Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: April 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Just Not Today

Woooah ~drama~ but I like it!


Author's Response: I couldn't resist going a bit over the top.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: April 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Why can't cardstock be a category?

Aww!  Cute!  But don't the contestants now get the money anyway even if they don't win?  Maybe not, but Jim would be pretty silly to do that if not.

I loved Kelly kicking Ryan's ass at Jeopardy; too cute! 

Author's Response: Thanks deerinthepark! These days, only the 1st place winner gets to keep the cash. 2nd place gets $2000 and 3rd place (which I'm assuming is what Jim got here) gets $1000.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: April 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Part I: Five point questions

Cute, I like this!  Please continue!


Author's Response: Thanks, I will.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Yogurt Parfait and Cheese Fries

Ellipsises... are three dots.  Four at the end of a sentence....

Like the story otherwise.

Author's Response: Thanks! I get carried away sometimes.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: May 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: You know how I know you're gay? You like Coldplay.

L-o-v-e-d it!  It was cuuute!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Again, lovely!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: June 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Eeee!  I'm so excited to see Pam just go with it!  Especially if Jim wants to get frisky ;)

Author's Response: Haha. We'll see. ;)

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: June 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Labor Day Weekend

I loved it, of course!  I actually kind of detest the idea of a guy getting down on knee, though.  I think I would have preferred Jim to twirl her around and bring her in his arms and whisper "marry me", or some other such nonsense.  Also I have to admit I hate when stories have diamonds, just because I loathe the diamond industry that much.  If a guy offered me a diamond engagement ring I'd probably punch him in the face.  (He should know me better than that, right?)

ANYWAY my point is that despite all this it's still a 10/10, because you're just that good!  I'm all about the angst and getting to the point of fluff rather than the fluff itself, but I reaaally enjoyed this.  Yay!

Author's Response:

You know, I personally feel very much like you do (I don't even have an egagement ring; I opted for engagement earrings, and they weren't diamonds. ;-)) - but I just know that deep down, Jim is a traditionalist in many things and I'd bet my children that one of those many things would be proposing.  Not that he wouldn't say Yes if Pam proposed to him first, but I bet part of him would have felt cheated of not getting to do the whole 'down on one knee thing.'  He's such a sap.  An adorkable sap, but one none the less!

Thanks so much for the review! 

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: July 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: It's Just Waiting For You

Because I’ve been meaning to see it and, you know, I’ve got half a bag of flour that I don’t understand in my cabinet now, so—

I especially liked that line.  Nice work!

Author's Response: That line was one of austin360's many inspirations. As soon as she sent it to me I fell in love with it. So glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: July 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'll repeat my earlier comment:

what

(See, I'm still reading!)

Didn't you say Roy saw Pam, though?  So... is Pam now Jenny Lewis?  She looks a bit like her (http://i.realone.com/assets/rn/img/8/4/7/5/9175748-9175754-slarge.jpg), hah.

Author's Response: Pam is Pam and Jenny is Jenny.  The situation with roy seeing pam is going to come up again.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Their First Date In 55 Word Moments

Oh my god that is great!

"Kevin had a pool going," Pam explained. "I was the only one who bet on me."

!!!!!!

And the last part was, of course, brilliant.

Also thought I'd point out that Pam did wear red in Benihana Christmas.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 :Decisions, Decisions

Stories like this are usually so cheesy but this one is a perfect balance of the cheesy and realistic.  So basically I love it!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed
Date: January 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: 1:00 PM

Ah!  This is wonderful and awesome and made me just as giddy when it ended as when I saw it had been updated.

Author's Response: Well, that's good to hear!  I was afraid I'd be shunned once it ended at the cliffhanger; glad that wasn't the case!  Thanks for reading!