Penname: falldownmore Real name: emily
Member Since: October 28, 2006

Bio:
AKA verygoodbread on livejournal.

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Sheer by goodmatch Rated: MA [Reviews - 41] 13
Summary: Present day, Jim works at Dunder Mifflin but pam never did. He goes to a strip club for his birthday and she is a stripper there... I got this idea after I saw Employee of the Month with Jenna Fischer and didn't decide to do anything about it until after Jim said he had never seen a stripper and Jenna was approached by Elizabeth and told her she could strip. I just loved the idea of the "Damsel in Distress", Enjoy!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8182 Read Count: 21448 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: February 13, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: February 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Club

i am IN LOVE with this fic. i can't wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA proposal. Pure fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2586 Read Count: 8906 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2007 Updated: February 11, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: February 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: It's the subtle laugh that will keep ringing.

love.

Summary: How Jim hates, and then begins to love mornings.


*I posted this yesterday but took it off and edited it*
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2098 Read Count: 3849 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2007 Updated: February 14, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: February 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i'm glad you decided to beta it :) it's much easier to read now, and i still love the story!


Author's Response: thanks!

The Big Reveal by nqllisi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 27] 15
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam spills her secret, but Karen is listening.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Other
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 737 Read Count: 3741 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2007 Updated: February 15, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: February 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why you shouldn't eavesdrop

lol that was amazing. that last line just tranformed the entire story. loved it.


Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun to sort of change it up!

Summary: A heated fight ends in and unexpected way.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1075 Read Count: 3461 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2007 Updated: February 19, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 9
Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i'm a sucker for angry sex, so this fic was just perfect for me. i also love that pam's totally a high-powered gallery owner with heels and manicured nails. that's hot.

Summary:

Pam thows her old troubles out the window, but new challenges for the honest new Beesley come her way. This all takes place immedietly starting after Cocktails. Spoilers thro that episode! Enjoy everyone!

Disclaimer: I don't own anything....I do happen to own a Dwight Shrute bobble head, and all of my little JAM sketches... <3


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6308 Read Count: 7972 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: February 26, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: February 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: The Room Assignments

while i'm really enjoying the idea of the story, i keep getting a bit lost, mostly because there are a lot of instances where you've gotten your homonyms mixed up (except/accept ... aloud/allowed, that kind of thing) and have quite a few grammar errors in general. i really like this story, and i think these mistakes could easily be fixed with a beta reader :)

Elsewhere by girl7 Rated: MA [Reviews - 195] 59
Summary:

Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31449 Read Count: 115921 ePub Downloads: 34
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i'm just loving this story so far. i can't wait for more. i just adore the angst and the unspoken feelings and yes. perfection.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I miss the angst/unresolved sexual tension from last season so much...

Patterns by Misao7 Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 8
Summary: Past Featured Story

But Jim likes the way Jim's room is, and if it's only a few strokes, he can pretend it's all still the same.

Jim tries to paint his room one day, but never quite finishes the job.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Karen
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 954 Read Count: 2852 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2007 Updated: March 02, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love love loved it.

Summary: Three-part series detailing three times Pam stayed over at Karen's and realized something new.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Karen, Michael, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5600 Read Count: 9010 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Party Planning Party

i'm loving this so far! :D

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 288987 ePub Downloads: 114
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: March 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells

ahhhhh you can't leave it there!!! i will give you a chocolate bar and some diet pepsi (which is apparently all i have to eat in my house) if you write more. soon. sooner than soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the offer - but I promise I will write more free of charge.  I've already started the first few lines, so just hang in there! (and go shopping!!  Haven't you ever heard of green leafy vegetables??) ;-)

 

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: April 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: For I have known them all already, known them all

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHOMGGGGG. okay so this is like my favorite fic EVER and omg how could you leave it there and ksdfjgh. 

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: March 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: In the room the women come and go

okay, so just THINKING about jim and pam THINKING about talking about sex gets me THINKING how bad i want this next chapter. dfjkgh.

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: When the evening is spread out against the sky

oh man. you're KILLING me here! basically, you need to update like right away. MY LIFE IS IN YOUR HANDS!

Elephant by lama Rated: M [Reviews - 12] 4
Summary: "Pam called me tonight." It was best to be blunt.

Post Cocktails.
Categories: Present
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 811 Read Count: 2054 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2007 Updated: March 07, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: March 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Elephant

omg every time i hear elephant, it reminds me of the whole love triangle thing. and i'm SO GLAD someone finally put it into a fic. love it!


Author's Response: Thank God I'm not the only one!  If I had any editing skills at all, I'd make a fanvid of the quadrangle to this song.  Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks!

Summary: Sometime post Return. Jim drives Pam home and smuttiness ensues.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2290 Read Count: 13878 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst

allow me to be the first to comment with this insightful little note:

fkjgh.

you know it. 



Author's Response: Well said. :)

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst

Jamster ... seriously? if you hate so much to leave a negative review, then ... maybe don't leave one. life isn't all sunshine and daisies. that's what makes this fic so REAL. unfold managed to paint a picture of the pain these two have been and continue to go through. it's not easy to do. and when you consider just what jim's gone through in regards to pam, i wouldn't put it past him to try to hurt her the way she hurt him. again, that's reality.

and erin, jeez. i hope this doesn't put you off writing this kind of thing again. this story was so insanely poignant and gripping and painful and amazing and honestly, i don't think it would have been as good without the ending it had. don't ever change!

Morning Angel, here.  Jamster  is allowed to leave whatever review as long as it is not insulting the author, which it was not.  You have your right to your opinion and so does Jamster, and the purpose of leaving reviews is to comment to the author, not to other reviewers.  Thanks.

Summary: I believe the title sums it up quite nicely. Mild spoilers through Back from Vacation.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Jan, Kelly, Meredith, Michael, Other, Ryan
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1864 Read Count: 2924 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2007 Updated: March 13, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg. the dwight/angela one SLAYED me. brian boitano. omg. you win.

Author's Response:

Brian Boitano would totally be Angela's type!  Especially in light of her recent... chemistry?  With Oscar.  Thanks for the review!

Summary: A short example of the type of literary masterpiece that suits the new "Bad Fanfic" challenge. Please enjoy the glory of this great work of art.
Categories: Other, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 4118 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination of the written word.

i haven't laughed that hard (twss) whilst reading a fic in quite some time.

tallly. omg. 



Author's Response: Excellent....."laughing" and "TWSS" were what I was going for!

Summary: Jim and Pam see each other out in a club, set in season 2. Smut happens.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3399 Read Count: 16848 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 5
Date: March 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was just totally hot.

Summary: Jim. Pam. Hotel room. Set at some point in the not too distant future.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1443 Read Count: 13810 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

you already know that i love this. and that i'm an insane fangirl when it comes to your fic. so there you go.

remember how you ruined the number four for me? thanks again for that D: 

Summary:

Jim and Pam are good buddies. Jim helps her with her two problems: work and Roy. But what if she didn't have those problems? What would happen if they didn't have Dunder Mifflin in common?

A/U story. Basically, fluff, friendship and...romance?  Spoilers for all seasons (sort of).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7460 Read Count: 12211 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2007 Updated: April 23, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 6
Date: March 31, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Find me

i'm liking this story, but i think you could probably use a beta ... you've got a few mistakes in here that sort of hinder the flow of the fanfic ... 'flurecent', 'your' instead of 'you', that kind of thing. nothing a little spellcheck and a helpful beta-friend couldn't fix :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm in the process of getting a beta. You're right about all those little typos that you tend to miss.
Thanks so much for the review!
cheers.
--Lex

Summary: Past Featured Story

In the end, it is never, never giving up.

[Post Cocktails]


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3307 Read Count: 6302 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2007 Updated: March 24, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

okay. so would you judge me if i told you i actually teared up reading this? that's something i NEVER do. so that's a pretty big deal.

this was just too beautiful for words, really.  



Author's Response:

Judge you?  Probably more like tackle you.  In a happy way.

Thank you so much! 

Summary: Pam, Jim, skinned knees. Somewhere in the middle of season three. 
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 940 Read Count: 2736 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2007 Updated: March 25, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: March 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: until i bail out and kiss behind your ears

oh geez. way to totally kill me dead. thanks for that.

Summary: What does the song that you can't stop singing say about you? Have you ever had a song stuck in your head? Well, it happens at Dunder Mufflin too. This is just a fun piece with 5 different employees getting caught singing to themselves or to someone else.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2069 Read Count: 2051 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2007 Updated: March 27, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed
Date: March 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Been Caught Singing

this was really cute! one little nitpick ... it's 'keane', not 'keene'. :)


Author's Response: Oh my gosh!  How humiliating!  I am so not cool now.  :-)   sending mental jelly beans your way!

Summary: Past Featured StoryMichael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.
Categories: Other, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Bob Vance, Dwight, Jan, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Pam/Other, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44699 Read Count: 129863 ePub Downloads: 45
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2007 Updated: April 17, 2007
Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10
Date: April 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

um.

that's just ...

uh.

okay so would it be completely inappropriate if i told you how arousing this was? because really ... like ... seriously. i honestly have no words. 

so i'm just gonna ... you know. re-read this a few times. and things. 



Author's Response: Hee!  This is verygoodbread, correct?  And now we are LJ friends ;) Thank you!!