Date: December 30, 2010 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
You left this HERE?? Come on, you just got to the good stuff! Finish it up. :)
Date: December 03, 2009 05:55 am Title: Chapter 6
Jinx, my friend, 'tis the season. Do you think maybe you could finish this? Pretty please?
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2009 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG... just read all of this (so far, since it's not yet completed) and it is soooo good. I love the concept and the actual story, but just as it was getting to the point that I had been waiting for... nothing! Please continue this, please??
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2009 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Just got round to reading this, it's absolutely awesome. I hope the final chapter's not too far away :)
Date: January 05, 2009 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow... loving this.
Date: January 04, 2009 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love its a wonderful life
great story!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hell yes one more chapter and an epilogue. Man this gets better and better. I seriously get so excited when I see you have updated lol. 10/10 :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 5
God, you make me speechless every single time. Honestly, when i read the first 1/2 of chapter 1, I was like, will I like it? but omg you have written it SO well, it works :)
Author's Response: Thank you Hannah! That is so nice of you to say! I am really glad you are liking it. Thanks for reading.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
omg this is addictive :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
After enduring the sad journey, that feeling of "rebirth," whether it's George Bailey's or Jim's, always makes me feel so hopeful. You captured it well, jinx. Looking forward to the happy ending :)
Author's Response: Thanks NanReg! Love getting reviews from you! Thanks for reading. :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2009 11:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh my goodness!! That was intense yet so sweet. I can't believe how much of an ass Roy is. Pam seems to sad and defenceless without her Jim. Also poor Michael working in walmart and living at home. They all need Jim!! I like the idea of Jim having a real positive impact even on Dwight's life. I can't wait to see some interaction between our favorite Jim and Pam. :) Great Story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I am really glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: January 04, 2009 08:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Tease! Hurry up and show us Jim and Pam! Yay!
Date: January 04, 2009 04:57 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww, I love how you're resolving this. Nice parallels to the movie, too. Can't wait for our happy ending. :)
Author's Response: Thanks EH! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: January 03, 2009 11:43 am Title: Chapter 5
This is so heartfelt, I just love it. It's a perfect reflective holiday story. I think you got Jim right as the "normal peacekeeper" kid in the family and I can't wait to see what you do with Pam with Roy.
I loved this especially:
“You think you’re really funny don’t you?” He grumbled to Ed as he slammed the car door behind him.
(Sorry I put my chapter 4 review on chapter 1. D'oh.)
Author's Response: Aww jazzfan...thank you so much for your kind reviews! You rock!
10 [Report This]Date: January 02, 2009 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Jinx, I found this chap particularly touching. I know it's corny, but it really brings home how even little things we do affect others. You're doing such a great job at combining these two worlds. You're keeping me in the holiday spirit!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading NanReg! I am so glad that you are liking it.
Date: January 02, 2009 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is great, Jinx! I can't wait to find out how this is all resolved. I'm wondering if Pam is unhappily married in this alternate "Jim-Less" universe, or if Roy is still just stringing her along with empty promises.
Even though I'll always have a soft spot for Jonathan, I love how people are starting to incorporate Tom and Pete into fanfic. Even if they're idiots.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review EH! I am so glad that you are liking it. And I totally agree...Tom and Pete are idiots. :)
Date: January 02, 2009 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
I don't care that the holidays are over...I am still enjoying your story!
Author's Response: Good. :) I am so glad. Thank you for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: January 02, 2009 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Are you saying that Cujino's was where Pam and Jim had there first date that wasn't really a date?! Gasp! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
Date: January 02, 2009 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Jinxie -- so glad to see that you neglected something to write for us ;o) ITA about Jim -- I see him as being a mediator in his family with those obnoxious brothers.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Lisa! I am glad you are reading and liking it. :)
Date: January 02, 2009 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so in love with this story. Please update soon. Surely there's somewhere else to put the kid.
10 [Report This]Date: December 31, 2008 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
WHAT? The chapter ended? :( Come on, I need to find out what happens!
Date: December 31, 2008 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4
This story is getting better and better. I can't wait for the confrontation with Pam!
9 [Report This]Date: December 30, 2008 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ahhhhh! Jinx, you tease! I was so caught up in this chap, I didn't want it to end. Now I'm going to go to bed with visions of Pam as Donna Reed in my head :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 25, 2008 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Merry Christmas, Jinxcoke! I've been looking forward to sitting down to read this. The family just left, and here I am. It was nice to have three chaps to read at once. I only wish there were more! It's a Wonderful Life is one of my sentimental favorites, and you've captured the feeling quite well. Poor Jim! I love that Ed Truck is his guardian angel--very cute. Really looking forward to seeing what else you have in store.
10 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG I can't believe this is how you ended it, how evil are you lol. Update NOW please eeek.