A young nurse who still dreams of being a writer someday. And being married to John Krasinski.
Roy cannot lean like Jim, and Karen cannot prank like Pam. It's just my opinion, but it's true.
Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
10 YYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*breathes* THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY MORNING!!!!
So how soon after the ringing of the doorbell on the first date would you take your panties off?
Hang on, back up, on a date with Jim Halpert (first or otherwise) who would have panties on to begin with? ^__^
(sorry, the ho in me just HAD to reply to that... back to being prudish innocent StarShine)
OOOH! You are naughty! Honestly, Karen probably answered the door in her starks and said "how about we do dessert first?" Just one prudish innocent ho talking to another. Nothing more to see here, folks, move along.
10 So glad you had fun on your vacation. NOW WRITE MORE!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!
10 i LOVE phyllis' dare! awesome awesome writing! i sure didn't see that one coming! jim would be a sweetheart, wouldn't he?
more please!
10 NO!!!!!!!!! Bitch!! *gasps, covering mouth* Did I say that out loud? I mean, that's not nice, Karen!
10 beautifully written! loved it!
almost didn't read, but then i saw who the author was, and of course, i did a little dance...
I LOVE AND MISSED YOU NEJ!!
10 AAAAAHHHH!!!! THIS IS AWESOME!!! yeah, when i saw the episode i thought, "ouch! casino night was 'just' a kiss?" i like your interpretation 100 times better!!
Author's Response: Yes! I incited capitalized exclamations from a reader! Thank you! I definitely wish that this was the truth. It doesn't really change anything practical (the situation is still the same) but it makes me a teensy bit more hopeful.
10 yes, it was angsty, but it was soo beautiful. i love that pam read the card, even if it means twice the heartache for jim... i don't usually like angst, but this one is good!
Author's Response:
I don't normally like angst either! I just couldn't help writing an angsty chapter. I think Jim has a lot of latent anger and pain over the whole Casino Night thing.
Thank you for calling my writing beautiful. I think that your statement about the chapter was really beautiful, actually (just to get all meta-confusing on you). Twice the heartache for Jim. I didn't think about it that way, but it's true.
10 YAY!!! That was awesome Moxie! Thank you, thank you, for such a wonderful cheek fic! And I said before that I liked S3 cheeks better than S2 or S1... well, I take it back. Thanks to you, I'm lovin' those pinchable full cheeks!
Author's Response: Well, then my work here is done! I'm glad I've helped you to see the light!! :-)
A proposal. Pure fluff. 10 This was so beautiful, unfold. The impromptu proposal seems just like them, and the small wedding... wow, just wonderful!
10 i didn't review this yet? unbelievable.. you know i love me some jam, and i love babies. and then you give me not just jam, not just jam and a baby, but jam and TWO babies? i love you. i really really do.
Author's Response: thank you starshine! I love you too!! :)
13 A five things prompt that inspired me. Spoilers up to Traveling Salesmen, to be safe.
10 aawww... yay! good things happen in hospitals too! although, i'm a little confused as to how you break a collarbone while moving a box mattress... still, AWESOME fic!
Author's Response: Hmm, well, it happened to my friend. It was heavy and just kind of squashed her. Maybe it was a freak accident!There was no hot husband, though, just a careless brother. Thanks for reading!
I've always loved the secret connection between Phyllis and Jim...she always knows what's going on...10 SQUEE!!! I love phyllis.. can totally see her writing these emails..
10 I LOVE YOU MOXIE!!!!! AWESOME, AWESOME, fic.. was thinking of listing my favorite lines, but, that would be pretty much every sentence, so..
my only teeny tiny beef is that no nurse or tech would take a blood presssure on the same arm that has an IV, cuz that's a surefire way to lose that line. and that's just me being anal... of course, if i were jim/john's nurse, i'd probably do it anyways just to give me an excuse to closely inspect his arms again... ^_^
Back on topic, you frickin' rock.
10 wow.. and here's the crazy thing: i've been planning to donate tomorrow! first time! (would have done it sooner, but couldn't for medical reasons) and yes, i'm nervous.. but i've always wanted to... of course, if i had a certain 6'3" guy there to hold my hand, well, i'd go every week! great story, i love pam. ^_^
She (finally!) talks to him.
10 this was just beautiful. wow. me likes. and pinchy shoes suck..
Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed, and pinchy shoes do suck - I own way too many pairs of them. Darn the pointy toes!
9 yay for ryan! i like this!
Now that he's with Jan, there's so much Michael's learned about love. He feels obligated to spread the word. Set sometime Season 3-ish but not specific.
10 That has got to be one of the best propsals I've read! awesome, awesome, awesome, xoxoxo!!!!
Oh, and the whole Dimonelle and cubic zirconia thing--killed me. Seriously, I'm dead.
Aw shucks StarShine. So glad you liked it!! It's not the first time I've had Jim ask her so I was a tad worried that it wouldn't play out well. Glad to hear it wasn't the case!
I hope someone comes to resuscitate you - 'cause I'd hate to get a murder rap. :)
10 Oh wow, this is so cute, and painful, and just like the show, but in a good way (since me and the writers are not speaking at the moment)... please, PLEASE write more!
Author's Response:
Thanks StarShine. I feel your pain - but lately I just keep thinking that if they let Pam and Jim get all this crap out of their system there will be nothing to stand in their way. :)
10 SQUEEEEE!!!! such a great read! and the whole tall shoes thing made me laugh.. since i'm 5'1" and can definitely relate!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm only slightly taller than that and I remember from past pictures having to stand ona box and it was embarrasing...thanks for the review!
There's a reason Meredith gets drunk on Valentine's Day, and it's not the obvious one. Spoilers through "Phyllis' Wedding". 10 WOW. nej, when you make a comeback...you REALLY make a comeback.. wow... i'm speechless. LOVE IT.. and that's pretty much all i can say coherently right now..
Author's Response: Thanks. Didn't really think of this as a comeback, but okay. :) I am glad you enjoyed this.
It's amazing the magic a simple Valentine's Day card can hold. Throw in a troubled relationship and a good snowfall, and it's a holiday to remember.10 YAY! happy valentine's day, indeed! great story, as usual, moxie!
is that really a card? cuz that's frickin' hilarious..
Yes, it certainly is! I have it on my desk, I bought it 3 weeks ago, which lead me to thinking about this story.
I know everyone's begging for a chapter 4, but personally, i kinda like where you left it off.. the open-ended-ness of if all works for me.
Please don't throw trash at me.
No trash thrown at all. I expect I'm just going to leave it as is, honestly. Maybe I'll write another story with the leftovers of this one!
So glad you liked it!!
Eight years has passed since Jim and Pam have spoken. Many things have changed in their lives including a little girl that captures their hearts.
10 I'm actually CRYING!!! I almost NEVER cry while reading fanfic! It's pretty embarassing how in love I am with this fictional character.. *sigh* please please please write more!!!
Author's Response: It's a little weird how I love that you're crying. HA! That makes any author's day....ha! Thanks for reading and falling in love with these fictional characters as much as I do.
10 DADDY!JIM!!!!!! IN LOVE with this chapter. Seriously, beautiful.. gah, I'm at a loss for words!