oh my god, beautiful.

Ha, loved this chapter. Loved that they were kind of like kids again, sneaking around and sheepish, when they're moms are with them. Too cute. Hope we get a little back story about the very beginning of their relationship? I love this damn story.

Author's Response: Count on a few flashbacks.

ha, these kids are like rabbits. love this story.

Author's Response: 20 some odd years built up between them. Once the juice is loose, it ain't stop flowin'. I have no earthly idea what that means, but it felt Michaelish.

okay, frickin cute.

Author's Response: Ha! Thank you!

ahh i love this story. please don't ever let it end, ha.

Author's Response: I know, I\'m in love with writing it, and I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it. I\'m still not sure where I want to end it, but I doubt it will go more than 24, 25 chapters. I\'m not sure you guys will want to keep reading after that long. Haha.

i hate you, because every time i read this story, i'm always looking at my scrollbar and getting sad as it inches down and signals the end of the chapter. i love this story, i wish i had a jim!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! There really aren\'t enough Jims in the world. Seriously, I don\'t care how old his parents are- they need to start getting busy and multiply. Fast. Lots and lots of boys. And I will have lots and lots of daughters who can marry them. Ha-ha.

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siggghhh, wonderful story! i think i said this in another review, but i'm so glad i actually took the chance to read this AU. before this, i wouldn't have taken a second glance, because, after all, i don't watch a show every week about pam and jim and their college kid life, you know? but this was so great, so i'm glad i started reading, because i got hooked!

um, how can i be subtle? please please please do a sequel. i think there would definitely be enough basis for one. i want to see jim and pam reach their respective career goals together, and do all that couple stuff, of course. =) great job!

Author's Response: I\'m so happy that you took a chance on my story and that you enjoyed it. I was a bit reluctant myself at starting an AU, especially one away from Scranton and in college but hey- inspiration strikes and I just go with it. ;)

I haven\'t completely tossed away the idea of a sequel, because Chicago Jim and Chicago Pam still have a lot of growing to do. You just might see something soon. As you go down my reviews, you will probably see my responses go a little something like this: \"I don\'t know if I will do a sequel... Ok, so I will THINK about doing a sequel... Ok, yeah, I\'ve been tossing around ideas for a sequel... Yes, I might do a sequel now... A sequel may possibly be possible.\" So by the end of it all, I\'ll finally say, \"Ok, fine, sequel is posted. Go read!\" Haha. You all are wonderful motivators. Although, I really do want to start writing again. I have enjoyed sharing this story with you so much.

this was beautiful! i sat down to scan over it quick, since i'm at work, and ended up having to count it as my break. great job.

I could echo everyone's thoughts, but I'm tired, and I've read this so many times tonight. You are so great at writing these two. I could copy and paste so much into this review that was written so well .. it was just beautiful.

And just sexy. There's a lot of smut out there, and even the good stuff isn't always "sexy." These chapters were sexy. Definitely.

This review is totally hollow because it's three in the morning, and it's the last thing I'm doing before I head to bed. But, seriously, great job. Sometime soon I plan to make my way through your stories and just read 'em all. Great, great job!

Author's Response: Yanana - repeat readers always flatter me, so thank you. And sexy? :: blushes :: Glad you think so. It\'s probably what I was aiming for. Happy reading, dearie.

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God, I love a good fic about independent Pam!

I love this story! Hope we get the next update soon. =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, yanana, I'll try to get something out as soon as I can! :)

Ack, I love this story! I hope you update it soon. This makes me ache to see more of Jim as a dad on the show.

Author's Response: Okay, it makes me want to cry that you have reviewed my story. You're one of my fave writers on here, so to know you are enjoying my story makes me so happy. Thanks for taking the time to review it. I know, right? After last night. I NEED more Daddy Jim.