Reviewer: proposals Signed 10
Date: September 10, 2006
Title: Chapter 1: btw - she totally says yes. :)
I'm pretty sure all of the squealing and giddy laughing I just did woke everyone in my house. You always have pitch-perfect characterization, but I just need to tell you that you have them down so well that it always amazes me.
I loved the "I’d hate to find out you were a catty, bitter, miserable bitch after all this time" line. I pictured him saying that, and I swear there is nothing sexier, and I don't know why.
God, this was just perfect. Amazing job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm always afraid one day I'll come here and someone will say...you have them down so well - don't you have a job or something else to do??? LOL!
It really helps that I read everything I can get my hands on and the fact that Jenna's really forthcoming with details of how she sees Pam. Makes it easy. :)
I'm so very glad you liked it.