I recently graduated from college and now work as an editor for a local publishing house.
I know my writing isn't anywhere close to brilliant, but I've decided to put it out there anyway, hoping that it will brighten someone's day, even if it's just my own.
Five Little Reminders That Simply Had To Go.
Niiiiice! I especially loved her deleting Karen from his phone. Even though it's a little harsh. Not sure how I'd react to that if I were Jim. But still, yay for Karen being gone!!! :D
Author's Response:
of course he would say "thank you Pam! that crazy whore is the last thing on my mind and I shall never call her again!! muah hah hah!!"
I guess you gotta be harsh when you're in a situation like Pam, I mean would you want the chance of Karen stealing Jim away again? hehe
Thanks so much for the review! :)
Bad AU Fic....
AKA what happens when you spend 35 hours a week with kids - add a TWoP discussion - and a Pam/Jim connection...
You're right. This is weird. But it's also really funny and cute, in the strangest possible way. Nice job!
Author's Response: Yay! My first review! I am so glad you found it weird and funny and cute! And strange. Because, lets face it, it was. But it was oh so fun to write
This is really fun! I love S2, and I'm really excited for more!
Woo-Hoo!!!!!!!! I'm so excited that she asked him out! Yes! Anyway, this was great. I really loved Pam's mom being so cool, and the argument with Roy at the beginning. Nicely done!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment!
Yay for kissing! And yay for a second gold medal! And yay for you for writing another chapter!!! ;)
lol, I loved Kev's last line! The whole chapter was great though. I can't wait for Halloween!
Aw! So cute Em! I loved it!
Author's Response: Hehe thanks! I had so much fun writing it, cause, well its fun
Yay for S2 Jam. I just can't get enough! :) I'm so glad you're posting this, even if it is a little older.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Azlin! Glad you're enjoying. :)
I really liked this. I think a lot of the time I forget just how long Pam and Roy were together. But I like how you've made them so comfortable with each other. It's refreshing. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Pam and Roy make me so sad because there's all this history and all these sweet moments and even though they're totally not right for each other, it can be so bittersweet, you know?
I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved the part with Kenny's family, and how Pam has this whole life with Roy. I think a lot of the time that dynamic gets discarded in our excitement to hook up Jam, but I really loved it in this chapter! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Oh, yay, that's EXACTLY what I was going for, so this made me super happy, thanks!
Wow. This was so awesome. I loved the Jam scene on the roof, and how it was so much like Casino Night. I thought it was great that Pam kissed him again though! I can't wait to see what happens with Pam and Jim and Roy, although, it'll be sad not to have anyone else in the office around anymore. Unless, you're planning on following up on everyone else too.
Author's Response: Thanks much! And yeah, the idea of the office closing down for real totally bums me out.
Oh wow this is good. That wasn't surprise just happiness. I just love your tone and the fact that you mix up the angst with fun and also I can't wait to see what happens with Jim and Pam!!! Plus it was great to see Dwight. I hope the Ministry of Magic tracks him down before he can report his findings to all the other Muggles. ;)
No!!! Not the end! Never the end! I think you should ban those two words from your vocabulary. Or at least suspend them just for this story. Well, no, I'm not sure how practical it would be to ban the word the. But anyway, I've really enjoyed this, and I just don't want it to be over yet. Thanks for another great chapter!
This is awesome. I love the way you ended this here and left it so open. Great job on this whole story! You're such a great writer! ;)
Nice job! I really liked this, and I think it fit nicely with the song.
Oh, this is gonna be good. I can't wait for more! ;)
I love, love, loved this! The 80s costumes at the mall, and Andy being a total weirdo, but somehow still being perfect for her, and Jim's emo music! Too fun! All I can say is, this was a-MAY-zing. :D
I think... you've never been to Australia, but you have seen a kangaroo, you've laughed at "that's what she said," and you cut your sister's hair while she was asleep. You also: only eat tic tacs in even numbers, were never a girl scout, had a crush on Uncle Jesse, collected beanie babies, and rescued that rat. So? Am I right? (Oh, and the story was great too!)
Author's Response:
I haven't been to Australia, but I really want to. However, I AM pretty sure that I have seen a kangaroo. I have never laughed at TWSS (at least, preMichael), I didn't even get what it was for the longest time. I don't have a sister... that was actually inspired by a teacher of mine, but he actually cut his sister's cat's whiskers. I did have a crush on Uncle Jesse (still do), and I do collect Beanies. And I was CLOSE to rescuing that rat. However, I worked in a rat lab, he was just the cutest thing, and I so fell in love with him. He didn't even mind when I gave him shots. He was just a cutie pie. I totally did something like this for my facebook profile: I fell in love. Hes a bit on the small size, weighing only 142 grams. He has salt and pepper hair. He has a friendly personality, always one to please. He doesn't sweat the small stuff. I love you NM 1105.
Yeah, who said I wasn't weird?
This was submitted for the Office Fiction Writers Challenge. Kevin Malone decides to try his hand at creative writing.Hee! Someone responded to the challenge--finally! Anyway, this was awesome! Thanks for writing it.
25 My jaw just dropped. I should've seen that coming, but I didn't and it was hilarious! I'm really loving these, Moxie! I can't wait to see how (and when) it finally works out.
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! I just hope the time he gets it right will be worth the hype! ;-)
Great as always! I loved the image of them wandering around the museum, and Jim being too distracted by Pam and by his plans to really get into it. The only sad part about this chapter, was getting to the end and realizing we weren't going to get to see them all dressed up and eating a fancy dinner. I don't know why, but I was really looking forward to that.
Author's Response: awww - well I'm sure you could do their evening justice if you chose to write it Azlin! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Oh that was so cute! Totally lived up to the hype. I can't believe we got two of these in one day! What a great night for fanfic. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! So glad you enjoyed it!
"Once we had finished the season, we knew. We had the ultimate prank," Pam said breathlessly.
"A way to make Dwight Schrute believe that his world had been turned upside down, that superpowers really do exist, and that Dunder-Mifflin was hiding a secret so huge that it would stop at nothing to keep it hidden.”
Okay. I'm totally in love with this story. I'm not even that much of a heroes fan, though I have friends who are, but I'm totally psyched to see what happens to Dwight. And I absolutely love your flirty/cute Jam. This is gonna be fun!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad to hear it Azlin! I've never written a fic where Jam are already together, so I'm glad the banter works. And not to be pushy or anything, but you should totally get more into Heroes! Sooo good.
Nice, Kev! I like all the stuff you added. I think The Kid in my class was named Ricky, but I can't remember his last name. He was strange though. And a little creepy. He wore these big boots and always talked about how his Dad owned a gun. And we were in like 2nd grade. I'm still a little creeped out by that.
Author's Response:
Wow, Azlin! Usually The Kid is just weird! You had The Scary Kid - Yikes!
I'm glad you liked the changes. Muggins read through it about 6 times (at once) and gave me 3 sets of comments (at once) - this is the result! It was fun to write, that's for sure.
Thanks for beta-ing and for reviewing!
What if Pam didn't have the courage to call off the wedding? What would have happened when Jim returned?
A post-"Casino Night" AU look at season 3. Spoilers for "Casino Night" and some season 3 episodes.
This was really nice. I enjoyed the first chapter, and I'm excited to see what you have planned for the rest. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :o)