Date: August 21, 2007 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I’ll start. I can’t roll my tongue. My favorite book is Little Women. I can count to one hundred in Spanish. I only eat tic tacs in even numbers.”
Oh God, you, me and Pam are totally one person in the same. I can and can't do all those things!! PS is that a friends reference again in there? I think so.
This is way cute and they would totally play Two Truths & A Lie because well they're Jim/Pam. Their backstories are fun to learn about and I'm leaving you another long review to read and read and not laugh about.
Boo.
Author's Response:
Wow, how do we fit all of us in one body? Can we choose Pam's body to be in? Please.... And yes, that is a total Friends reference.
I love getting reviews. They make my way to boring day not so boring.
Date: July 02, 2007 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Love this! You have their voices down well. I'm guessing the doctor thing was a reference to the fact that JK's family is full of doctors, which just makes the whole thing cuter. And the ending=perfect. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I am so glad it sounds like them, because I am always worried about that. And I wish that doctor thing was intended, but I am not that smart (that is the second or third thing that it sounds like I meant it, or was mentioned in the show, but nope, not that smart).
Thanks again for the review
Date: June 16, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww...this was adorable. I love how well they were guessing. And I LOVE that Jim kills plants...because I may or may not have the same problem (although I am getting better).
Author's Response:
Haha. yeah. I tried to make sure that it was a balance between getting it right and wrong and guessing. And also the order of truths and lies. A lot of thought went into it!
Haha. Yeah, I can keep a plant alive... but not a fish. My poor fishies don't have very good life expectancies. Oh, and that line was almost wrong... I caught it right before I posted it... I had it phrased wrong, and so, there wasn't a lie...
So glad you enjoyed. Hope your luck with plants gets better.
Date: June 15, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, basically after EVERY line I was cracking up and thinking "Oh, I've gotta comment about that!" And that would just be the most outrageously long review ever, so I had to pick my very very favorites.
I loved the part where Jim just mentioned ‘mixed berries’. No sentence explaining it. Just ‘mixed berries.’ That’s allllll he needed to say. Hahaha. Perfect. And when he said ‘cien’. Heh, too cute. Also, I like the style of writing, it was perfect for this type of story!
I’m gonna guess the truths about you to be making Barbie into a mummy, telling your parents about Santa, getting acid on your skin, cutting your sister’s hair, and not liking the taste of yogurt.
As a side note, my brother once cut my hair while I was sleeping and put make up on my face. Then took a Polaroid picture and left it on the pillow next to me. So not funny. But it kind of is now. So if you did do that to your sister I hope she's gotten over it or has a great sense of humor.
Author's Response:
Haha! Yeah, I know that feeling with some of the writers here, so I am so glad that you felt that way! Yay!
Yes, that mixed berries line was because I just recently rewatched the pilot. Its just yep. Thats all he needs to say.
Yes to mummy, yes to telling parents about Santa, yes to acid on face, yes to yogurt. Not to cutting sisters hair. I don't have a sister. that was inspired by one of my teachers... he actually cut off his sister's cats whiskers....
Haha, that sounds like a very funny photo your brother took of you... yes, I think that is one of those things you laugh about much LATER.
Date: June 15, 2007 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute! Really fluffy and adorable and just...awwww. And of course Jim neglects the game to play with her. Of course he does.
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks. Yep, I have a feeling Roy wouldn't have even listened to her, just turned up the volume even louder.
Am I making Jim too perfect? probably. I don't care.
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a cute story!
I think its true that you were never a Girl Scout and that you eat tic tacs in even numbers.
Author's Response: I WAS a Girl Scout, and I generally only eat tic tacs in even numbers (unless I get really nervous. Then I just put the entire container into my mouth at once. Once I did that and I wound up with a green tongue. I was really worried I was growing mold or something)
Date: June 15, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: June 15, 2007 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think... you've never been to Australia, but you have seen a kangaroo, you've laughed at "that's what she said," and you cut your sister's hair while she was asleep. You also: only eat tic tacs in even numbers, were never a girl scout, had a crush on Uncle Jesse, collected beanie babies, and rescued that rat. So? Am I right? (Oh, and the story was great too!)
Author's Response:
I haven't been to Australia, but I really want to. However, I AM pretty sure that I have seen a kangaroo. I have never laughed at TWSS (at least, preMichael), I didn't even get what it was for the longest time. I don't have a sister... that was actually inspired by a teacher of mine, but he actually cut his sister's cat's whiskers. I did have a crush on Uncle Jesse (still do), and I do collect Beanies. And I was CLOSE to rescuing that rat. However, I worked in a rat lab, he was just the cutest thing, and I so fell in love with him. He didn't even mind when I gave him shots. He was just a cutie pie. I totally did something like this for my facebook profile: I fell in love. Hes a bit on the small size, weighing only 142 grams. He has salt and pepper hair. He has a friendly personality, always one to please. He doesn't sweat the small stuff. I love you NM 1105.
Yeah, who said I wasn't weird?
Date: June 15, 2007 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute. I guess that you never thought you could play professional basketball.
Author's Response:
Haha. Yes, I never thought I could play pro basketball. However, I did think I had a serious soccer career until my knee blew out.
Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh.. so what did jim play in band?
Author's Response: Guitar. As inspired by the guitar in Jim's bedroom in Email Survellience
Date: June 15, 2007 09:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw.....cute! And just the right amount of quirky mixed in to the witty banter. Very in character and believable. Great job!
Author's Response:
You seriously made my day. Thanks so much for the review and rec over at TWoP. Seriously. All grins.
I don't even know what else to say, I am just smiling too much!