I hate when computers fight back... they are evil like that. *shudders and then pets her laptop* you will be a nice lil laptop for me right.

Yes, angry Jim is nice, being so nice and protecting Pam and Pam's honor. Loved it. And it is almost nice to see Michael not be an ass. He does have some redeeming qualities :) 

that was happy wonderful jamness. yay! and now to deal with real life :(

I think you got Dwight. Dwight is very hard to write. I tend to ignore him. Haha. I can't wait for next chapter!

ah, drunk people are fun. when they are at that state between sober and drunk off their ass, they are really fun!
Jim shirtless.... okay, just wait like ten minutes while i regain conciousness.
actually, nah, i am going to post this and just enjoy jim shirtless.

Okay, so this was amazing. Want to know why? Because I actually created an account so I could review. I hated the fact tey took away anon reviews, but whatever. I really really really loved this. Normally I don't like lil poetry type fics, but this flowed and it was just so sad and sweet and everything.

So, good job! 

she went home with ROY.... while I can totally imagine it, its just one of those times I want to throw something at her.


Author's Response: Ha! I sympathize with Pam a whole lot, but she doesn't always do the things that will actually bring her happiness. I thought this seemed realistic, at least. :)

this has to continue!!!!


Author's Response: Oh, I'll definitely finish! :)

good ending. karen is being slightly scary possessive.... *shivers* i agree with KrazyKaren

I love this story. It is just ... painfully good.  And I like the quotes. I think the first quote, the one about the hourglass... I just made it my away message because right now its just one thing on top of another for me (and why i am not dealing with that crap, but instead reading fanfic, I dunno). But, I never really thouht of that, she really does have courage. Even if it isn't really obvious in her art, she does. But, its Jim. Oh, so good.

Author's Response:

Thanks Emily!  I think alot of Pam's done is incredibly courageous - but it's hidden by the fact that she won't open her mouth about the one thing she really wants.

So. Frustrating.

I'm so glad you are liking the story.  Thank you so much for the review.

I am sitting here, with Girly Girl on my computer, a peanut butter and jelly sandwhich, and a tall glass of milk. Besides the girly girl, I sound like I am five (I don't think five year olds should read/understand GG). But all is right in the world.
But, along with good news, there is bad news. I am probably going to post this on TWoP soon, but since I leave you daily reviews (and my inflated self importance makes me think that they are a very important part of your life) - the next two weeks are crazy busy, what with classes ending and finals. And then I am sending my computer to the doctors. And so, even though I am not sure how I am going to survive (or what I am going to do. all those annoying questions)... I may not be on for nearly a month. :(! No Girly Girl, no fanfic, no random comments, no TWoP discussions, no blogs... I think I may die. But, I figured yeah, I would let you know in person/review.
So, onto the review....
Oh god, Mose and Dwight. Those two...scripts!!! No wonder why this is Dwights first official date. I laughed at oh.... every single part of that. I can't choose my favorite part of that insane 'date'.



Author's Response: I have lost the will to live Emily Halpert! How am I supposed to write knowing my consistent reviewer is gone? I seriously consider just not writing for two weeks so you don't miss anything.... wait a MONTH? A MONTH! NOOOOOO!

20 minutes since I still woke up. I had dreams about fanfiction... but oddly enough, it was stories I don't read. And I had dreams they were updated, even though they are complete. I have no idea where that came from.
Dwight is so focused on Michael's birthday, is awesome. And Jim taking charge reminds me of Drug Testing, when Jim interogated him. I love that episode also. Haha!
The girl dressed LIKE the secretary. Not the secretary. Creed is so awesome.
I don't want to think why Creeds desk would be sticky.
And of course, Meredith didn't think that was a prank...
“Well, at least Pam doesn’t know that we know that she knows, because you didn’t know that we knew.” confuses me... i have to think about knowing to much. and now know doesn't really sound like a real word. But it reminds me of Friends.

This is a scary what in the world happened to my mind.... because here Karen pointed at the conference room, “The boys are having a super-secret meeting. I think they’re painting each other’s toenails and telling ghost stories!” i didn't read toenails. I read a certain other part of a male's anatomy. and t was weird.  what has happened to me!?

And Karen shutting Jim up at night... I will (dispite my last comment) just assume that she turned on a sports show or something. Nothing dirty. I still have an innocent mind (apparently, only about half the time now though). Yes. Just watching TV at night.

Haha! You mention Friends :)!

And then since I am in the mood: "Seriously, Angela. Newsflash. Boyfriends don’t tell their girlfriends everything." Well, Karen, Jim has told you he loves Pam and you are still with him... just break up already.
Okay, that is all.
Now I can get changed and go to classes, because I have read Girly Girl



Author's Response:

I don't want to think why Creeds desk would be sticky. Probably for the best that you don't think about it.

 i didn't read toenails. I read a certain other part of a male's anatomy. ?????? EmilyHalpert all I can think of is tonsils. Man, I must be a really sweet, naive little girl because I just don't see anything bad. Of course, I think everyone goes home to sleep on their twin beds at night alone. Except Michael. Who has a futon.

Karen shutting Jim up at night...  she turned on a sports show or something. I think they were practicing kissing, if I recollect and then they went to their seperate apartments and fell asleep on their seperate twin beds. Yep. That's what happened.

you are forewarned. i had little sleep and i spent all day teaching 34 kids, most of whom were very annoying. very annoying. so my brain is um... noexistant. i claim no responsiblity to what my fingers type.
haha, i loved that way of getting michael out of improv. he really is horrible at it isn't it? well, maybe not horrible. just not ... improving, shall we say?
Stacey using her mommy voice with kevin... haha. so wonderful. mommy voice. i have one of those, without even having kids.
everything about toby was just perfect. people needing hr support, betting odds. so i was watching casino night today (gah, still, that end it never changes... i hate that). anyways, but, yeah, toby liking taking michaels money, and there is just something sardonic about it. and there is.
Hum, Michael=Drew Carey=Drew Bernard. Drew Bernard just doesn't work.
Mose, Mose, Mose... can i say even though we only know about mose from like... a total of 2 minutes of information, that i actually think you wrote him very Mose-y?

(again, i claim no responsiblity for the relative weirdness of what i typed)