"It seems odd, in the ironic, slap-in-the-face kind of way that since her incident, it’s been easier to let him go."
Something bad happens to Pam. Very Dark.
Jim's reaction was really real. I think you've captured everyone so well in thsi tragedy.
That was totally worth the wait. I loved Jim breaking down with Pam's mom. And I think it is really good that they've connected, and can help Pam together (or at least share stories).
This story is so sad, but so compelling and wonderfully written. Thanks!
So excited you're going to be updating more regularly! :)
Everyone's favorite orphan girl comes to Avonlea! Pam, Jim and Roy are Anne, Gil and...Roy. Now complete.This is just perfection! Perfect melding of the two. Loving it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!
Jim needs a second opinion about a song he heard.
Based on a challenge from the TWoP forums to write something based on the line, "You don't do it on purpose but you make me shake." General season 3 spoilers.
"Glad we're on the same page, Beesly." Love that.
Very cute. Enjoyed it!
'I like to think that she and I would actually get along if Jim would just introduce us.' OMG, this is ridiculously funny, Moxie. Love the last line. Too funny.
'Oh, and I'm definitely seeing more of the world.' Too funny, Moxie. Very inventive, and a joy to read. I'll be laughing all night.
That was beautiful. Really nicely done.
Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.
Pam's bed is a double! Yay. Am excited for the next chapter!
Totally loving the drama and teh raw emotions that you're creating here.
Wow. Just caught up with this and so glad I did. It's so beautifully written. And you have a really good grasp of who Jim and Pam are and how they managed to get themselves to this awkward, estranged place.
Really enjoying it, especially with lines like:
'She had broken his heart once, and since then he had been hoarding the pieces, disallowing her from knowing that they existed.'
Looking forward to more!
That was SO good. Truly well done.
Both Jim and Pam's thoughts as they lie together are so nice, and so in character. And your creation of Pam's relationship with her dad is so great because it explains so much about her personality and relationships.
I am so enjoying this, but feel like I am reading it all disjointedly (my fault), so I am really looking forward to sitting down one day soon and reading it all the way through (thus far) and reveiwing properly (and coherently). Can't wait for an update. Really beautiful!
That was great. Love Mrs. Beesly - her understanding of Pam and sharing it with Jim is great. Jim's emotions are so beautifully written here - his fear and anger.
And last chapter, their fight was so perfectly written and believable on so many levels.
Nice work.
Perfection. Beautiful perfection.
Jim coming to understand himself and Pam here is so well done.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I figured Pam's a little too tired to respond at the moment ;-) she had a tumultuous few days.
I really liked the not-exciting-ness of this chapter. I think it was a good way to show how in tune with Pam Jim is and how she is scared, but he gets that. And any prank is tons of fun. And as always, superbly written.
Still loving this! Thanks!
Author's Response: ugh thank you so much for reviewing this chapter. I was freaking out about posting it and wondering if the direction of it was all wrong. Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!!!
Oh, that's good. Really, really good. I realy like Pam taking her time, but when ready, diving in. And Jim's patience is so sweet and fitting.
This is written so beautifully! I love it.
In the interest of honesty, I humbly propose some new warnings and disclaimers for rated MA fanfic.
ROUND ROBIN: any writer can add a chapter! What do YOU think our readers should be warned about? Oh, and remember to put your name on your chapter so we can offer you appropriate adulation.
Hilarious. And so necessary!
Hahaha. That was hilarious! Loved it! Josh's favorite color is pink. Too funny. Nice use of so many episodes' plot. Very cool.
That was a nice little twist there! Cute story!
He calls her by the OWNER'S name!? Too funny. This had my laughing all the way through. Classic companion to Moxie's piece.
Brilliant.
Pam wakes up feeling not quite herself...
Oh! You must continue! Too fun.
Inspired by the finale and the seasons that preceeded it. Enough said.
Oh! Am really excited to see where you take this.
Great start!
Author's Response:
Headed toward that first date, desert island - it's just too much fun NOT to write!
Thanks for the review!
She can’t help but feel like it’s a good sign; a step in the right direction. Set post-The Job.That was great. Really sweet. Nice work.
"'Jiiiiiiiiim. Come to beeeed,' Pam’s voice is light, and it mistily floats down the empty staircase as it swirls about the room, echoing like a siren’s song."
A series of one-shots. There are times when Jim and Pam's relationship seem a little supernatural.
This was really well done! Great info on art and vampires. You've done your research! And Jim and Pam were classic Jim and Pam. And Mark was too funny. We were really wondering and thinking right along with Jim. Nice work!
Jim is nervous about their first date. Spoilers through "The Job".So perfectly succinct. Wondeful title, wonderful ending and all in between.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm never sure about my titles, so I'm happy that worked for you!
I really liked this. Put a huge smile on my face. 'Women are different.' So good. The choppiness suites it. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks. And, well, women are different. I'm glad the choppiness worked; it felt right that way to me. And so nice to write and not have to worry about connecting sentences!
I don’t get to kiss you again until our second date, which is three weeks after our first date, which is a year and a half after our other first date.
I love the Jim perspective. And The Decemberists. Nice work.
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