Penname: nqllisi Real name: lis
Member Since: July 12, 2006

Bio:

Married, forty-ish tech writer who indulges her aspirations to write fiction by doing...this.

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Bachelorette Party by Par5 Rated: T [Reviews - 32] 33
Summary:

Pam's girls take her out for a last night of freedom in the big city.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2214 Read Count: 8023 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2006 Updated: August 31, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: August 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Adorable. Of course Jim would laugh. What else could he do? That's joy, and love, and having your name written on the body of someone else's fiancee. Heh.

Author's Response: HA! I guess if Jim's name is on her, he figures she belongs to him now regardless of how she feels! (Thank you drunk Pam!)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: August 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I knew it was coming, but it was a great reveal just the same. Very nice.

Author's Response: Oh no - you figured it out! Oh well, drunk Pam is still fun, right?

The Visit by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 68] 59
Summary: Past Featured StoryFuture fic, but with some imagined back-story for Jim as well.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8019 Read Count: 19370 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2006 Updated: September 05, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8
Date: August 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Dinner with an Old Friend

A lovely beginning. Jim really does need someone to spill this all to, doesn't he?

Author's Response: He sooo deserves it. Far be it from me not to give it to him.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed
Date: September 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Light of Day

Very realistic morning after.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Worlds Collide

I think you struck just the right balance with Sarah.

Author's Response: Phew. Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Do-over

You build up and resolve the tension wonderfully here. Tentative, brave Pam and overwhelmed Jim- perfect.



Author's Response: Glad you said that - was hoping that arc would come through. Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Dear Sara (Epilogue)

Very, very sweet.

Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Quality Time by Par5 Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 10
Summary: Pure fluff. Jim, Pam, and baby makes three.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: Happily Ever After
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 550 Read Count: 4044 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2006 Updated: September 01, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8
Date: September 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwww. What a sweet, quiet tone you've used for this- it's lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you nqllisi! And some quiet time is warranted after dealing with drunk Pam all day yesterday ;)

Buddy Breathing by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 32
Summary: An underwater lesson.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Lessons
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 911 Read Count: 4450 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think I held my breath along with them. Very nice atmosphere here- the silence is a really great device. So much is always unspoken between them, anyway.

Author's Response:

I love what they can say without words. Thanks, nqllisi! ;)

The Sounds of Rain and Impatience by PamPamThankyouMam Rated: M [Reviews - 6] 4
Summary: pam waits in her car in the rain for jim to get back from stamford. written for the RAIN challenge
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Rain
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 979 Read Count: 1533 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 6
Date: September 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Sounds of Rain and Impatience

The emotions of this piece are really spot on (I like the tap tap tapping), but if you want to shift back and forth between first and third person, I suggest using italics for Pam's POV or something, because it is hard to read this way.

"He tastes like rain" is a wonderful last line.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, because getting the emotional part of it right was diffinitly hardest thing (thats wat she said) about writing this

ohh! i didn't mean to switch POV's actually haha i was just half asleep and i usually write in 1st person so i got confused haha

thanks! i really like it too haha Thanks sooo much for the review!

It's Only Gossip If You Tell Someone by Lissa_Maylee Rated: K [Reviews - 9] 8
Summary:

Jim and Pam don't know that someone is listening at a crucial moment.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: Nobody Knows, Overheard
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319 Read Count: 3822 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed
Date: September 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Otherwise, it's just knowledge.

Ah, very true to the Kelly character!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I love Kelly, she's adorable.

A Few of Her Favorite Things by bitterpill Rated: M [Reviews - 34] 33
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam are a couple. He asks a question. She contemplates.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 425 Read Count: 15869 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mmmm. Hot and sweet and adorable.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Blue by proudgirl Rated: K+ [Reviews - 8] 8
Summary: A colorful rehashing of THE KISS.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 444 Read Count: 2041 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2006 Updated: September 03, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The wordplay is skillfully done, here, and very evocative. By the end, it threatens to overwhelm the emotional content a little bit, but for your first one ever? This was an amazing start.

Author's Response:

If I recall correctly, this piece wasn't always well-received - I think in part because it's rather confusing. It's quite interesting for me, however, to revisit, because it quite neatly sums up how I felt about Jam in those early moments not long after the finale. I've since sobered up (I think).

Thanks for the review :)

The Beard by nomadshan Rated: M [Reviews - 14] 15
Summary: Roy has a new look. Everyone's noticing.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Angela, Jan, Oscar, Roy
Genres: Dream/Fantasy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1100 Read Count: 1101 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa! The beard gets a lot of play!

Author's Response: The beard is a player ;)

Instincts by Morning Angel Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 10
Summary: “Do you think we are our own worst enemies? I mean, I want to be happy, yet every time I think I am making a step in that direction, I end up farther away from it.”
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Jan, Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Challenges: Second Choices
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 659 Read Count: 2241 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, that's a compelling "ten minutes" scenario. It sounds so much like them- great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I'm glad you liked it. :)

Three Minutes by TV_Buffy Rated: T [Reviews - 38] 32
Summary: Past Featured StoryResponse to the Overheard challenge. A couple has an important conversation at the bank.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Overheard
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 785 Read Count: 3503 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woo! Wonderful way to end it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

All Roads Lead Down That Sewer by Limelight Rated: K+ [Reviews - 10] 9
Summary: This is not Hans Christian Anderson. (Darryl/Roy… except not at all. Jim/Pam)
Categories: Present, Other, Past
Characters: Darryl, Pam, Roy
Genres: Slash
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 892 Read Count: 1768 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your Darryl so much. This is awesome. I'm glad you had fun writing it; it shows.

Candy Dish by ElizabethLynn Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 22
Summary: Past Featured StorySomeone has to take up the slack...

Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Pam, Phyllis
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 327 Read Count: 2824 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Phyllis! She would totally miss Jim, and she would also be the one to reach out to a very lonely Pam (not to mention wanting to mess with Dwight). I love this!

Author's Response:

Thank, nqllisi!  I adore Phyllis, and won't be surprised next season if we see her trying to help out Pam.

Listen to Phyllis, Pam!  Look how happy she is with Bob Vance, Vance Refrigeration! 

Sneaky by gotkona Rated: K+ [Reviews - 6] 6
Summary:

Someone is tired of being sneaky and it's not who you think.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 596 Read Count: 1804 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 7
Date: September 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, the cameraman is a jam 'shipper! Very cute.

Author's Response: Aren't we all Jam shippers?

The Way They Were Meant To by PuffingNoise Rated: K [Reviews - 15] 15
Summary:

The ten minutes between Jim's confession to Pam and the kiss in "Casino Night", plus the moments immediately after the kiss.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1334 Read Count: 1547 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2006 Updated: September 04, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You convey the hush of that moment really well. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for commenting about something specific. It's great that you picked up on the mood I [subconciously] weaved into the moment.

On Monday by Rose Rated: K+ [Reviews - 15] 15
Summary:

"Pam would have laughed if it hadn't been so funny." The weekend after Casino Night.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Katy, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 921 Read Count: 1983 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2006 Updated: September 05, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, yeah, that about killed me. It's so very possible, too, that it's a little bit haunting. Excellent job on the characterization.

Author's Response:

Heh. Death by fanfic.

That's how I wanna go. 

Thank you so much for your review!

Bridging the Gap by Par5 Rated: T [Reviews - 50] 45
Summary: Fifteen years of marriage and three kids later and Jim still couldn't shake the fear of losing her. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Married, Romance, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Happily Ever After
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6071 Read Count: 20320 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2006 Updated: September 11, 2006
Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9
Date: September 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: How Did We Get Here?

Ack! No!  This was painfully real and very well-written, but...no!!

Author's Response:

Thanks nqllisi. Hang in there - I'll try to ease your pain soon!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed
Date: September 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Going Home

Thank goodness for fluff. A lovely way to end it.

Author's Response: Good lord- you're always so fast to review! Thanks very much lis ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: The Conversation

This is painful, but so hopeful. I love that song, by the way.



Author's Response: That song makes me want to cry every.single.time. But I thought it really captured what Jim was trying to do for her.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed
Date: September 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Alone

Oh, this is so awfully painful, but I think it will be better for all of us once they finally talk. 

Author's Response: Yes. Just like it would be better for us all is they actually talked on the show. Sorry - got a little sidetracked!