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This is really funny to me cause my husband voluntarily wears red underwear! I had nothing to do with it. He hums the Superman theme whenever he puts them on. Great chapter! The Staples bit was freaking (LOL) hilarious!

Author's Response: Sounds like you have a hell of a catch of a husband - go you!!  thanks for the review, str!  I appreciate it more than you know.  :)

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uperbsay! (Funny, too)

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This is probably the best JAM piece I've ever read b/c it transcends JAM. Definitely the best chapter in this series. So great how you rambled thru all the aspects of their lives. You know what? It is damn inspiring. I really love my husband and he is my best friend. Now I want to come up with a paragraph about how & what he is to me. It'll be like when we wrote our wedding vows together. Thanks for making me feel the LOVE!!!

Author's Response:

Wheee!!!  Spreading JAM all over the place!  Thank you so much for the wonderful review, support_the_rabid and you should definitely write that paragraph.  In fact, make it a full-length letter.  If you're lucky enough to have that kind of love, you just can't give it too much attention.  And you know what's inspiring?  After the first review you left for me, you left a few more on some older things I'd written and I was so chuffed!  That's just what I did when I started reading here...found something I really liked and went and read everything that author had written.  So, thank you, and I'll see you next time, I hope

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Oh, Jim! is right. Wow! That was fantastic. I love, love, love the Alice in Wonderland reference. Brilliant!

Author's Response:

s_t_r, thank you so much for the review and for mentioning Alice!  I loved that part and I know it's a totally dorky thing to say that you loved your own line, but, oh well.  There you have it.  I'm really glad you enjoyed this one.

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I can't wait to see what the surprise is going to be! Nice job on incorporating the conversation about Dwangela into a larger convo on secrets. And, lunch for a year?! Jim is gonna need some tasks that end sooner than that or Pam is gonna have him worn out. Year long tasks do suggest that the relationship will be a long one, though :)

Author's Response: thank you for the review!!  I have a feeling Jim will end up with a whole variety of tasks to keep him busy.....

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I like how you switched perspectives halfway through. Also, incorporating the new butterfly charm was great! At this point in S3 we still hadn't seen all the growth in FNB so using the new charm was a great way to hint at that. I hope in the next chapter you can find other ways to hint at her growth (maybe in her thought processes). Anyhow, awesome chapter as usual. You really have a knack for the conversations!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliments, str! I hope you like chapter 4!

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That was awesome! So glad to read a perspective on what Jim was feeling when he made the trek back to the desk. This could be a good series. Any of his actions that might need explaining (like how he felt when Pam made him carry the lamp or an expansion on his TH at the Schrute Farm about their 1st ttip away). Anyhow, great job!

Author's Response: Hmmm...inside the head of Jim Halpert.  That would be interesting!  Probably not as entertaining as time4moxie's great piece from the POV of Jim's penis (the fabulous Talking Head - go read it!) but it might be a cool series.  It's scary as hell writing in the first person, but it would be a fun challenge.  Thank you so much for the review, support_the_rabid!

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I love that Angela is 90 lbs. and wears goggles to deal with the cats. This is soooo probable! Great story. Hope the woodland creatures are singing to you as you write the next chapter (where Jim does not take advantage of Pam but comes out like a knight in shining armour anyway).

Author's Response: lol, the woodland creatures sweetly scerenaded me as I wrote!

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I like where you are going with this...or where you seem to be going. Please keep it up!

Author's Response:

So glad you like it!  THere'll be at least one more chapter, and it's the same format (begins in the present with Dwight, flashes back to ca. Conflict Resolution, then comes back to post-The Job). 

Thanks so much for your review!

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Aacckkk! Please keep posting. I am going to need more chapters and more resolution and more JAM. Chris...actually I dated a guy named Chris who was quite nice. But he's not Jim!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Haha, no, Chris is no Jim. *sigh* Sorry for the delay in posting, I\'ve got two stories going right now, and they\'re fighting for both space in my head and time to write them. I\'ll try to get the next chapter up soon though! Thanks so much for your support (even though I\'m not rabid...sorry couldn\'t help myself) ;)

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That was too sweet and so apt for their relationship. Great job!

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This is great! I am anxious for her!