Summary: Even two years after Casino Night, Jim hasn't learned to take rejection well.
A different kind of future fic.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 3105 Read Count: 4090 ePub Downloads: 0
Penname: brokenloon Real name: Steve
Member Since: March 03, 2007
Bio:
Bio:
Okay, first of all I'm a guy-are there any others writing here? Yes, I am of course in love with Jenna Fischer and with the fictional character she has created. And I would totally have a beer and watch some hoops with Jim Halpert.
I've never written romantic stuff in my life; this show just brings it out of me. My stories here are sort of little daydreams that seem somehow therapeutic to me. You can usually count on happy endings from my stuff; plenty of heartache on the actual show.
Other stuff: 37, divorced, two kids, I live in Northern Virginia
Feel free to contact me.
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[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 09, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 
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Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm not usually an angst fan, but this is really good. A nice example of people who love each other behaving in normal, human ways but ending up causing pain. Which hopefully will be eventually eased.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25103 ePub Downloads: 1
WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25103 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: September 14, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: A Word of Advice
10 Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: A Word of Advice
This whole thing is so much fun, though I have to admit the mere thought of Todd Packer dishing out relationship advice made me want to curl up in the fetal position. Tremendous job, funny and adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, dear God, can you imagine this guy given a microphone? Anyway, so glad you liked it and thanks so much for reading!
Summary:
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Michael, Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2361 Read Count: 614 ePub Downloads: 1
A woman meets Michael Scott.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Michael, Other
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2361 Read Count: 614 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2007 Updated: August 07, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: August 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: mike and me
10 Date: August 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: mike and me
Wow...no one can possibly say you're a one trick pony after this. A lot of pathos here, and I think you captured exactly how Michael would react at every step. The whole thing was vivid and strangely moving.
Author's Response: thanks brokenloon! I'm glad you read it!!
Summary: The day she decided it was over, it was like the world had fallen in around her and no one else noticed.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 3666 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 3666 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2007 Updated: August 10, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Fairytale
10 Date: August 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Fairytale
Outstanding work, vivid and real. Sigh. I want to give Pam a hug and tell her she'll be okay.
she hated the fact that she apparently had the ability to break the heart of every man that had ever meant anything to her. I love this line...Pam, soft hearted and compassionate as she is, must have just been haunted by the pain she probably felt she caused through that summer.
Summary: 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9433 Read Count: 13397 ePub Downloads: 3
Michael's looking for a long lost relative - with (hopefully) hilarious results. Set S4ish - NO SPOILERS - with a healthy dose of a blissful Jim and Pam because I simply can't help myself.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9433 Read Count: 13397 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 29, 2007 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I can see this whole thing in my mind like it's an actual episode. Just brilliantly funny with perfect characterization. A worthy 50th.
Author's Response: Well then. What more can I ask for? LOL! Many thanks - as always. :)
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Author's Response:
10 Date: October 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Lots of fun. Several giggles, some chuckles, even some guffaws. Vintage Michael absurdity, with some great Pam thrown in. The Pam-Michael dynamic is always fun, and you capture it really well here. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Guffaws you say? Alrighty then. Thank you for your conrtribution to the humor in this chapter. More to come...hopefully soon, definitely eventually. :)
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
10 Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Belatedly wanted to express again how much I enjoy this; it was the cause of much laughter from my office. Not that I ever read fanfic at work of course. I must now wipe away the image of Michael sawing Pam from my mind.
Author's Response:
Are you saying you're running around your office making your co-workers read my fanfic? Oh...you just meant you. For a second there I thought I'd gotten a whole new following. :)
Rest your worried mind - Jim won't let Michael anywhere near Pam with a saw - wizard or no.
And most of all thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
10 Date: October 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
It amazes me that you can do both fluff and comedy with the same great skill. And your Michael here is just absurdly perfect. Great work that has provided me many laughs
Author's Response: Why thank you. :) Michael really is fun to write. I just think of the most ridiculous thing I can and dial it up a few notches. Happy I could make you laugh. I certainly laughed writing it.
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
10 Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Way to not only break through the block but smash through it. When it's all said and done, this is both one of the funniest fics ever, and also one of the great Michael characterizations ever. Brilliant from start to finish....now get to work on your next one. As you know - this was not at all easy for me so for you to say I've succeeded in such a fashion means a tremendous amount. Next one?? Eaaaaasy there buddy. Let me collect myself a little bit. :) PS: Thank you. :)
Author's Response:
Summary: For the Pam's Pregnancy Challenge...kinda. Future Fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 752 Read Count: 7513 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 752 Read Count: 7513 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2007 Updated: September 11, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Treasures
10 Date: September 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Treasures
Awww, how sweet was this? It's a neat trick, even though this contained little dialogue, you still have your patented pefect Pam characterization. Great stuff, truly a perfect little piece.
Author's Response: I thought it was pretty sweet myself. :) Thank you. There are times when writing I can see Pam's reactions so clearly - and I think this was one of them. Glad to hear you did too.
Summary:
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43087 Read Count: 273187 ePub Downloads: 5
Ideas for Cold Openings (the pre-title gags) always pop into my head. So these will be just a bunch of teasers that, hopefully, you will find funny. I don't know how many I will post but I'll keep putting them up as they occur to me.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 43087 Read Count: 273187 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2007 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 38: Lord of the Ring
10 Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 38: Lord of the Ring
That, sir, was brilliant. Big laugh here at the closing line. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: Jim's dreams push him toward his fate.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5482 Read Count: 4059 ePub Downloads: 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5482 Read Count: 4059 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2007 Updated: September 24, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: September 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream...
10 Date: September 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream...
Wow, you really explored the studio space with this one. Jim truly seemed numb and profoundly tired as S3 wore on, and that is depicted viscerally here. The idea of him finally finding rest as he gives up denying his feelings and keeping his distance and turns to her is really powerful. Great job. Quite a varied body of work you're building.
Author's Response: You know me, just trying to stretch my creative fingers ;-) Glad we got this together in the end, I struggled as you know. Thank you soo sooo much (/Kelly) for all of your help. You are amazing!
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 358 Read Count: 4816 ePub Downloads: 1
Just a short little blurb about Pam's emotions now that we've seen Fun Run.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Poetry, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 358 Read Count: 4816 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2007 Updated: September 28, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: September 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Like the heroine of something classically epic
10 Date: September 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Like the heroine of something classically epic
Very very nice. Your ability to use epic, dramatic language and images to describe the lives and emotions of these characters without making it seem overblown and ridiculous always amazes me. And of course as someone who really enjoys happy Pam, this is special to me.
Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon I'm so excited that you read and reviewed!! I thought you might like this one ;-)
Summary:
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Darryl, Kelly, Kelly/Other
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1383 Read Count: 1610 ePub Downloads: 0
"Who says exactly what they're thinking? What kind of game is that?"
Kelly considers her past and her present.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Darryl, Kelly, Kelly/Other
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1383 Read Count: 1610 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2007 Updated: October 21, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: her decision
Author's Response: thanks brokenloon! I'm glad you gave it a read.
10 Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: her decision
Good stuff. The Darryl analysis is great. In his own way he is the most whole, least neurotic person on the whole show. And it would be nice to think that Kelly really does have some substance and self awareness like you give her here. And of course you're on the mark on that schmuck Ryan. A very interesting take.
Author's Response: thanks brokenloon! I'm glad you gave it a read.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2558 Read Count: 5608 ePub Downloads: 1
My (second?) contribution to the Money post-ep business. Jim and Pam have dinner and something's a little off.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2558 Read Count: 5608 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2007 Updated: October 21, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Vintage stablergirl...You make a dinner date seem almost like life and death while still being totally grounded in the characters' real emotions. You do tortured Jim so well. And hopefully Pam does him well too.
Author's Response: LMAO. This review was awesome. Wow I really enjoyed that. Thanks brokenloon!!!!
Summary: Day to day, being Jim and Pam: it's what they're good at.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1166 Read Count: 3042 ePub Downloads: 2
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1166 Read Count: 3042 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 24, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Buttercup
10 Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Buttercup
Really nicely done...brought several smiles to my face.
Summary: Christmas time at Dunder-Mifflin means two things. Romance, and celebrating African-American heritage. A script-based take on the Season 4 Christmas episode.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: The Office Scripts
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11706 Read Count: 18718 ePub Downloads: 1
Christmas time at Dunder-Mifflin means two things. Romance, and celebrating African-American heritage. A script-based take on the Season 4 Christmas episode.Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Holiday, Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: The Office Scripts
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11706 Read Count: 18718 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2007 Updated: November 13, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Act Three
10 Date: November 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Act Three
Just read this whole thing, thoroughly enjoyed it. I like it-I mean what's not to like? Everything is clicking-you have all the voices down, even the rhythim and the pacing. And there are pletny of laughs. Great stuff.
Author's Response: I appreciate your kind words. I've never written a script-based story before so I just try to think of my ideas like an episode, and go with it. I'm glad that you've liked it so far, thanks for reading and reviewing brokenloon.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Married, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: The Sexual Misadventures of Pam and Jim
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2465 Read Count: 3101 ePub Downloads: 0
After their shower adventure, Jim suggests they try another fantasy to prove to Pam that their relationship is still magical. Unfortunately, things don't go as planned. Once again, don't try this one at home. A continuation of Tales from the Bathroom Floor.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Married, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: The Sexual Misadventures of Pam and Jim
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2465 Read Count: 3101 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2007 Updated: October 27, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Start a Fire Without a Spark
Author's Response: Okay would I purposefully steal your thunder? Thanks for the encouragement to post, the beta, and in generally being a good friend. I also appreciate the vote of confidence on the smut-lite. I always feel ridiculous writing it, and I'm convinced it is hard to know if it works for the reader or not. Wouldn't it be great if TO were on HBO? I would love that. Yes, Dwight....sigh...well we all know he has a soft spot for Pam (HE DOES DANGIT) but how far does that go I wonder? I mean can he be nice in this scenario? We'll see....
10 Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Start a Fire Without a Spark
What, are you stealing my thunder with the Springsteen lyric song titles? If The Office were only on HBO, maybe we'd get to see something just like this. You do a great job with realistic bedroom stuff, and the dialogue is right, and of course the horror that the ending evokes...good lord. Poor Pam. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Okay would I purposefully steal your thunder? Thanks for the encouragement to post, the beta, and in generally being a good friend. I also appreciate the vote of confidence on the smut-lite. I always feel ridiculous writing it, and I'm convinced it is hard to know if it works for the reader or not. Wouldn't it be great if TO were on HBO? I would love that. Yes, Dwight....sigh...well we all know he has a soft spot for Pam (HE DOES DANGIT) but how far does that go I wonder? I mean can he be nice in this scenario? We'll see....
Summary: Three conversations take place under starry skies. Four lives are forever changed.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8934 Read Count: 11643 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8934 Read Count: 11643 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i've done what i could for you (and i do know what's good for me)
10 Date: October 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: i've done what i could for you (and i do know what's good for me)
Wow, really great. Vivid and real and perfectly written and it seems just like them, all of it. Spendid.
Author's Response: Thank you, brokenloon! I wanted so hard for it to seem real. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Summary:
Categories: Present
Characters: Angela
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Oneshot, Parody, Suspense
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1021 Read Count: 1148 ePub Downloads: 0
Parody of 'The Raven'. Angela is missing her cat, when someone comes a scratching, scratching at her kitchen door. Fun Run Spoilers.
Categories: Present
Characters: Angela
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Humor, Oneshot, Parody, Suspense
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1021 Read Count: 1148 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2007 Updated: October 31, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Quoth the Barn Cat, "Nevermore"
10 Date: November 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Quoth the Barn Cat, "Nevermore"
Just brilliant, really well done. I can only imagine the work that took to craft...you choose the words well, and the meter seems right, at least to my untrained eye And of course it's clever and funny. Outsatanding!
Author's Response: It took me a while, and I still ended up with a few lines that didn't match the meter, but it's a good thing they're not noticable. ; ) Clever AND funny? You sure know how to flatter a girl! Seriously, thank you so much for the nice review!-Rose : )
Summary: Pam's hands grew clammy and her mouth suddenly felt dry. She had to come up with something. There was no way that Jim was ever going to find out what she was really up to. There was just no way.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4990 Read Count: 4616 ePub Downloads: 0
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4990 Read Count: 4616 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2007 Updated: November 02, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
10 Date: November 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Okay, that filled my appetite for Fluff. Very nicely done, I can see Pam has still being embarrassed by dorky tendencies, and we've seen on the show how when Jim thinks about the past he gets motivated to connect with her, and you have a version of that here. Excellent work
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review, brokenloon! I'm always happy to be your fluff-provider.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 55435 ePub Downloads: 16
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19942 Read Count: 55435 ePub Downloads: 16
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Idea
Author's Response:
10 Date: November 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Idea
Wow, this is just brilliant. You channel Angela so well that I'm a little bit afraid. "My cats have conjunctivitis and I have only one set of goggles." I would suggest that women everwyhere memorize that line and use it to shed any unwanted guys hoping to come back to their place. It would get rid of me in a hurry, I know that much. Of course if that didn't work, bringing up the Feline Idiopatic Cystisis would surely do it.
More soon, please.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad people like my Angela stuff! I actually went onto a cat lovers' message board to find some weird disorder that a cat could have. It's also where I found out that some cat owners treat their kitties' pink-eye with a homemade saline solution. Heh.
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: From Bad to Worse
Author's Response: Wow, what an insanely nice compliment brokenloon! The pressure is on for ch3 now!
10 Date: November 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: From Bad to Worse
Oh man...that was seriously one of the greatest, most compelling chapters of fanfic I have ever read. Just unbelievable. The emotions you depict them having ring so true and you just tell the story so perfectly. I will be checking ceaselessly for chapte three of this masterpiece.
Bravo.
Author's Response: Wow, what an insanely nice compliment brokenloon! The pressure is on for ch3 now!
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Catalyst
10 Date: November 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Catalyst
Just tremendous...I'm just on the edge of my seat here. A Hall of Fame caliber story. Don't know what else to say.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks brokenloon! I'm glad you're still on the edge of your seat! Hopefully I can keep that up in ch4.
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Pam Pong
10 Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Pam Pong
Bravo. So, so good. A first ballot Hall of Fame story. Just make sure that when you channel Angela you don't get in too deep and get stuck in her character.