Penname: pennylane83 Real name: Sarah
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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Summary: Post-Basketball; When she was still in college and Roy wasn't, she had thought about ending things with him.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2642 Read Count: 2313 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2006 Updated: September 11, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Damn Toaster Oven

I really, really enjoyed this, particularly this line:

When she looks at Roy all she can think about is their broken toaster oven. She doesn't want to think about what that means.

I think that just says so much about Roy and Pam's relationship. And I loved how sitting in his chair would be too intimate for her, and the dressing room scene. Just...wonderful job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Second Chance by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 16
Summary: Jim needs to ask Pam a question.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2315 Read Count: 3590 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2006 Updated: September 12, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed
Date: September 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: If at first you don't succeed....

Wow. This is a story even a SpoilerWhore could love ;) No, really I like that Jim would want his proposal to be perfect for her but in the end it doesn't really matter. And I loved the banter- so true to their characters. Sorry, I always run out of adjectives to describe how much I like your work! So that was scrumdiddlyumptious. How's that? Hee.

Author's Response:

SpoilerWhores are always welcome to read.  I just wanted to make amends. :) 

And of course it wouldn't matter HOW he did it.  I mean c'mon....it's JIM.

Scrummdiddlyuptious?  Well that's just lovely. :)

Summary: There's a tampon machine and instead of florid pink soap in a dispenser screwed to the wall, there's a hand-pump dispenser next to the sink filled with Honey & Milk Cream Hand Wash.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1473 Read Count: 2592 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2006 Updated: September 13, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Five Places

Wow, this was amazing. You have a very cool style, and I definitely think Jim is a music nerd, so all of your references make perfect sense. #2 broke my heart, but #5 mended it again. And Jim playing the guitar!! Loved it.

Author's Response: Hee, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed. I totally put them in that order on purpose - I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. The thought of Jim playing the guitar is guh.

Summary: Past Featured StoryAngela and Madge have more in common than they think.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Angela, Madge
Genres: Childhood, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 755 Read Count: 1680 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2006 Updated: September 13, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness. LOVE. I swear, these unconventional pairings are my fic kryptonite. I love that Madge reminds Angela of her uncle and OF COURSE they would both have cats. Also love that yellow is the new green to Angela. Awesome, shan!

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane!  ;)

First Date by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 24] 25
Summary: Past Featured StoryInspired by a certain deleted scene from the Client.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1320 Read Count: 4430 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2006 Updated: September 13, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Jim. Oh Jim. The last line just kills me. It seems so fitting that it would take him so long to not notice her engagement ring. This is almost exactly as I pictured it when I watched the deleted scene yesterday. Great job!

Perfect Match by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 48] 46
Summary: Past Featured Story

Spoilerish for various S2 DVD deleted scenes.   Their first date was a date that...wasn't.  Eventually though they finally got the hang of it.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10387 Read Count: 12975 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2006 Updated: September 18, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Match

Alright, listen. I don't know if you realize this, but there's still 2 days before the premiere. I think I need an Overtime. Kidding :) I loved it. This line killed me:

"But I'm going to have to - if I want to stop hurting you."

Thank you Pam! It's about time. Hee. And, have to agree with shan, I like how you've "structured" Jim here. Mmm, structured Jim. Anyways, thank you fairy godmother!



Author's Response:

Premiere?  When???

I know you're kidding - but I'm not. :)  I simply can't write another word about the aftermath of May 11th until I know the outcome for sure.  Trust me - I'm sure I'll still be inspired - just a little less frequently. ;)

And thanks about noting Pam's "apology" of sorts.  I want her to acknowledge how unfair she has been - because for me Jim always runs into the brick wall of "but she's engaged" whenever he thinks it's time to tell her the truth.

Wow.  Babble much???

In closing - glad you liked it, structured Jim and your wishes...my commands. :)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Set

Such an amazing chapter. I like how you mentioned the look on Pam's face when he told her about his crush- I had never noticed her disappointment until the commentary! Gah! And the ice skating at the end- I had always suspected that Pam was faking it :). You just KNOW these two could be so happy together if Pam would just let herself. Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm going to need something to get me through to Thursday!

Author's Response:

pennylane - me neither!!  I love when Jenna and John do commentaries because they know EXACTLY what we want to hear.  I just kept thinking of Jim saying "Think you can let go now?" and her saying "No." and taking that to mean so much more.

I'll see what I can do to tide you over. ;)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Just Friends

Oh, Jim. Poor, poor Jim. Knowing what's going to happen as soon as he works up the courage makes me want to just jump in and say "noooooooo!" to him. Hee. This was great. And heartbreaking. Please tell me there's more to ease the pain!

Author's Response:

I know.  When I wrote it I almost felt like I got slapped. 

(clearly - spending too much time with fictional characters.  LOL!) 

There is more - full of fluff to cushion the fall.  I promise!!!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Game

Oh man, you slay me everytime. I SO want to knock their heads together so Pam will get some sense. Still, you captured a great moment. The Client is one of my favorite episodes. Thank you for breaking my heart, again ;)

Author's Response:

You're welcome, pennylane.  I think. :)

Summary:

Toby smiled. His daughter was clearly a genius.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Toby/Other
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 655 Read Count: 1765 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2006 Updated: September 16, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this was awesome! Well I loved it for the title alone, but I think you really managed to match each toy with the personalities of the people in the office (Toby as the droopy rabbit- YES!) Sasha is so cute.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm a closet "Rudolph" fanatic, so this seemed like a natural fit. I also do think this is a group of misfits, so that worked too. Thanks again!

On Deck by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 14] 12
Summary: Jim shares something with Toby.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Toby
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Slash
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1143 Read Count: 2571 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 18, 2006 Updated: September 18, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 8
Date: September 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woo. Slash really isn't my cup of tea, but this was so well-written. The imagery of the boat, and Jim and Toby are just so sad and in the same position, it just makes sense somehow.

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane, that's very objective. I appreciate it! :)

In Between by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 18
Summary:

Post GWH.  Pam's POV.  No real speculation for S3 - just what I hope is going through Pam's mind at the moment.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 887 Read Count: 1447 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 24, 2006 Updated: September 24, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: In Between

Well your pants are TOTALLY on fire. Hee ;) I really enjoyed this. It read like poetry, especially the last lines. And I'm always one to want to shake some sense into Pam, but I know she'll get it eventually. Good job :)

Author's Response:

Indeed, pennylane.  Indeed.  HA!   I know she will too.  It's just going to be torture waiting. :)

Time and Space by kieyra Rated: MA [Reviews - 25] 37
Summary: Past Featured StoryA bridge between Casino Night and GWH, with some projection beyond. :) Author does not read spoilers or watch previews. Chapter 1 "M" for language; chapter 2 "MA".
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8979 Read Count: 11532 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: September 25, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 8
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Time

IThis was sweet and hot and very well done. I think you've really nailed Pam's voice. And did I mention it was hot? Yeah, it was hot. Great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

But almost. ;)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 602 Read Count: 2935 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Swaying Isn't Dancing

Swaying isn't dancing. Well that just sums up their relationship pretty perfectly, doesn't it?

There was no music this time, they swayed in time with the sound of their lips meeting over and over

God, you slay me. I just want them to get together so bad, it hurts. Do you think this means I need a real life? Hee. Loved it :)



Author's Response:

It's quite the accurate metaphor I agree. 

It's almost to the point that it's physically painful.  I'm right there with you - so we can be life-less together.  LOL!  Glad you liked it.

Summary: Past Featured StoryAn Office-based parody of The Princess Bride.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Parody, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11456 Read Count: 28307 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: October 14, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yay!! Reason #857 why I should probably be working, I actually said "WOO HOO!!" out loud when I saw you'd posted. I think you're off to a great start!

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for that tidbit, pennylane ;)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Once upon a time...

Wow, I really really love this already, and I'm pleasantly surprised at how well the two stories mesh together! And describing Pam as a sneaky kind of pretty. Wow, I can't even review coherently, just know that it's great!



Author's Response: Ha, thanks, pennylane!  I wasn't sure at first where I was going to begin the story, till I remembered PB starts with a kiss - then it was obvious :)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: The Awful Contest

Seriously, I am just in love with this story already. I rewatched The Princess Bride yesterday for the gajillionth time in honor of it. Jim as a pirate is all kinds of hot. Also kind of curious if you're going to work the R.O.U.S's into it ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! That's great that you rewatched it ;)  I'm still trying to figure out the fire swamp sequence - should have at least some metaphorical ROUSs.

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed
Date: October 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: The Perils

Yay! The ROUS, that's what I was waiting for! And Roy as the lightning sand? Guh. You are seriously a freakin genius to make this all work. Totally believable. I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane, glad the ROUS lived up to expectations!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: The Pit

shan, this was just pitch perfect, as usual! I love that the Pit of Despair is a bar. Oh, aren't they always? ;)

Author's Response: It was between a bar and Andy's basement. I figured Jim was more likely to go to a bar. Thanks, pennylane!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: The Finale

And of all the kisses in the history of kisses, this one became known simply as The Kiss.

*dies of happiness* shan, this was SUCH a pleasure to read. I Dwight was so perfect in the Inigo Montoya role and I LOVE that Pam asked for a do-over. Thanks so much for sharing this fun read with us!

 



Author's Response: Thanks for all of your reviews, pennylane! I'm glad you liked Dwight in that role (he is a hero!), and yeah, Pam needs to ask for a do-over!  ;)

Okay by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 34] 33
Summary: Past Featured StoryInspired by the premiere’s melancholy whiff o’Jam. Except with a happy ending, because…I felt like it. Contains a possible SPOILER – nothing you wouldn’t know unless you’ve avoided even those tiny tidbits in the mass media. Just saying, to be fair.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 6469 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2006 Updated: September 29, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was just absolutely...I don't even know the right words for it. Gorgeous, beautiful? It was perfect :) Wonderful, wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane. I really am so pleased you liked it.

Climbing Trees by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 19] 21
Summary: This is what her laugh feels like.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 653 Read Count: 3788 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2006 Updated: October 01, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a gorgeous metaphor for the way she makes him feel. I love all of your stories and this is no exception. Wonderful job.

A Better Fit by Par5 Rated: K [Reviews - 36] 29
Summary: Past Featured StoryAt first she's all wrong, but in the end maybe she's a better fit.
Categories: Future, Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1226 Read Count: 3921 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2006 Updated: October 05, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really loved this and am also very impressed that you were able to do it in a half hour (TWSS?) I only have a tentative toe in the Jim/Karen camp but that doesn't take away from the fact that I liked your style. It seems fitting that Jim is fed up with Pam (join the club!) and he deserves to be happy, even if it's with someone who isn't Pam. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think what makes this all seem so disturbing is that Karen (so far) seems like she might be the only woman we've seen who could possibly have a connection with Jim. Katy was nothing compared to Karen and it worries me!

Like Hate by proudgirl Rated: T [Reviews - 25] 22
Summary: A deceptively happy Jim/Karen. And, of course, a little bit of Pam thrown in there, because it'll always be about her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 685 Read Count: 2881 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2006 Updated: October 06, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Like Hate

At first I was really undecided about Karen- but throwing those paperclips in the air last night, I am totally on her side now. I love what you've written here. In a way she's like the anti-Pam, but isn't. This line:

he suddenly remembers what it’s like to love something because it’s flawed, because it’s flawed and yet still offers happiness that is completely, overwhelmingly perfect

So great. I really love your style here as well. Great job!

Too Late? by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 18
Summary:

Jim's been away.  Now he's back.  Pam realizes what she's missed.  No spoilers - just speculation and much wishful thinking.

I added Karen as a character in the story - since she's mentioned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1186 Read Count: 2987 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2006 Updated: October 07, 2006
Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10
Date: October 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Too Late?

Pam. Oh, Pam. My heart kind of broke for her in the last episode where she bought new clothes and talked about having some for after work that "weren't pajamas." I don't want to feel bad for Pam though. I know she has, somewhere deep inside her, the strength to realize that Jim doesn't deserve "more than her" He deserves her. You did a really great job with this. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that it turns out similarly on the show!

Author's Response:

I like to think this is why they are being soooooo vague with her - even as we are all just sitting there yelling "YOU MISS HIM.  JUST SAY IT!!!!"

Sorry. ;) 

I think this whole time apart is enabling her to become "more than her" if that makes any sense.  Jim does deserve someone who knows what she wants and I'm dying for her to realize it and tell him what she wants is HIM.

I'm not sure if I've made that clear enough over the last few months... :)