Penname: invis Real name: April
Member Since: March 26, 2007

Bio:

I thought I was just here to read, but I guess I ended up writing a little. My bad. :)

I'm switching to Yes on beta-reader, because I should have more time now that I've finished my own recent story and I'll probably take a break from writing. I don't know how many requests will come from that, so I reserve the right to change back to No if I get overwhelmed. :) But I am an unrepentant grammar Nazi, and have edited a LOT in the past, so I'm totally up for a little beta.


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Reviews by invis
Like A Falling Glass by girl7 Rated: MA [Reviews - 177] 63
Summary:

Post The Negotiation (no spoilers).

My attempt at working it all out. This will span ten chapters and will include flashbacks to previous episodes/seasons.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Darryl, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy, Toby
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36956 Read Count: 86646 ePub Downloads: 27
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 27, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh!  Squee!!!  LOVE THE ELEVATOR SMOOCHIES!  Okay, who am I kidding?  I love the whole dang thing.  This has been one of my favorite stories, and I just adore the way you ended it.  So very sweet.  And, obviously, hot, too.  :)


Author's Response: I'm really glad!  I so desperately hope that when they get together on the show (not IF, but WHEN, damn it!), we have a moment where there's an elevator smooch - even if we don't see it, just see them coming out looking all disheveled and guilty.  :o)  Thanks for reviewing!

Cold Feelings by Night Swept Rated: T [Reviews - 31] 15
Summary: Jim finds a dark new side of himself after the Roy attack. Pam and Karen get their first glimpses of it... Update: Ch4 -- Story concludes -- Jim and Pam have their showdown.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4558 Read Count: 14680 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Unwelcome

Mmmmmm....Legolas.  Okay, I can understand the attraction now.  ;)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Endgame

Oh, thank GOD!  I mean, sad for Karen, but we all know there's nothin' but Jam.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Breaking Point

Aww, I knew Angry New Jim would have to revert to Sweet Caring Jim eventually.  I kinda hope he stays that way.  That's my favorite Jim.  :)

Number 4 by bitterpill Rated: M [Reviews - 16] 6
Summary: Past Featured Story

Some steamy fun with Jim and Pam.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 350 Read Count: 4310 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 07, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hooray for #4!

Aftershock by time4moxie Rated: MA [Reviews - 47] 31
Summary: Snarky!Jim has finally pushed Pam far enough to say something.... Takes place about a handful of days after The Negotiation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4258 Read Count: 35168 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Let's give them to something to talk

SQUEE!  I'm totally going to just believe that happened.  I'm in denial, but I don't care.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: What does that even mean?

Oh, poor Pam!  And poor Karen, for that matter.  And, heck, while I'm at it, poor Jim, too.  It's all so confusing for all of them--and for all of us!  I can't wait to read more of your story.  I have a feeling it'll be a lot more satisfying an outcome than what we get to see on the show.  :)

Paperwork by shan21 Rated: T [Reviews - 59] 34
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim gets fussy and Pam gets fed up.

Spoilers through The Negotiation.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Phyllis, Toby
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3435 Read Count: 9865 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, fantastic.  Wonderful ending line.  I loved it.  I could totally see it happening.

Yeah, Some Old Fires Were Burning by ihaveboneitis Rated: MA [Reviews - 9] 11
Summary: Pam thinks about the difference between Jim and Roy as lovers. This is not pro-Roy or pro-Jim. I’m trying to find an antidote to "perfect lover Jim" and "total jerk Roy". Contains Pam/Roy, you are warned. No Spoilers.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Past, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1354 Read Count: 3281 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You Couldn't Quite Discern Me

That was a refreshing change.  I mean, not that I don't love all the other fics, but after The Negotiation, I kind of don't want to see Roy as a villain so much.  

Although I have to say, I think Pam could get Jim to be a little naughty.  He's sweet, but I know there's an edge there somewhere.  :) 

I Have a Concussion, What's Your Excuse? by WildBerryJam Rated: T [Reviews - 7] 1
Summary:

That moon-faced kid with a concussion has a conversation with "dad" (AKA Creed) Spoilers for The Injury.


Categories: Episode Related
Characters: Creed, Dwight
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Humor, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 497 Read Count: 1524 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha!  That's too funny.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

A Fool's Bargain by fasterthansnakes Rated: MA [Reviews - 197] 78
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Pam and Jim decide to get it out of their system...Literally. This idea just wouldn't get out of head, especially after all the fight fics, I figure there has to be another way to get rid of the sexual tension- why not actual 'casual' sex. Oh and it's going to really backfire. P.S. This is way fluffier than my usual stuff AND almost finished too. So there's that.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Karen
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9894 Read Count: 190688 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Mutiny on the S.S. Halpert

Hooray!!!!!!!  I was so excited to see another chapter of this!  (Well, not as excited as, say, Jim...)

I think you're missing a -lutely here, though:

“I mean my eyes can’t ever look at you again with out remembering how abso-fucking perfect every last bit of you is..."

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue- Ask Dr. Beesly-Halpert

FAWOIEFJ;OIM;VIEO;JAFWOIEJ!!!!!!!!!

So happy right now.  I'm officially back in favor of marriage.  Well, for Jim and Pam anyway.  :)  Such a great ending to a great story.  You da bomb, snakes.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: So You're Totally Over Me Right?

Yes, in fact I DO want to know what Jim is thinking.  Your powers of observation are tremendous!  As are your powers of writing the hot sex scenes.  :)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Dwight's Thighs and Aunt Lucinda's Mustache

Hee!  I like both Jim's broken brain and your dirty mind that writes him like that.  Squee!

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: That Was a Great Fight....We Should Do It Again

My brain is also broken.  However, if you stop now, it will also break my heart.  You don't want that to happen, do you?  No, of course not.  That would be unnecessarily cruel.

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue- I Dare You to Screw Me

Hee!  Yeah, that will totally backfire on them, but I can't wait to read it.  :)


Author's Response: oh and it will be good, he thinks he's sooooooooo over her right

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: So, Dinner First? Or Should We Get Right To It?

Oh, I *know* that second kiss is gonna blow 'em out of the water.  Get hoppin' on that update!  :)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: "In the Stairwell, In the Breakroom, In Your Car During Lunch..."

Yeehaw!  Good for them!  Yeah, that's totally not gonna get it out of anyone's system.  Hee!  I love it when naive plans backfire.  :)

Pole Position by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: T [Reviews - 15] 6
Summary: Thrown together during one of Michael's work functions, Pam finally lets Jim know how she feels. Post-The Negotiation and contains mild spoilers for upcoming episodes.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2976 Read Count: 6929 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She *should* go for it.  Unless the Marketing position is at corporate or something.  In which case she should go for the other position--Jim's girlfriend.  :)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whaaaat?  Did they, or is he just saying that to make the breakup stick?  Gaaaah!  Update soon or I will dieeeeee!  :)

Be All You Can Be by Wendy Blue Rated: K+ [Reviews - 51] 16
Summary: Dunder-Mifflin's Quarterly Comraderie Event takes the office to basic training! Competition and hilarity ensue.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10074 Read Count: 22536 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 26, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Few Good Men

I love it.  Your Dwight is dead on--I was actually laughing out loud!  Actually, all your voices are authentic.  Great job.  I can't wait to read more!


Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Dwight is so fun to write and I'm really happy to hear that you think I do him justice.  Thanks for reading!

You're My Best Friend by JamGirl Rated: K [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

This little ditty came about after/while listening to the song "You're My Best Friend" by Queen. I had an epiphery and had to write this. This was also stemmed by the promo for this weeks episode.

Pam makes an effort to get Jim back.


Categories: Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 826 Read Count: 2436 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2007 Updated: April 08, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: _____

Aww--SQUEE!

Aspects of Love by Fliz0nToast Rated: M [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Post-Negotiation.  Mild spoilers.  Things with Pam and Jim come to a head, but a simple sketch pulls them back together.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1118 Read Count: 1909 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Enough is enough

Oh no--go get her, Jim!

Love Ridden by ihaveboneitis Rated: MA [Reviews - 27] 7
Summary: Post-'Negotiation', spoilers through it. Jim's fed up, Pam's a little pathetic. Jim POV.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4330 Read Count: 12167 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You Say Love Is a Hell You Cannot Bear

Well, that's just great.  My heart is broken.  And that is not covered by my company's crappy health insurance.  So you'd better fix it with the next chapter.  :)

Reviewer: invis Signed
Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: It Will Only Make Me Colder

Whoa.  Angry!Jim has the mad skillz, huh?  I hope Pam wakes up and tells him she loves him soon.  It's not like her to punish him for so long.