Summary: Pam gets the nerve to call Jim after she breaks off the wedding, and gets invited along on an impromptu road trip across the country.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 25535 Read Count: 66389 ePub Downloads: 11
Penname: Becky215 Real name: CH
Member Since: February 21, 2007
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[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: February 25, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 
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Date: December 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Heading For Denver
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! And yeah, I totally think TWSS all the time thanks to the Office! It makes for some very inappropriate giggling sometimes ;)
9 Date: December 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Heading For Denver
I am seriously enjoying this, deerinthepark!! I can't wait for more; you've done a great job establishing tension and cool dialogue. I really hope to see more from Jim's POV on all of this, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next few chapters!!
Oh, and this?
"Should I start or you? I don't mind, I'm awake."
"Sounds fine to me."
Being the lame kid that I can be some time, I was giggling through these lines as I heard a small voice in my head chirping, "That's what she said!!!" --CH
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! And yeah, I totally think TWSS all the time thanks to the Office! It makes for some very inappropriate giggling sometimes ;)
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: December 27, 2007 Title: Acting On Impulse
8 Date: December 27, 2007 Title: Acting On Impulse
Oh, deerinthepark, this is so great! I'm still enjoying every word, and I can hardly wait for more. The image of Groggy!Jim sprawled out in bed is the best belated Christmas gift I've received yet! -CH
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: December 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Denver
Date: December 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Denver
The new stuff was great; you write the sexy moments very well, and as usual, I can't wait to see what'll happen next! -CH
Author's Response: That's a relief to hear, since I always get nervous writing the sexy bits! Thanks for your continued support of this story :)
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: January 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: To Vegas
10 Date: January 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: To Vegas
I'm just loving this! I was so excited to wake up and see an update, deerinthepark. You've done a great job with the banter and the tension, and I can't wait to see what happens when they get across the country (ol' Pam's never seen the Pacific, so I don't think illegal sex on the beach would be "inordinately extravagant;" it would be requisite--wink, wink).
Great work here, and I can hardly wait for the next update! -CH
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Las Vegas
Date: January 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Las Vegas
Umm...Hello!?!?!!
Gettin' impatient here, deerinthepark!! More, more, more!!! :-) --CH
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Reaching the Ocean
Date: January 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Reaching the Ocean
THANK YOU.
FINALLY! I was growing impossibly impatient over here, deerinthepark, but really, this was worth the wait. I love the tone you've established throughout this story, and the ominous twist here at the end has me on pins and needles. Can't wait for more! -CH
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6966 Read Count: 12917 ePub Downloads: 0
It's a "12 Days of Christmas"-theme for this year's party...but the five gold rings aren't appetizers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6966 Read Count: 12917 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: December 24, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: December 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Four calling salesmen
Date: December 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Four calling salesmen
Great premise, nqllisi!! Can't wait for more!! -CH
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I know where it's ending up, but I'm not sure exactly how to get there. Hope it works! Heh. Thank you for commenting!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Three French breads
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Three French breads
Ohhh fun!!!! I really like this, and I've been waiting for a fic to introduce Angela Kinsey's real pregnancy into the storyline. Can't wait for more!! --CH
Author's Response: I have babies on the brain (and, um, in the womb) these days, so I'm not surprised this happened. Hee. Thank you so much- I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Summary: 
Jim and Pam, moments from each month, starting with May 2007. Just sort of filling in some blanks. Some fluff, a little angst here and there. Eventually I'll get through a whole year. Spoilers through "The Job," I guess.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8301 Read Count: 11978 ePub Downloads: 4
Jim and Pam, moments from each month, starting with May 2007. Just sort of filling in some blanks. Some fluff, a little angst here and there. Eventually I'll get through a whole year. Spoilers through "The Job," I guess. Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8301 Read Count: 11978 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2007 Updated: January 23, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: May to October
Author's Response:
9 Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: May to October
I'm a terrible person. I've heard you chatting about this story, and I've loved your stories on the site, so after hearing you were writing more to "May and Everything After," I was excited. I knew I'd read it, I knew I'd loved it, but just now, as I reread part one and perused your reviews (I'm a glutton for author's responses, for some reason, and I love to see what people say in reply), I kept looking for my review.
And then I realized I didn't leave one the first time around.
I bow before thee with sorrow and dishonor on my shoulders. This is such an excellent story, and I'm kicking my travel-wearied ass that I didn't say so the first time. I reread this just now, and as I was going through it, I said, "I know there's a part with Jim and basketball somewhere. It's--OH! There it is!" That vignette really stuck with me, and I think this is a beautifully constructed story.
So my apologies and a standing ovation for this, and now I'm gonna go read part two and hopefully be one of the FIRST few folks to review that installment! -CH
Author's Response:
CH, take your sorrow and dishonor and throw them in the garbage for a cat to eat. Thanks so much for your review. It's particularly gratifying to hear it's "beautifully constructed," because it is really conceived and written very haphazardly. The months have been written out of order and with different points of view and no particular plan.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: November and December
Author's Response: Thanks so much, CH. I labored over Pam's dad and how Jim might deal with him. We know from the show that Pam respects her dad, but it definitely seems to me that they are not close. Thanks a ton for your kind words.
9 Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: November and December
Rock on, my friend! This was lovely. I especially liked the part about Jim meeting Pam's dad; I completely agree that Jim probably charmed a lot of moms in his day (he is, after all, "into them," if I recall correctly), and I think you did a fabulous job establishing the almost-tension between the men that Jim tried to keep at bay. I'm also so happy you didn't use the tired dynamic of "Oh, by the way, Jim, Dad and Roy were best friends, so that might be weird" (not that I think you'd ever use cliches--your writing is always deliciously original and creative).
So wonderful job, as usual, and of course I cannot wait to see what you'll roll out next!! --CH
Author's Response: Thanks so much, CH. I labored over Pam's dad and how Jim might deal with him. We know from the show that Pam respects her dad, but it definitely seems to me that they are not close. Thanks a ton for your kind words.
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: January 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: January-February
Author's Response: CH-Thanks so much and thanks for your help. I do love me some Pam, and it always is gratifying when others enjoy my version of her. 2034, huh? Maybe, but it might be 2028 in real life by the time I get there.
10 Date: January 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: January-February
brokenloon--You know how much I love this chapter by this point, and the steps you've taken to enrich Pam's character really stand out in these vignettes. I love your version of her, and her quiet vigilence in watching Jim's life and opportunities unfold around (and with) her is quite endearing. I'm anxious to see where you take this next, and I hope this story becomes "May and Everything After Until 2034." :-)
Bravo! --Best, CH
Author's Response: CH-Thanks so much and thanks for your help. I do love me some Pam, and it always is gratifying when others enjoy my version of her. 2034, huh? Maybe, but it might be 2028 in real life by the time I get there.
Summary: Michael makes his employees write down three New Year's Resolutions for 2008.
Categories: Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jan, Jim, Josh Porter, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Mose, Oscar/Gil, Pam, Phyllis/Bob Vance, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1313 Read Count: 4195 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Present
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Dwight, Jan, Jim, Josh Porter, Kelly, Kevin, Meredith, Michael, Mose, Oscar/Gil, Pam, Phyllis/Bob Vance, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Mild sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: Holiday: Just One Day Out Of Life
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1313 Read Count: 4195 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2007 Updated: December 29, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: December 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Tisket, a Tasket, Resolutions in a Basket
Date: December 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Tisket, a Tasket, Resolutions in a Basket
This was so cute!! Great job, Too Late Kev!! -CH
Author's Response:
Wow, you're fast! (That's what she said! ;) )
Thanks so much, for reading and reviewing, CH! :)
Summary: They didn’t get there by immaculate conception. Whoever said pregnancy was chaste - or simple?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Michael
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5548 Read Count: 20553 ePub Downloads: 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Michael
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5548 Read Count: 20553 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2008 Updated: January 10, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: January 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Boat on the River Seine
9 Date: January 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Boat on the River Seine
I'm loving this, Colette!! My mom likes to tell stories from when she was pregnant, and a favorite tale on the list includes the times she'd take a nap but wake up to catch my foot or elbow pressing against her belly. I almost tried to write that same image in one of my stories, but I couldn't pull it off. You've captured it brilliantly in this story, and as usual, I can't wait for more! --CH
Author's Response: Pleased this sounded realistic...everyone's experience is a bit different, but I think there are some universals - like how weird it is to feel this whole other person, poking you from the inside ;-) Anyway, glad you enjoyed, but that's all she wrote ;-) The next chapter would have to be actual baby fic and I bow to the experts there. Thanks much for reading and reviewing, Becky.
Summary: It's 2 AM, and Jim is tired.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 698 Read Count: 2248 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 698 Read Count: 2248 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2008 Updated: January 02, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: January 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ohh this is great. I hope there's more to it; keep up the great work! --CH
Summary: Five wedding presents that Jim and Pam got from members of the office.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1312 Read Count: 5251 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1312 Read Count: 5251 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2008 Updated: January 05, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was great, Siochan! The perfect amount of fluff for a lovely Saturday afternoon. Good job! -CH
Summary: How would things have turned out if Pam read the card that came with her teapot?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3628 Read Count: 6204 ePub Downloads: 2
How would things have turned out if Pam read the card that came with her teapot?Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3628 Read Count: 6204 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2008 Updated: January 05, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bonus Gifts
Author's Response:
10 Date: January 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bonus Gifts
Oh, shan21, I loved this!!! In all of the fanfic I've read, I think I've come across about a dozen versions of Jim's card, but I'm confident in saying yours is the best version of the note I've read yet. So charming, so romantic (so Jim!). I also adored your Pam/Dwight discussion on the faults of the Boy Scouts, especially this exchange:
“Boy Scouts,” he spat in obvious disgust. “What do the Boy Scouts prepare you for?”
“Um… anything?” Pam guessed.
I could just see and hear that entire discussion. You've done a great job here, and I hope brokenloon appreciates the lovely fic your wrote for him!! Bravo!! --CH
Author's Response:
Brokenloon was perfectly wonderful about it. He encouraged me to post it on MTT straight away, because he kind of rocks :)
I'm so glad you liked it, Becky! I was a bit nervous about writing the card, because it's such a big deal in this fandom- sort of this legendary unknown (ooh, i sound super cheesy now!). And I'm also glad you liked the boy scouts stuff because I adore writing any and all interactions with Dwight.
Thanks so much for the feedback!
Summary: Jim. Pam. An airport.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1476 Read Count: 3686 ePub Downloads: 2
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1476 Read Count: 3686 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
8 Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely, xoxoxo! I spent two hours in 23532-mile long lines at Logan Airport when I came home for Christmas. Too bad I didn't have a Jim to distract me!
Great job, and I'm so happy to read something new from you! Can't wait to see what you'll write next! -CH
Author's Response:
Thank you CH!!! I've been through tons of delays - but this one today especially hurt. Thank you for thinking it was great even when it was a god awful mess. I was so scared I wouldn't post it at all if I didn't post it quickly. We'll see what else I've got in me.
Hopefully soon!!!
Summary: Pam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6246 ePub Downloads: 1
Pam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6246 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: January 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine
Author's Response:
10 Date: January 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine
PRESS RELEASE ON BEHALF OF THE FAMILY OF CH: I am sad to report that "All-Inclusive" will not be completed in this fanfic community. CH loved writing for you all, but as she sat down to write the latest chapter, she stopped by MTT (that site she always talked about) to see what was new and happened upon something from someone called "GodinthisChilis." Apparently the doctors say this is what did her in. We will miss her a lot, and I'm sure that CH will miss all of you too, but we know that she died happily while reading this story about post-"Casino Night" Jim and Pam. The doctors report that the following line was the cause of death: "Oh...and...if this is Scranton...I meant what I said." Thank you. That is all. END OF MESSAGE FROM CH's FAMILY REP
Okay, obviously I'm being melodramatic, but HOT DAMN!!! You've slain me with this poetic, fabulous, semi-but-deliciously gooey story! Love it, I'm favoriting it, and I continue to love anything and everything that finds its way from your fingers to my screen. Can't wait for more from you, my friend! --CH
Author's Response:
Okay, first of all, thanks for your review and your kind, kind words...and secondly... we need to bring you back from the dead because a world where there is no new chapter of All Inclusive is a very sad place indeed!!! So glad you liked it and thanks for all of your help.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33767 Read Count: 60757 ePub Downloads: 3
Pam married Roy, but Jim's return to Scranton complicates the life she thought she wanted.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33767 Read Count: 60757 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2008 Updated: February 29, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets told in the pictures on your skin
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets told in the pictures on your skin
This is nicely done (I know the word "nice" is not that exciting within the context of your story, but I mean it in the best way possible, I promise!). I loved your description of Pam's inner dialogue; keep up the great work! -CH
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for the clarification ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: February 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: So I let you go
Author's Response: That is still the theme of the story! Don't you worry ;)
10 Date: February 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: So I let you go
She knew she had to let him go.
--No, she doesn't. Let's not make this the theme of the story. Instead...
Yet he had a feeling if tomorrow, she woke up in his arms, he wouldn’t regret a day of all it took to get her there.
...let's make THAT the theme of the story!
I'm really enjoying this, Petty. Post your chapters as fast as you please--I'm lovin' every word. I'm not usually one to cheer on the dissolution of marriages, but in this case, I'm hoping Pam dumps dear Roy before they even eat their Thanksgiving turkey.
Can't wait for more! -CH
Author's Response: That is still the theme of the story! Don't you worry ;)
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: and I watch you leave
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
10 Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: and I watch you leave
Petty--Guh. I'm loving this. The imagery of that final scene was lovely, and I could hear all of the words. Yours is one of those stories that puts me in an awkward situation: I like Roy, and he doesn't deserve what I think is inevitably going to happen with his wife, but at the same time, you've made curlicues of my morals by making me cheer on the dissolution of their marriage. I'm rooting for Jim and Pam, of course, but I'm interested to see where you'll take this and what roads will take you there. You're doing a wonderful job with this story, and I'm savoring every chapter!
Till next time.... ---CH
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: And I hold my breath
Author's Response: Hah. I guess you'll have to just wait and see. Kidding - anyone who watches the show know Jim and Pam belong together. They just need a little help getting over themselves first!
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: And I hold my breath
Petty--I swear, you can't make this one of those realistic "Jim moves on and finds happiness with another stories." I'm as nervous as Jim at that dinner table right now, thinking that's what you're gonna do. I hope he's leaving her at the bus station.
I'm on the edge of my seat here. More more more! -CH
Author's Response: Hah. I guess you'll have to just wait and see. Kidding - anyone who watches the show know Jim and Pam belong together. They just need a little help getting over themselves first!
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: So you won't hear me scream
Date: February 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: So you won't hear me scream
Petty--I got up early to finish writing a paper, but then I saw you'd updated and the paper somehow got forgotten. Oh well. I really enjoyed this chapter (of course), and I think you've chosen an interesting way to move this story along. I suppose we expected Pam to ask for a divorce or leave Roy, but you've subtly folded it into a wonderfully emotional story arc for our leading lady (as opposed to her just leaving and that being that). The scene in the park was terrifyingly perfect, and I just hope Karen doesn't get too comfortable with that hand-holding anytime soon. You've done a great job with this, and congrats on your first MTT ribbon!
Can't wait for more! -CH
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: When you walk away
Date: February 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: When you walk away
I won't throw things, but the fact that Karen's tagging along like a doormat gives me cause to keep my projectiles close at hand. We'll decide for sure after the next chapter.
Keep up the great work! -CH
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: February 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: But the words are only in my head
Date: February 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: But the words are only in my head
Love this story so much, my friend. Keep it coming. -CH