Penname: HailEris Real name:
Member Since: April 03, 2007

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Summary: The Office documentary airs each Thursday night and some of its fans are compelled to write fan fiction. Some of them have more insight than others........
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10455 Read Count: 17641 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2007 Updated: April 26, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: April 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I REALLY like EVERYTHING you write.

Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't written much, but I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: April 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

To clarify, I've just really enjoyed how creative and well-written both this and your "eponymous" stories are.  And I'd love to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks again, HE. I've got a few ideas up my sleeve. My goal is to finish the two I've started first :)

CATFIGHT!!! by Alex Wert Rated: T [Reviews - 5] 1
Summary:

I've come to the conclusion that the show needs Krazy!Karen. If she's sane then she makes the whole love triangle thing far too depressing for a comedy show. If she's nuts then pretty much anything can happen, and it's bound to be interesting.  Especially if she's violent.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Creed, Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1129 Read Count: 2597 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2007 Updated: April 20, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: April 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha!!! "I want some taquitos."
Okay, so that wasn't really a review of the story...

To review: VERY funny!
Um... Write a sequel.

Author's Response:

No, that really wasn't a review of the story.  So my response will be likewise nonsensical:

There's a mouse on my fridge and it's eating my cookies.

Summary: Why are there no Meredith talking heads? Couple of reasons.
Categories: Episode Related
Characters: Meredith
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1693 Read Count: 897 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2007 Updated: April 26, 2007
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Date: April 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meredith speaks her mind

Heeee!  Meredith The Mastermind!  Love it!

And I'd love to see more featuring Karen The Mole, and all those... attendant machinations.  ;-)

 



Author's Response: I cut all the stuff that she did to Andy because of word count, but let me tell you, she's GOOD.

Summary:

This is a 5-Things story based on my favorite game show.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Crossover
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2011 Read Count: 3420 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2007 Updated: April 26, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: April 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why can't cardstock be a category?

Your Dwight is just... wonderful!

This?  "Each time he rang in correctly, Mose received a quick shock. Hey, maybe he was a little electric."  Literally did make me laugh out loud.

This? "something as inconsequential as what the main ingredient in borscht was."  Hilarious!!

Very, very nice.



Author's Response: Glad you liked the Dwight....I find tha he and Michael are so hard to write so I'm glad you liked it and that you liked the borscht joke....though I'm pretty sure that Dwight would know what borscht is.

Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: April 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why can't cardstock be a category?

...and one day I shall learn how to format 'round these parts.

Sigh.

Summary:

There once was a knight of the ancient family Halpert. He did battle for the hand of the maiden Beasley.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33203 Read Count: 37649 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 29, 2007 Updated: September 25, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: September 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - A plague drove him forth

This is really so, so terrific!  I was afraid for a while there that you had stopped updating, and we wouldn't have a happy (right??!!!) ending.  I'm so glad to see more chapters; they just get better and better!

Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Bob Vance, Creed, Darryl, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael/Jan, Ryan/Kelly, Todd Packer
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7859 Read Count: 12320 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2007 Updated: May 13, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: May 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part I: Five point questions

This was GREAT!  I could actually picture the set (and Bob!) as I was reading.  Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad it came across that way.  I visualized the show as I wrote it.

Summary:

A bit of an AU look at Jim and Pam, and a rather depressing relationship. First chapter takes place following Phyllis' wedding and then it goes from there. Does not take into account the events that take place in following episodes.

 

Not a happy piece of writing, I figured I'd take a different approach from the fluffier post-finale stories. I don't think there will be any fluff in this one.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24926 Read Count: 43079 ePub Downloads: 20
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2007 Updated: May 29, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: May 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bitterness

No one's suggested the Hot!Angry!Threesome! yet?!
I'm shocked! SHOCKED!

Heh. Seriously, though, I don't know if that would even be a possibility with the characterizations that you have going (although maybe with sufficient alkeehol, eh?), but if anyone could make it believable (and Hot!), it's definitely you!

Author's Response:

Actually, I have considered the threesome. That would be delving into some dangerous territory since I've never actually written anything like that before. And...like you said, I don't know how much the characters would be "into" that idea...it would be a rather...hostile threesome, certainly.

Thanks for the comment though! I will take it into consideration. :) 

Summary: New technology captured what was going through Jim's brain on the trip from New York back to Scranton.  Here is the transcription.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1615 Read Count: 3950 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: May 24, 2007
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Date: May 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Some Interstates are Best Traveled Westbound

Beautifully done.
Just... really, really great.

Author's Response: Thanks really really much, glad you liked.

Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 126475 ePub Downloads: 51
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
Reviewer: HailEris Signed
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts

This whole thing has just been so phenomenal. Both heartrending and hilarious, somehow, at once. I really can't wait for more!
And I just HAD to comment, finally, because Darryl wanting to "bang whoever made the pie" literally made me guffaw out loud! (Yep. I'm 12. Heh)

Author's Response: LOL!! Thank you!! I was so waiting for a comment on that cause it's like my favorite part of the whole chapter and makes me laugh every time!!!!!! You rock ;-)