read Count: 4925 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2007 Updated: January 17, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: February 12, 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A heartwarming fix-it story!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam POV poem in couplets. Thinking back over events from the Booze Cruise to Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 356 Read Count: 2523 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2007 Updated: February 02, 2007
Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1
Date: July 30, 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic!