1 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2021 10:49 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs
This description of what Pam is like when the two of them on their own (And Pam had been wiggling even still because she was, for some reason, extremely hyper that night. She was always sort of that way whenever Roy wasn’t around. Whenever it was just the two of them. And he can remember the vibration of her laughter through his entire body and how she’d slid around in her bowling shoes) has always really stuck with me.
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2010 10:55 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
I guess you probably aren't going to given how long it's been, but I'd really like to see you finish season three and maybe even get into season four. You've written some great stories here. Thanks for that
10 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2009 10:39 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
This is really fantastic, you should definitely continue it! These add so much to the season as a whole and I love how you create your own scene and not just comment on the ones we've already seen. I always thought it was a little strange that we never heard anything about how Jim didn't go to her art show, except for her big blow up. A really good take on why he didn't make it or was really late.
9 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2008 12:12 am Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
OMG dude, seriously, continue this. I know it's been a while, but you can do it lol
Date: November 11, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
all of these were just wow =]
Date: November 11, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
all of these were just wow =]
10 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
This whole series is crazy good. I would love to see more of S3...you are really an amazing writer!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 08:34 pm Title: The Pilot: Headaches, Nothing, Vanilla
This should have a little ribbon thingy. Why does this not have a little ribbon thingy?
Date: February 17, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
It’s not about how pretty her art is. He recognizes this, understands this.
Yes, he would. How I wish this were real. *sigh*
Date: February 17, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
“If you’re going to ask if you can sire me, the answer is no.” - I just finished reading a vampire trilogy, so this had me laughing out loud. Thanks for giving me closure on the episode.
Date: February 17, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Business School: Courage and Honesty (or Lack Thereof)
If only. I love that he gets why her doing this is important, notices how she's dressed and that it means something...this has that specific mix of tenderness and funny and deep understanding that makes the Jim/Pam relationship so relatable and lovely . (And that I've missed so much in the actual show lately.) The last sentence is good and it hurts.
8 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2007 11:33 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
I'm so glad you're continuing this because it's one of my favourite series' - and one of the first I truly loved after beginning to read Office fic.
She tried to bottle the feeling inside of her, but the top wouldn’t stay on and it spilled back out of her until she was empty again, nothing but glass.
Loved that line.
Date: January 06, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Diversity Day: Windows
He doesn't say that he's got about ten at home. He just takes it from her hand, thankful to have one that ins't crumpled up.
this made me melt into a puddle of goop and i had to wait a while before my hands were solid enough to type my review...
Date: January 06, 2007 04:46 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
she imagines his words are clouds.
Oh god what a beautiful line. I love this chapter so much I want to have sex with it [/Dr. Cox] You continue to amaze and delight me. Thanks. Can't wait to see what you write when Oscar comes home.
Date: January 05, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
How had I never read this series before? I loved it! What a great idea. Can't wait to read more!
Date: January 05, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Loved it! You caught Pam's sadness so well...
10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 12:24 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Oh, this made me cry. So sad! I love it.
8 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2007 06:14 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Oh I'm really so glad you updated this- it's definitely my favorite series ever.
She wants to say that it’s because she loves him more than she’s ever loved anything and she helps him, because he’s her best friend and if she can’t have him as more, than she’ll take him like this.
That line just perfectly articulates what Pam must be going through right now. Ugh, it just breaks my heart. Seriously, this is a comedy we're watching, right??
Date: January 05, 2007 05:51 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
This is just so delicate and beautiful and really nails the pathos of this episode. Especially love your first and last lines - he's a shadow/his words are like clouds. Perfect images to describe how she feels his huge presence in her life by his absence and how nebulous/ungraspable the things she really needs from him have become. So, so sad.
Date: January 05, 2007 05:26 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Killing me. You - and the two of them. I really didn't expect Pam to lose it, but I was (oddly) glad to see it.
And now I feel so much better.
And this???
She tried to bottle the feeling inside of her, but the top wouldn’t stay on and it spilled back out of her until she was empty again, nothing but glass.
Amazing.
Date: January 05, 2007 03:38 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
His hand’s between her shoulder blades and it makes her want to tell him that she’s so incredibly lonely all the time, that she woke up on Christmas morning and when she moved her leg over, the sheets were like ice and she isn’t sure how she’s kept breathing.
That just - broke my heart. It's so unbelievably sad, this image, the entire situation she's in - it's strange how the roles've reversed, now - and just the other day I was thinking about Office Christmases and I was filled with so much sadness for her, crap, it's just freaking sad.
And I adored how she was thinking she'd just take what she gets, because that's exactly what Jim had seemed to do, before.
And finally I love that Jim finds her, because it nagged at me the way it was Roy [although he's growing on me]...stupid freaking Jim, stupid Pam; I'm just hoping the pay-off is goood.
Brilliant as always, things like broken pieces of glass; everything put together is just about beautiful. I was sad before but this has cheered me up a bit. ;) Thank you.
Date: January 05, 2007 01:10 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
So lovely and sad, especially the part about taking him however she can get him. I'm liking how they're reversing roles a little.
Date: January 05, 2007 12:40 am Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
::sigh:: if only he'd noticed this. Ugh, this just breaks my heart. Good work.
Date: January 04, 2007 11:05 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Oh, thanks for writing this again! I love this series!
Date: January 04, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Back from Vacation: A Mirror or an Echo
Love that she never looks at him, then has to sense him in other ways.
Lovely final line.