Penname: time4moxie Real name: Moxie
Member Since: September 21, 2006

Bio:

 

Writer. Stalker. Hussy.  Not necessarily in that order. 

Reviews are like crack, without the degenerative physical manifestations.

Author of the Month: April 2018  


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Snip by Colette Rated: T [Reviews - 41] 20
Summary: Jim has three haircuts and finds his jump shot.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Childhood, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2202 Read Count: 13174 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2007 Updated: December 17, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Another Haircut

Loved the first chapter, totally relieved the second.  Looking forward to Pam turning into some sort of anti-Delilah. ;-)

Oh, but you forgot the part about the butt-sex.  ;-) 



Author's Response:

Dang, I knew I forgot something ;-) Next chapter is almost done...just needs a few tweaks. Thanks, you!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Samson and Delia

Sorry I didn't review this last night when I first read it - it took me a while to decide which part I liked best:  the idea of Jim 'testing the waters' of his Philly Jim dreams, Kelly and her saucy bob, or the image of Pam wearing Jim's old boxers.  

In the end I think I have to go with the Hooter's barbershop. ;-)

There's a reason I want to be just like you when I grow up, Colette.  You're all sorts of awesome.   



Author's Response:

You and Michael with the Hooters ;-)

Thrilled you found so much to like here...and you have awesome to spare already, Mox. Thanks again, m'am.

 

Snow Daze by carbondalien Rated: K+ [Reviews - 32] 15
Summary: A snowstorm makes the roads extremely unsafe, forcing the Dunder-Mifflin employees to stay put for at least a few extra hours. Fluff 'n' stuff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Andy, Angela, Creed, Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Kevin, Michael, Oscar, Pam, Phyllis, Toby
Genres: Fluff, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9882 Read Count: 19678 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2007 Updated: December 21, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Finally had a chance to read this - good stuff!  Looking forward to more Angela/Jim interaction.... :D

Author's Response: Angela/Jim interaction is a deliciously awkward thing (which I looooove). Glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Very sweet ending!  I just wish the show was back to see Dwight and Angela really make up! Hope your wisdom teeth discomfort passes soon!!! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Right now I can\'t wait to eat some real food. Pudding, Jello, and mashed potatoes are not really that filling.

Shift by thirtypercent Rated: MA [Reviews - 140] 93
Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Jim never went to Stamford? What if Pam started making life changes a little sooner?

An AU look at season 3.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23367 Read Count: 98165 ePub Downloads: 57
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2007 Updated: May 15, 2013
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Sometimes everything is wrong

very nice AU - looking forward to more!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much, moxie! I think it'll be tricky to do this AU justice, but I'm giving it my best shot. :)  Thanks for the review!

Summary: Just a short little story of Jim being crafty...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Jim, Pam
Genres: Holiday, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1135 Read Count: 2106 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice - and really kind of scary since I'm currently working on a short Jam piece that also centers on the idea of Christmas cards.  :-D

Yah for Viewmont Mall! 

Summary:

It's a "12 Days of Christmas"-theme for this year's party...but the five gold rings aren't appetizers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6966 Read Count: 12920 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: December 24, 2007
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Four calling salesmen

So glad  to see a longer story from you!!  (and in case you never noticed, I have a particular soft spot for the 12 days of christmas.)  ;-)

Author's Response: Yes, in fact I knew that. But I didn't think you'd mind if I horned in a little bit on your territory! :)  Thanks for commenting- more soon! It's fun to write ensemble again, it's been a while.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Four calling salesmen

horning in on my territory?  Hardly!  I was already stepping on toes.... ;-) Now get back to writing.  :-D

Author's Response: Ha! Yes, ma'am. In fact, I'm proof-reading chapter two right now.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam, moments from each month, starting with May 2007.  Just sort of filling in some blanks.  Some fluff, a little angst here and there. Eventually I'll get through a whole year.  Spoilers through "The Job," I guess. 
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8301 Read Count: 11978 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2007 Updated: January 23, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: December 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: May to October

I think you are too hard on yourself.  I think the whole thing was really, really lovely - which is saying a lot given that I always kinda believed they said I love yous sooner than you suggest they did.  But you made it completely believable, and I think you captured what initial awkwardness between them might have been like.  Good job.  I'd love to see the next six months, since TPTB seem fit to deny us....

Author's Response: Thanks, moxie!  Who knows, maybe the I love yous came on the first date?  It's hard to say with these two crazy kids.  I'm not going on strike anytime soon, so this wil get updated eventually.  

Summary: The fall-out from ‘The Job.’ Some people watch Dreamgirls, crying into their wine, and some people snuggle. Others commute and are secretly voyeurs. Rated K+
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: David Wallace, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1237 Read Count: 2970 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed
Date: January 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this - it was nice new approach to The Job, and who doesn't love more David Wallace??  :-)

You might want to put spoilers for branch wars and not fun run; I'm sure everyone has seen it by now, but karen's move to Utica wasn't mentioned until Branc Wars.

good job!  Happy New year! 



Author's Response: oh david wallace is my favourite new toy :) i\'m glad you liked it, thanks! i just added the spoilers for branch wars - thank you for the suggestion.\r\n\r\nhappy new year to you as well!

Summary: Roy rings in the new year. Unspoiled season 4 setting.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Roy
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 317 Read Count: 2350 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww...trying to make us feel sympathy for a Roy?  I guess the clueless deserve our compassion this time of year.   :-)

I liked it, in that achy, kinda pulling at your heart strings kind of way.   Do you know one of the fanfics I find myself going back to in my mind is your Eggshells?  It's true.  :-)



Author's Response:

I think of "Eggshells" every time I boil eggs for any reason. I guess that's not what you mean, though, eh? Hee.

Seriously, thank you. That's so cool. I really think that it took so much for them to "break through their shells, but now they're going to be so, sooo happy.  Not so much for Roy, but if he'd just try to learn from his break-up with Pam...well, there's hope. It is a new year, after all. Thank you!

Summary: They didn’t get there by immaculate conception. Whoever said pregnancy was chaste - or simple?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Dwight, Michael
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5548 Read Count: 20553 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2008 Updated: January 10, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Sweet Things, Salty Things

I wish either of my pregnancies had been a quarter that exciting.  ;-)  and I could totally picture a farm scene mural with Mose sketching in somewhere, ala Where's Waldo..

Very nice, with your usual spin of vivid imagery.  Even mundane things get good treatment with you.  



Author's Response: Ha - I like the Mose=Waldo motif. And thanks a lot, Mox...what can I say? I'm a mundane kind of girl ;-)

Bonus Gifts by shan21 Rated: K [Reviews - 32] 33
Summary: Past Featured StoryHow would things have turned out if Pam read the card that came with her teapot?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3628 Read Count: 6207 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2008 Updated: January 05, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bonus Gifts

that was an awesome twist to the mysterious christmas card, shan!  I knew you wouldn't let me down.  You rock!!


Author's Response: Thanks moxie! You rock more!

Summary: Jim. Pam.  An airport.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1476 Read Count: 3687 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah, you definitely should start hanging out at airports when you need to break that writer's block.  That was awesome, K.  :)

Author's Response:

Well - not exactly awesome but thank you.   You should go back and read it now - without the half finished thoughts and the typos.   :)

And I hang out in airports plenty - it doesn't always work.

Summary: An unexpected question and a fight bring old issues to the surface.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3238 Read Count: 4141 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 9
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute!  It must be something in the air - I've got Jam moving in together on my mind, too.... :-)

share my world by Sharipep Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 10
Summary:

Jim is feeling insecure and could use a little reassurance from Pam.

A oneshot in two parts.

Spoilers for Local Ad

Thanks as always to WildBerryJam, Best Beta Alive!


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2617 Read Count: 6149 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Friday

interesting new perspective on their relationship - looking forward to more!

Author's Response: thanks a bunch moxie that means a lot. i\'m surprised by the requests for more, I will definitely take it into consideration. just need the right inspiration. i\'m brainstorming, maybe another part or two is possible. anyway thank you for reading!! :)

Summary: Three years after the cameras have left... Jim reflects on what has happened.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1874 Read Count: 3015 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All These Years

my comment:  Waaaaaah!!!!

I wished this sucked so I could tear it apart, purely for spite.  But I can't.  so damn you.

(now isn't that the best review you've ever received?!)  ;-) 



Author's Response: Let me check... Yup, best review. ;) I added a little bit more than the original that I had sent you. Heh...

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All These Years

Yes, I did notice the extra stuff, and it did add to more clarity.  Not that I believe for a minute Jim and Pam wouldn't have worked out.  Evil woman.  :-P

Author's Response:

Heh... I could have done much, much worse. Like had Jim cheat on Pam with Sara or something. :P

Remember... Blame Jenna! :D 

Sleepless by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 44] 21
Summary: Five nights when Pam can't sleep.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1698 Read Count: 16065 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2008 Updated: January 15, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Silence

Sorry I'm so late in reviewing - there are simply not enough hours in the day lately.  I liked this idea - I think I've missed "5 things" stories in general.  :-)  My favourite nights?  Well, the night before Jim's return was so exquisitely sad because I can believe she really was that hopeful, that night-before-Christmas feeling flying around in her head and stomach.  It's painful even now to think about that time, and we know now how it finally works out!  I think you captured that night perfectly.  The "it's a date" night wins for pure fluffy love - you know you should feel free to expand that chapter into a whole 'nother fic.  I would certainly not complain. :-D

Author's Response: Don't apologize! With all the great new fic being published, I'm honored when anyone takes the time to read mine, honestly! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I have missed the 5-things format, too (I like structure to hang stories on). It was a lot of fun to explore the emotional journey of Pam in this way. Thank you very much!

This by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 24] 16
Summary:

Just a little one-shot I actually started a long time ago.  It's set immediately post DM Infinity and is a shameless bit of fluff with a pinch of steam.  :o)

As always, feedback is much appreciated!  


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1234 Read Count: 5158 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww - so very nice and warm.  I won't need an extra blanket in this cold hous tonight - I'll just plan on reading this a few more times.  :)  

Author's Response:

In the interest of full disclosure: Seeing a review from you literally made me go, "Oh!" right out loud.  (It's not unlike the response I'd have if Gordon Ramsay approved a dish I prepared....)  Anyway, my dog Max would like for me to pass along that he's indignant I woke him from his 2+ hour nap with my enthusiasm.... :o)

Seriously, though, thanks so much for your kind words -- you know they mean a lot. 

(And BTW - I'm assuming the package made its way to you quickly....?)

Mercy by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 5
Summary:

Their first date gets derailed. Somehow, that's OK.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Postponed But Not Forgotten
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 3512 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ah..... I could relive the potential first date scenario over and over again.  Thanks for such a sweet interpretation!

(and how appropriate the disturbance was caused by Michael!) 



Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, it would have to be a medical emergency to keep them apart, wouldn't it? And Hurricane Michael is always a threat in that office. Glad you enjoyed- I loved this challenge idea.

Summary: Pam and Jim discuss Jessica Simpson...among other things.  :)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: Let Your Hair Down
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1144 Read Count: 5260 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2008 Updated: January 22, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Of the CW, US Magazine and other things...

Oh, I love Jim/Pam banter SOOOO much - and your style has been missed.  Really.  I'll be reading this a few more times tonight.... 


Author's Response: Awww.  You're very sweet.  Thanks Mox.  Glad you liked it!

Bird on the Wire by llorin Rated: MA [Reviews - 10] 9
Summary: During and after S3's Business School. It's the night of Pam's art show, but Karen wants Jim to stay home.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1918 Read Count: 5732 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2008 Updated: January 23, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bird on the Wire

Seriously?  Not bad at all - and that's saying something given my deep dismissal of all things Karen.  ;-)  I like your writing style - thanks for sharing!

Summary: Phyllis's Wedding Redux.  Pam's getting ready to leave with Roy, Jim doesn't let her.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1595 Read Count: 5403 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2008 Updated: January 24, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: January 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I can see the destiny you sold...

lovely dialogue - I found myself reading this over a few times, just to pretend that's what really happened.

So glad you're writing again, xoxoxo



Author's Response: Aww thank you.  I'm glad to BE writing again.   I know.  Sometimes it's nice to pretend things didn't happen they way they actually did in "reality". 

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291250 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10
Date: February 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Pam with Jim's brothers is like my favourite non-smut scenario ever.  Can't wait until next chapter.  :D


Author's Response:

Now see, just think if you'd been careless and forgotten to include the "non" in that first sentence -- oh the scandal!  (Hee, I couldn't resist!)  So glad you like the brothers; I just love envisioning them all....sigh.  :o)

Thanks for reviewing!