I'm really glad you've started this up again. Really fun and well done!

Just had to love Karen in this. Too funny. I never get tired of the happy Jim and Pam stories you weave. I will be sad to see this one end, but excited to see how you do it.
Thier banter is always perfect when you write it. Uh, and Jim is so sweet here. I want one. :)

Author's Response: I wish I had free Jims to hand out with every review.  Thanks so much for commenting - I'm delighted you liked the new chapter!

So, so good. Moxie, it has been a marathon, and a very well done marathon at that. I am sure I say it every chapter, but this one is so well done. I love the begining, establishing their routine, and the emails, really cute and well don. This story always feels real to me. Yay. So glad it is done and and to know the ending (which was also awesome) but so sad to not have any more.

I for sure think that was the best of the 30 chaoters thus far. Seriously awesome.
I usually hate it when Kelly is portrayed as a dumb girly-girl, but this was a great combo of dumb and funny and girly and just perfect.
And, wow, all the texting and the order of the beginning (learning about when she went back after learning about Monday morning) was just perfect.
Oh, it was so good, I really think it was my favortie chapter of them all. The Jim/Pam interaction from afar was spot on, sweet and witty. Just to die for perfection. Loved it!!

Wow. Can't wait for Pam to start work at the corporate offices! This story is too much fun! And I can't decide if I want Jim and Pam to be happy in their new life or old one... I guess knowing both is possible is best... Can't wait to see how you resolve this!

Author's Response:

Believe me, I know it's hard to decide which option is best:D Thanks for your review:)

"Hello tiny one!"
Yay! Great Jim/Dwight interaction and Jim/Jill and Jill/Dwight! Great dialogue. So happy!

Author's Response: That line just always stuck with me when he said it in Bring Your Daughter Work Day during Season 2. Thought it was so hilarious! Glad it worked here. 

So perfect! Haha. I love every installment of this. And I love how you keep it so topical, for Mother's and Father's Days.
Thanks! Always a joy to read.

I read this after talk about it over at TWoP and am so happy to have done so!
I thought the dialogue was really perfect. Loved Jim's 3M joke and Pam's comback was spot-on.
When Pam 'brought her hands to her face' as she opened teh door, I so did the same thing.
Well done!

Wow is all I have to say. So good! Excellent, excellent, excellent!
Loved your thoroughness throughout.
Can't wait to go back and read it all again!
Thanks!

Author's Response: thanks so much!  You know, I think I'll go back and read it all again tonight myself!  It's easy to get so wrapped up in the chapter you're working on that you miss the overall picture!

really good jim voice. immensely enjoyed this!

This line is so perfect: ...he was just goofy enough to have it mean something to use hers, and yet mindful enough to know he was a dork that it mattered to him.
Always love a happy ending! Thanks for Chapter 2!

oh! SO cute and happy!

Your manic, inappropriate Michael is so spot-on it makes me want to cringe as I read. And, yes, that's a good thing. :)

Author's Response: I cringed as I wrote. I'm such a wuss. Whenever Michael comes on in a new episode, I just cover my eyes because I know I'll be cringing.