Date: February 08, 2008 05:57 pm Title: The Distraction
You evil comedic genius. If it wasn't enough that you had a great main story you incorporated every character into your story flawlessly (I figured Stanley wouldn't be much for time wasters like this). Your voices for Andy and Creed were spot on. Outside of all that you managed to include some interaction between Jim and Pam outside of the main storyline. Well done.
Date: April 13, 2007 07:53 pm Title: The Distraction
I am enjoying this story. I especially like Creed. I think you have him down pat.
Date: April 06, 2007 06:22 pm Title: The Distraction
Swedge, this is hilarious. There are so many great parts, the whole thing is brilliant. Love everyone's voices, especially Creed and Dwight.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2007 12:13 am Title: The Distraction
AAGHH!!! I think i just died.. But then this line:
Plus something about the height disparity with her turns me on.
not only brought me back to life, but made my WEEK. since i'm the same height as angela and all..
Author's Response: Short chicks rule. According to Wikipedia.
Date: April 05, 2007 03:11 pm Title: The Distraction
stew, you black hearted bastard stew in your own juices. Until she makes you feel really really bad, then you should kiss her. in front of karen.
Author's Response: This made me chuckle. :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2007 08:20 pm Title: The Distraction
Wow...knew that wasn't going to end well when Pam started e-mailed Jim. I am totally loving this story.
Date: April 02, 2007 05:55 am Title: The Distraction
OOPS! Looks like Jim got himself in some hot (hotter?) water. Can't wait to see where this goes. I'm loving this so far.
Date: April 01, 2007 10:15 pm Title: The Distraction
Yikes! Talk about painting yourself in a corner. This is the email accident everyone dreads!
Date: April 01, 2007 06:15 pm Title: The Distraction
Well, Swedge, your fans have spoken: I guess you have to continue this now. ;)
Date: April 01, 2007 01:39 pm Title: The Distraction
Oops....
Jim's in trouble.
Love how most of the guys want to boink Karen. Ha. And this, from Creed:"Oh yes I’ve seen her around, she looks just like her mother."
Just priceless, made me sombrero-snort.
Keep going.
Date: April 01, 2007 01:35 pm Title: The Distraction
This is brilliant, no other way to put it. The idea seems familiar, but the direction you took it, completely unexpected and terrific. The fact that Jim had to think about it, and then sent the email to PAM! Awesome, way to go Halpert.
And the part with CREED, adore just adore it. I love him (is that weird) and i love Jim waving at him to let him know who he is talking to......MORE NOW! Please.....*batting eyelashes*
Date: April 01, 2007 01:22 pm Title: The Distraction
:O Ryan! "I'd get laid by Karen --I don’t know why. I guess I already took your desk, Jim; I might as well go for the rest of it."
And I loved all of Creeds!
:O:O:O He sent it to Pam!!!!! WHOA, didn't expect that. poor pam! I so want more, this is awesome
Date: April 01, 2007 12:45 pm Title: The Distraction
Oh, yikes, I was not expecting that extreme email faux-pas! How's he going to explain away that one?
And the Creed stuff was laugh-out-loud funny :)
Date: April 01, 2007 12:11 pm Title: The Distraction
"incurable maturity" - so funny, and very Stanley; the Creed stuff is hilarious - and the fact that even he can tell that Acct has one too many people is great. But the end, ouch - made my stomach hurt. Great stuff, really enjoyed it.
Date: April 01, 2007 11:54 am Title: The Distraction
Love it- Update soon!
Date: April 01, 2007 10:43 am Title: The Distraction
Holy CRAP! Major e-mail mistake, Jim! What's going to happen next?
This is great Swedge! Also, I'm a big lurker on TWoP, and I enjoy your dark spoiler specs. I just needed you to know... once.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. I sometimes forget how many lurkers there are there.
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 09:54 am Title: The Distraction
Holy crap, the Creed parts had me doubled over laughing (and possibly goobering - sorry). Just too funny.
But wasn't DinkinFlicka playing this game just today? Isn't that an amazing coincidence that you both post the playing of this game on the same day. Unless that was prearranged.
Ha! Jim, you idiot! What are you going to do now?
Date: April 01, 2007 09:21 am Title: The Distraction
Swedge. You win at life. DO go on.
Date: April 01, 2007 07:11 am Title: The Distraction
oh no he didn't....this should be good!
Date: April 01, 2007 07:05 am Title: The Distraction
Oh goodness. That's the trouble with email. I felt sick to my stomach once I realized what he'd done, even though I am quite sure he's lying to himself.
God, I'm dying to see him try and talk his way out of this.
Date: April 01, 2007 06:38 am Title: The Distraction
Ohh big twist at the end! Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon, please!! --CH
Date: April 01, 2007 06:33 am Title: The Distraction
Oh! I forgot to say how ridiculous and hilarious it is to picture the entire Schrute family playing this by candlelight during a blackout. Who are the using for the lists, though? Each other? I shudder at the thought.
Date: April 01, 2007 06:17 am Title: The Distraction
Oh my gosh, when Jim hit send I had a mini-panic attack because I thought he might have sent that email to Pam! Noooooooo!
(but secretly yesssss, because now he has to make it up to her? Right? Please?)
Oh! And the Creed stuff-- priceless
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 06:02 am Title: The Distraction
YAY! The boy version of Girly Girl!
Date: April 01, 2007 04:44 am Title: The Distraction
YIKES! You really know how to write a cliffhanger. I hope Pam sticks that arrow where it hurts. :D Waiting for more...