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Married, forty-ish tech writer who indulges her aspirations to write fiction by doing...this.
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1882 Read Count: 3777 ePub Downloads: 3
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, Colette. So simple, so lovely, so evocative of time and place and them. I've read too much recently with the banter just slightly off, the voices not quite right, and it was a joy and a relief to hear them again in your story. Blissful and sweet without being cloying, this story hit all of the right notes for me. Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Well, as you can guess - I love hearing this evokes a time and place - and their voices. Thanks so much, nqllisi -so happy this hit those notes for you!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Creed, Jim, Jim/Karen, Karen, Kelly, Kevin, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7752 Read Count: 12953 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Triangle
Good start! I especially like your characterization of Karen. May I suggest breaking up your paragraphs a little more. The long, dense blocks of text are a little hard to read. Otherwise, I have no critique- and I look forward to where you go from here!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I\'m glad you said something about the paragraphs, I wasn\'t sure if I should keep them the way they are or split them...I toyed with it for a while and couldn\'t decide what I liked better. Hopefully my second chapter won\'t disappoint!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Going To The Chapel
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6452 Read Count: 13816 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: All the wrong things on fire
I really like this idea, of going back and seeing a road not taken. I particularly like how you describe that churning unrest in Jim as he decides he must do this, for himself as well as her. One tiny nitpick (I'm an editor, I can't help myself): In the second paragraph, you have "to bare the pain" and I believe you want "bear". Although he sort of does "bare" his pain to Pam on Casino Night!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your comments! And thanks for the edit, too! I am going to change it right now! :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5304 Read Count: 5649 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: we work our way around each other
I don't think Jim gets enough credit for what he went through during that time. I love how you portray him here, torn up in knots, going with the flow (because that is what Jim does) but desperate to do something else. And he got his sign, which is beautiful because it was Pam, herself, who sent it to him. I love this tremendously, particularly your portrayal of Karen. Just gorgeous. And nice, nice title, too. It is perfect.
Date: April 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: we work our way around each other
I am convinced this is what went down those few days. Absolute perfection.
I've missed them. And fic. So glad to come back and find this after all this time.
spoilers through The Job.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 799 Read Count: 2509 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I have a real fondness for 5-things/5-times stories, because I think a strong framework allows for real creativity. This does not disappoint. You've captured very vivid, strong, real emotions in each section, leaving just enough detail to tie the paragraphs to real events but letting us fill in the blanks ourselves. That's an excellent way to draw the reader in, because you can then focus on creating the emotional content rather than describing the action. I'm rambling, but that's because I loved this so much. My favorite sentence, because it describes something we didn't see but feels breathtakingly real: He’s in love with me, she thinks to herself, and soon she’s crouched beneath his chair, leaning against his desk: the steadiness in the world that only comes from him.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 980 Read Count: 2103 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So simple and so sweet. This is just an honest description of being in love, newly, truly, fully in love. I love the cadence throughout, and especially this line:
I know I’ve always said that this, the art thing, is my dream, but can I tell you another secret? I think my dream has really always just been you.
It's just simple and true.
(Tiny nitpick- "our throats were dry and a little soar..." I think you mean "sore.")
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: StacheFlash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118 Read Count: 1899 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Mustache
Nice use of the prompt! This is cute and just a little sexay. Good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! And I usually ignored the prompts - but lately they\'ve helped me a lot so I will probably be using them more often.
Categories: Other, Past
Characters: Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 150 Read Count: 2159 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Life Can Imitate Art
Awesome! I love me some P&P. Also, Colin Firth as Darcy is perhaps the sexiest thing ever. But I digress- I love the idea that this story resonated wiith Pam even back in the Roy days. Excellent idea, perfectly and simply executed!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I loved the idea of Pam loving P&P as much as I do. Matthew Macfadyen was a nice boyish kind of Darcy, but you just can't beat Colin Firth for sheer perfection and sexiness!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: What the cameras don’t show
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4765 Read Count: 3234 ePub Downloads: 2
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What The Cameras Don't Show
Intriguing premise. I'm already thinking ahead to how this scenario would turn into, for example, Casino Night, or the whole thing with Karen. I'd be happy to read more!
Author's Response: Hey, nqllisi, thanks for the review! Interestingly, I have Casino Night and Karen already accounted for in this universe and hopefully I\'ll be able to get the next portions out soon. Thanks for reading. :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 546 Read Count: 2230 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love little character glimpses like this. I wish I'd written it. Beautifully done.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 266 Read Count: 2491 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: always
Well, that's too sad. I approve of the short length, the almost staccato sentences- they convey the enormity of their loss with stark simplicity.
Well done.
Author's Response:
Yay! That was an actual stylistic approach. Ask MBJ, I was questioning how it worked and if it conveyed the emotion or would flowery sentences be better, etc.
Although now I need to go write something fluffy to make up for being a baby killer.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Andy, Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Oscar, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Slash
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3249 Read Count: 1510 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awesome. Seriously funny and sweet. And your Jim/Pam talking heads were right on, so no worries there. It is good to see this from you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate it! I was really worried about getting Jim and Pam's voices right, so I'm glad you enjoyed their talking heads.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 613 Read Count: 2892 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Aww, so sweet. And dealing with that "nothing fits" issue is a very real one, so I love that, too.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2490 Read Count: 4163 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is excellent. You capture that tension perfectly.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 823 Read Count: 3104 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, Michael. Perfect, awful, Michael. Love it.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74 Read Count: 1766 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Change of Scenery
Very nice emotional picture here. Love it! Can I nitpick, though? It's more "than" friends, not more "then". Your story is so short that every little piece is important- I don't want anyone to be distracted by a typo!
Author's Response: My sister is my editor, and she's usually quite the grammer snob. I guess having her, has made me lazy! Thanks for the review and the nitpicking:)
I'm aware that the title makes it sound like the gift would be, like, a vibrator or some kind of sex toy. It's not. I'm sorry.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3140 Read Count: 2397 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, this is lovely. And as pleased as I am for them to go on and consumate this marriage, I was actually disappointed that we only got the one scene. More would be delightful! Enjoy the wedding!!
Pam takes a walk down memory lane, bringing Jim with her.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Married, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4284 Read Count: 5057 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After
Well, well. Sweet, saucy, sexy, and really just perfect. You are very good at this fic stuff, you know.
Author's Response: Right back at you. :) Thanks lis!!
Post-Niagara.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Married, Oneshot, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2283 Read Count: 4761 ePub Downloads: 4
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter the First (and Last)
This absolutely sings. Sexy, of course, but more than that, it feels true. You balance the romance of their story with the reality of life effortlessly. This is a simple, quiet triumph.
Categories: Present, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Kelly, Ryan, Ryan/Kelly, Toby
Genres: Angst, Holiday
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2904 Read Count: 1292 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Exquisitely painful. This is the true tragedy of Toby and the empty center of Ryan Howard. Beautifully crafted.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 Read Count: 2797 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: light
Lovely, lovely, lovely. And now that we have come so far, it is nice to go back to the beginning of the happy ending.
Snippets of Pam and Jim - Post The Job and early S4.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1324 Read Count: 2994 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Job - Money
Simple, sweet, and perfect- like a diamond solitaire.
Author's Response: And so are you. :) Thank you lis!!!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3630 Read Count: 3524 ePub Downloads: 1
Date: December 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I liked your tone here. You conveyed his tension and anguish very well. It had to be torture for present Jim just like it had been for past Jim. Nicely done!
Author's Response: I'm so happy I was able to put the emotions I wanted to convey on paper. It was hard writing the angsty stuff, but the fluff and his longing for her came easily. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Kids/Family, Married, Oneshot, Pregnancy/Babies, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2498 Read Count: 2745 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Awwwwww. So sweet. Nice, nice dialog.