Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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Summary: The other Dunder Mifflin receptionist recounts the events of "The Job".
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related
Characters: Other
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: All About a Peripheral Character
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4235 Read Count: 8775 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Was blind, but now I see

Wonderful last line!  This just made me smile from beginning to end.  What a wonderful(and believable)story you have created about a character in the background.  Great stuff!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much- I'm so happy to make you smile! I am very, very pleased you thought it was believable (and "wonderful" is a pretty nice compliment, too!). Thanks again!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Karen, Jim, Kelly, and Dwight POV during the finale, especially the end. A character study of sorts. Some implications of Jim/Pam, Kelly/Ryan and onesided Karen/Jim.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Karen, Kelly
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 2241 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2007 Updated: July 31, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a beautiful read.  You did a fantastic job of getting into the heads of the characters.  Really enjoyed this.



Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

This will just be a series of short vignettes about Jim and Pam getting to know one another as they start their adventure into true coupledom. Embarrassing moments, phobias, guilty pleasures....the truth comes out.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drabble, Fluff, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8782 Read Count: 69442 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Domestic God

These are so sweet!!  Great voices, too.  Really enjoying them and looking forward to more:)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Bitterpill! I appreciate the review and hope you enjoy the rest!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost season three finale. Pam, Jim, a train.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 745 Read Count: 6006 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2007 Updated: August 04, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Instead of quoting the entire story, I'll just say I love, love, love this and you never cease to amaze.  Wonderful!

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56279 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Drive

To say this gets better and better is an understatement.  Each chapter builds so nicely from the last.  I love when Pam takes charge and love, love, love the plan to run the rest of the way to her door.  Works for me!  Great job.

Author's Response: I wanted nearly everything about their first time to be a little bit silly.  Thank you, bitterpill

Dry by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 18] 5
Summary:

Pam had learned two things from her years with Roy. Speculative for season 4, unspoiled.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54 Read Count: 2847 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2007 Updated: August 07, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This broke my heart, BUT....I love that Pam's eyes were dry.  I love strong Pam!!!  Wonderful work:)

Author's Response:

Thank you! I love strong Pam, too. I think that she knows when to hold 'em and when to fold 'em at this stage of her life, and she also knows that she'll survive. Sorry about your  heart, though!

Summary: Past Featured Storytheir flaws might just doom them.

(first bits are Jim reflecting on some sadness. it will eventually lead to 'first date' business.. and smut)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11067 Read Count: 72693 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2007 Updated: August 31, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: i've got your wedding bells in my ear

Really enjoying this!  I love the look back to the angst of the triangle.  Excellent work!!!  Poor Jim.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: i never said that it was time, i was just hoping it

I love the nervousness between them.  This is unchartered territory for them and it feels very real.  Wonderful work!!  Looking forward to the result of that U-Turn.

Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam try to find their way back. Hopefully without a national audience. Spoilers up to The Job.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Andy, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4112 Read Count: 6889 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2007 Updated: August 22, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Love's Such An Old-Fashioned Word

So happy to see something new from you!  Of course, you did not disappoint:)  This is just pitch perfect from beginning to end.  Great voices and I just love incorporating the camera crew.  Well done!!

Author's Response: Thank you SOOOO much, bitterpill !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Post- Email Surveillance. After Jim's BBQ, Pam stays to help clean up, and something more happens.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1269 Read Count: 4725 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2007 Updated: August 23, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: August 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love fics surrounding this episode.  So much to run with!  You captured the voices so well and the emotions are just spot on.  Wonderful work!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Written for both the Pam's Pregnancy and 55 Word challenges. Takes place before The Job.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen, Kelly
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5092 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic!  Thank you for this:)

Summary: Pam announces her pregnancy. The reactions are...typical.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 423 Read Count: 6602 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2007 Updated: September 04, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Congratulations!

This is fantastic.  Wonderful voices and a wonderful read.  Perfect execution, as always.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I don't often deviate from pure Jim/Pam, so it is fun to play with the other voices. I'm so pleased it worked for you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)

Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3731 Read Count: 49630 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Want to write you a love letter

Jim a romantic?  I'm just not seeing it.  HA!  This was so beautiful because of his need to express to Pam what she means to him, and I could see this being something he would enjoy doing.  And Jim doing anything in his underwear is a good thing:)  Thanks for this!

Author's Response: You always see right through me - it's all a ruse to get that boy in his skivvies. And I agree...this whole romantic thing is so far fetched. Jim who? LOL. Anyway, happy to hear you thought this was believable. Thanks much, bitterpill.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Shiny When Wet

So happy to see something new from you!!  Wonderful little looks into their new life together....this is what I hope Season 4 is all about.  Sadly, no shower time, though.  Thank goodness for fic!  Can't wait to read more:)



Author's Response: Well, so happy to see a review from you! (Wouldn't mind a new fic either, ahem...) Yeah, sadly no shower-cam in their future, LOL. And I agree - in S4 they don't need any wild, farfetched plots; they just need to be. Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and, not least of all, rec'ing bitterpill

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: That Girlfriend

Thai food?  Jim?  Yes, that is a spicy recipe I can live with.  Jealous Pam is Adorable Pam(loved the look inside her head at the the restaurant).  And, uh, yeah...loved that last paragraph.  Bravo!



Author's Response: Well, thai food and Jim are two of my favorite things, so I figured I Pam couldn't go wrong with that combo plate. Tried to stay in the 'T' zone this time, so pleased to hear you thought that last bit worked anyway. Thanks again, bitterpill...always pleased when you like something.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Cooties

Sign me up for Jim cooties!  Vicks has never had it so good:)  Great slice of life and the voices were spot on, as always.  Oh, and thanks for the lovely clavicle image.



Author's Response: Jim cooties...I bet he could bottle and sell those things, lol. Thanks much re: the voices (that means a lot) and for reading, reviewing and sharing in the clavicle love, bitterpill! (I think I need a 12-step program to quit writing these slices o'life. Somebody stop me.)

Summary: Never in my life have I written fluff. I’m taking a break from a super-angsty story that I’m writing to dash this out. Hope it works for you.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 606 Read Count: 2208 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2007 Updated: September 05, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: words

Really liked this.  Love seeing them happy and silly and sexy as hell.  Thank you for this.  More, please:)

Summary: For the Pam's Pregnancy Challenge...kinda.  Future Fluff.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 752 Read Count: 7524 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2007 Updated: September 11, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden Treasures

This left me with a big grin on my face.  Wonderful look into Pam's "secret."  Loved the set up for the big reveal.  Thank you for this!



Author's Response: Grinning is good. :)  So glad you liked it!  You're more than welcome.  It was my pleasure.

Summary: Directly after asking Pam to dinner, Jim retreats to the stairwell to collect his thoughts.  He gets interrupted.  By Pam. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2186 Read Count: 13865 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2007 Updated: September 11, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I demand that you take back your apology!  This was really wonderful....filled with emotion and very perfectly "them."  Really enjoyed it:)



Author's Response: I take it back! I am NOT sorry.  ;-) glad you enjoyed

Summary: She’s trying to pinpoint the moment in time where they had quit being Pam and Jim (whatever that meant, anyway) and where they had started hurting each other at every turn. (Takes place during Ben Franklin)

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 862 Read Count: 2257 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2007 Updated: September 17, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: On a Razor's Edge

I'm so glad I clicked on your name and found this gem.  Really wonderful angst for an episode I thought couldn't possibly have any more!  So well done.  You are a natural.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, bitterpill! This was one of the most instense episodes, in my opinion, as far as angst and awkwardness goes. I appreciate your review!! 

Summary: How Jim [subconsciously] knew Pam was pregnant before she did. For the 55 and Pam's Pregnancy challenges.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Married, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5204 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2007 Updated: September 19, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is so sweet, Puff!  Love Jim's protective and intuitive side coming through.  Lovely:)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Summary: A scene that I imagine could have taken place after Email Surveillance. Pam helps Jim clean up after his party, and waxes poetic about the appearance of beer bottles. Some angst.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1067 Read Count: 3127 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2007 Updated: September 19, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Beer Bottles and Living Room Floors

There can never be enough fic about this episode.  It's one of my favorites and you captured the mood of Season 2 so wonderfully.  Excellent work!  Please write more fic:)

Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I already have about 12 different ideas bouncing around my head as we speak (type?).  Nobody warned me that this fanfic writing business would be addictive!  So hopefully more will be forthcoming.  Maybe tonight :)

Vindicated by Alyssa Rated: K [Reviews - 5] 4
Summary:

In the late summer of 2006 Pam makes the three hour drive up to Stamford.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1815 Read Count: 3415 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2007 Updated: September 21, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: September 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Vindicated

I love when Pam is bold and I always loved the idea of her going to Stamford to talk to Jim.  Really enjoyed this. 

Author's Response:

Thanks! After reading all of the times authors said reviews were like (insert addicting drug here), I am finally believing them. And I only have two! FNB made The Job for me, and I can't believe she made that much progress in one season, so I guess this was my tribute to her.

Summary: What really happened at the Estate Sale? Spoilers thru 401 - Fun Run.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4348 Read Count: 15713 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2007 Updated: October 02, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: October 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Thank you for this.  Please keep writing for all of us who wish this show was on HBO:)

Exposure by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 4
Summary: Driving fast up the side of a mountain, she laughs with the sound of the camera’s shutter. Season four fluff. So general season four spoilers.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 760 Read Count: 3187 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2007 Updated: October 20, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: October 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel like it's Christmas in October with all of the new stories from you.  This was just beautiful imagery and sweet moments that left me with a smile on my face.  Lovely.