Date: February 25, 2009 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. It *was* the missing scene.
Date: February 10, 2009 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
So, so nice.
8 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2009 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a perfect backstory to what we saw on tv. So beautifully romantic. And how sweet of Jim to think they'd made some progress. Great job.
Date: February 08, 2009 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Sounds EXACTLY like Jim Halpert. Well done!
Date: February 05, 2009 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is how that conversation happened. No doubt. Love Pam's subtle little prompts that Jim - of course - picks up. I have no doubt he's told her all those things many times before - but knowing he told her dad, and in that bittersweet context, was just so touching.Thanks for connecting the dots so well, Lovefool!
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY was hoping for some fics like these, and as usual you made me VERY happy. Aw Jim, the poor guy :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
so cute (:
Date: February 05, 2009 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like the way Pam was 'bribing' Jim to talk to her dad.
Nice job.
Date: February 05, 2009 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. What a sweet and tender story between Pam's two men. I think you captured the moment between these two men with kindness and sensitivity. Great story.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Snapping out of a long reviewing hiatus to say how brilliant and wonderful I thought this was. Especially perfect:
Jim bit his lip. "Thanks...I...She's.............I can't imagine not being with her. Or...wait," he said shaking his head. "I can imagine not being with her," Jim said, with an awkward smile. "Never want to go back there again."
A great idea for a fic and really, really well done.
Date: February 05, 2009 06:46 am Title: Chapter 1
I imagined this conversation to take place at home, over breakfast or something instead over the phone like it sort of seemed on the show. I <3 Jim so much. Nicely done, LF.
9 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I think you created a very realistic scene here. I like it! I could just feel what Jim was feeling. I like the interior thoughts you chose. There are too many for me to list. I'd end up including too much of the story!
Date: February 05, 2009 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovefool, this was truly perfect. I wish we somehow could have seen this play out. Jim's awkwardness and sincerity make my heart skip a beat. You wrote him so well. Great job, you :)
Date: February 05, 2009 05:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Very plausable - I loved that Jim outed himself about the one week engagement ring purchase.
Nicely done.
Date: February 05, 2009 05:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Scruffy!John looks fine to me, so Jim could skip shaving every few days or so haha!
Guys suck! That is the way that happens. If the guy is not Jim Halpert of John Krasinski, he sucks. Okay, maybe a few other fictional characters don't suck. But real life guys, they do.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great!! I loved the evidence you included about buying the ring after a week to prove all the things Jim said to Pam's dad were true. And I also thought you handled the ending quite nicely too, with Jim thinking he had succeeded. I can definitely see this fitting into the canon really well; wonderful job!
9 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2009 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1
ohh I liked this a lot. I was hoping to see way more fic this week about that perfect lovely episode so I was so happy to see some, especially from you! great job! :o)