Penname: Geinnob Real name: Bonnie
Member Since: July 26, 2006

Bio:

Unfulfilled copy-editor - ask me to beta:  geinnob@yahoo.com

My livejournal is bare, but I'm working on filling the memories with great fics.  If there are great stories I'm missing, let me know.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40335 Read Count: 157572 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2007 Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Forget Me Not

There are a lot of beautiful words here, but I think these may be my favorite: "His scent paced the floors, stretched out beneath the covers, ran its hands across her body and pressed kisses into her hair."  wow

Summary:

I needed some cheering up, so in that vein, here is an incredibly un-angsty little piece of fluff. It's only three parts long and it's almost all done.

Pam and Jim reconnect in the most unlikely of all places...

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: It's Never Too Late For The Love of Your Life
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5366 Read Count: 21068 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2007 Updated: May 17, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Part 4: Getting What She Wished For

I've been meaning to review this for a very long time.  I really fell in love with this story.  Your descriptions are great, and I love them rediscovering their youth within each other.

Also, his speech about pretending to strip furniture just so he could remember her smell just floored me.  My breath literally caught in my chest, and I swear I teared up. 

I apologize for taking so long to review.  This is really wonderful.

Summary: A conversation with Kelly puts things in perspective for Jim-with a little help from a Disney cartoon
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Creed, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: Paintball, the Seven Dwarves, and Clowns
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9521 Read Count: 12820 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: May 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"She wondered if Kelly could breathe through her skin like a frog." - I think you may have stumbled upon the explanation!  So simple, yet so brilliant!

Author's Response: Not only can she breathe through her skin, she also has jumping ability to put Kobe Bryant to shame.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: May 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, I REALLY love this.  The characterizations are great, and the story is moving along nicely.  So, in short - yay! great story.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words!

Summary:

Summer is here.  Jim and Pam have another Beach Day planned.  JAM future fic. S3 spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 564 Read Count: 2540 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 20, 2007 Updated: May 20, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: May 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that made me giggle - cute and funny

Summary: Past Featured Story

"'Jiiiiiiiiim. Come to beeeed,' Pam’s voice is light, and it mistily floats down the empty staircase as it swirls about the room, echoing like a siren’s song."

A series of one-shots. There are times when Jim and Pam's relationship seem a little supernatural. 


Categories: Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Horror, Humor, Married, Parody, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16713 Read Count: 13804 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 21, 2007 Updated: February 12, 2008
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: May 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Succubus

I love this - the style, vocabulary, everything.  You've done a great job at capturing how it feels to be so hungry for someone you feel like there must be something wrong with you without making it over the top or ridiculous. 

Also, reading Stephen King can make anyone paranoid.

Summary: A First Date story, post The Job (contains spoilers if you haven't seen it yet). NOT part of my regular AU stuff -- a different AU all together! ;-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6535 Read Count: 20744 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2007 Updated: May 28, 2007
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Date: May 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Bad Dates Sometime End Up Like This...

I say this as a completely hetero woman, but I think I may be a little in love with you right now. 

Your stuff never disappoints.  I am always left happy, and usually, giddy.  This one is no different; I love it.

Summary: New technology captured what was going through Jim's brain on the trip from New York back to Scranton.  Here is the transcription.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1615 Read Count: 3950 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2007 Updated: May 24, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: May 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Some Interstates are Best Traveled Westbound

I'm sure I'm not saying anything 34 other people haven't said, but this is wonderful.  I just love it. And I know that dozens have already said this, but I love the chance to read "Jim thoughts" from an actual guy.  We (meaning female authors) try, but I'm pretty sure we miss the mark at times.

I especially loved his being torn between feeling like a bad guy because of Karen, but being unable to stop the excitement about Pam from breaking through.  Also, his utter desperation to "make this work" - love it.  And, got to mention it, his attempts at reminding himself that "women are different." 

Really, this is wonderful.



Author's Response: Thanks...lots of women here do a great job with Jim but in terms of his actual thought process I thought I might be able to give a perspective that others couldn't.  I know I couldn't possibly do a similar piece from Pam's POV as effectively as a woman.  I did think that Jim has a self image of himself as a good guy that he might be struggling to maintain as he reflects on his behavior. 

Summary:

 The mood had changed quickly and they weren’t laughing anymore, but there was still a faint smile on his lips.

Fluffy smut. Totally new territory for me.


Categories: Other
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Karen
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1633 Read Count: 3426 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 07, 2007 Updated: June 07, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've always felt sympathy for Karen - and this is a great example of why.  She got so screwed over by the whole situation.  (Umm...I do know they aren't real people - just in case it seems like I don't). 

Thanks for the work.

Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 126478 ePub Downloads: 51
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts

I was just getting ready to go to bed, but I decided to check one more time, and YAY!  I haven't even read yet.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Stories and Pam

That was great.  Thank you for the time and the work, and thanks for the epilogue.  Having this to read today is helping pull me out of my post-Potter let down.

About "The Sexin'," I do believe that was the most spiritual, primal scene I've read.  I really loved the image of the rib - that imagery took away the "cheese" factor of soul-mate and made it more physical/tangible.

Really enjoyed it.



Author's Response: ugh thank you.  I know I've told you this before but I really appreciate your writing style so your reviews always mean alot to me.  so thanks.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Mom and Muhammad Ali

Cute Dead Casket - you may have trumped yourself for funniest line ever.

Oh, and the rest was great too.  Whenever this is updated, I save it for last and read it right before I go to sleep so I'm all smiley and full of fluff.



Author's Response:

haha I started laughing out loud when I wrote that!!!! I didn't plan it and it just came tumbling out of my fingers.  Ha, Mark really has a mind of his own in this one ;-)

And I'm glad it makes you smile before you go to sleep!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Frat boys, threesomes, and oversized sweatshirts

Can I please be Pam, please???  Good stuff, yummy, enjoyable, real.

I really enjoyed Pam's interaction with Sue - funny

I loved this - ...vaguely registering that nobody else was even noticing this exchange. To her it felt like an earthquake. To her it felt like the world.  - that's a beautiful way of phrasing that feeling.

 



Author's Response:

I know right? Every girl's fantasy...

Anyway thanks for the compliments.  They mean the world ;-)

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Diners and Dreams

Um, HOLY CRAP!  That was fabulous; I mean really - I wish I could write "the kissin'" that well.

Author's Response: lol yes! Sooooo happy you liked the kiss. You're writing is great, so I totally appreciate the compliment.  Keep reading and letting me know how it goes.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Delicate and Fragile

I've been gone for a while and am catching up on my fic reading.  I just read all four parts in a sitting, and I really love it.

Also, The Holy Grail - I see others appreciated that as well, but I had to comment on it.  SO FUNNY!  Even funnier? - "Come on man, I told you not to call her that."  Laughed out loud at that one.



Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad it's funny to people other than just me lol.

Open by Annabel Winslow Rated: M [Reviews - 20] 20
Summary: Past Featured Story

Mid-season 3, Michael takes the staff out for some much-needed fresh air.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9146 Read Count: 34346 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2007 Updated: July 27, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: July 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Reversal

I am unbelievably happy to see your work back up!

Author's Response: Thank you, Geinnob!  My work is happy to be up!  ;)

Summary:

Kelly calls Andy from her desk... 


Categories: Past, Other
Characters: Andy, Kelly
Genres: Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: 55: The Kandy Edition
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1856 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: ...Wearing ONLY this...

...so I just snorted diet sprite through my nose, thanks for that....very funny

Author's Response: you're welcome ;-)

Summary:

WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25110 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: September 14, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Big Guns From Philly

So this is pretty much awesome, love the pace and it's hilarious.  But then, I do love your comedy - for instance the Food Network loving drill sargent and "What in the name of Rachel Rey!" (Is that how you spell her last name?)  Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  And thanks for reading my other stories as well, that's so awesome!  Thanks for reading and stay tuned!

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Risky or Romantic?

Let me apologize for not leaving an actual review, but I'm very sick, and not really all here..... "slow train of snickers" HA HA HA HA HA!

OH! and Saved by the Bell - niiiiiice



Author's Response: Gotta love over-acted, cheesy shows from the 90's.  Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56265 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Changes

I don't see the problem - Carrots are hot...

Very happy to see this - you are one of my faves, and any multi-parter from you makes for happy anticipation.



Author's Response: Thank you, Geinnob!  Carrots are pretty sexy, as are all root vegetables.  :)

Dwim Chronicles by sharky Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 2
Summary: It's the little daily things between Jim and Dwight that make them frienemies. Pt. 4: The Dwim Crocker Cookbook
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3553 Read Count: 6915 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2007 Updated: December 05, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Dwim are From Mars, Women are From Venus

I'm a little in love with this series.  Funny and touching

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Summary: A set of three vignettes over three years at Scranton's local county fair.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7803 Read Count: 8880 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2007 Updated: October 23, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: August 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pam and Roy in front of The Zipper

You may be my most favorite person ever....or not, but maybe!

Seriously though, very funny - I actually giggled.  Gorgeous banter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of brief everyday moments: sleeping, showering, working, eating...(sounds exciting, huh?)

Each part is a mini-one shot (i.e., not a WIP with one ongoing narrative); no spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3731 Read Count: 49559 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2007 Updated: November 12, 2007
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed
Date: September 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Shiny When Wet

I love your normal day to day stuff - it's just so warm and right.



Author's Response: Wow...'warm and right' is a wonderful compliment. I think these two are such 'normal' everyday characters; that's just where they live for me, I guess. Thanks so much, Geinnob!