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Your stories never cease to amaze me!  :)  My favorite part:

She seems to notice the room now. "Do you need beer?"
He shakes his head.
She raises the box. "Spoons? I have some."
He smiles. "No."

LOL  It made me giggle.  :)  Thanks for sharing this.  Keep up the brilliant work!

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Loved this!  Like you, I've always been intrigued by the Phyllis/Jim interaction.  I think Phyllis is one of the best characters on the show, and you've really captured her in this.  My favorite part:

I know she hurt you, but you're hurting her more.

That was so perfect.  Brilliant job on this!  Thanks for sharing!

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First of all:  how amazing is John Mayer?  Seriously, if me and John Krasinski don't work out, I'm gonna have to call up John Mayer and see if he's interested.  ;)  Oh, and "Continuum" is by far Mayer's best album yet.  I bought it the day it came out and I haven't stopped listening to it since.  It's particularly good when you're writing, and this just proves it!  LOL

I've always thought this song had echoes of Jim and Pam, and this story was so awesomely accurate of Jim's feelings when he woke up alone.  The line "Wondering, was she really here?" made me tear up a bit, and then Jim crying... wow, poor Jim.  The ending was lovely, by the way.  "waking up is the best part"  Aww!  Loved it!  Great job!  Thanks for sharing this!

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First of all, Snow Patrol is easily one of the best bands to listen to when writing.  And I'm glad to know that I'm not alone when I saw that their music inspires me to write!  :)

I felt so bad for Pam at her art show, so reading this was a nice way to get into her mind and see how she felt about it all.  When Pam started drinking the wine and composing those e-mails, it made your story progress further and get better & better after each e-mail.

Favorite part:  (other than those weird metal springy things that stick out of the wall - you know, those contraptions that supposedly keep doors from closing all the way - and I decided that they're creepy. Did I tell you that I had a puppy once who pawed at one of those things? He did, and when it made that weird sound - if you were here, I'd totally do it for you - it freaked him out, and he peed all over the floor.)  I can't even begin to tell you how hard I laughed at this!  I wasn't expecting it at all, and then just imagining Pam writing this in a semi-drunken state me laugh harder.  LOL

Anyway, the point of this rather long review is that I loved your story.  This is definitely one of the best Pam-centered fics I've ever read-- in-character, appropriate, and believable.  Thanks for sharing this!  Lovely job!

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This was a piece you had to write to make yourself feel better after Business School, and this is a piece that I had to read to make myself feel better after Business School.  It all works out well in the end.  :)

The Ryan/Kelly bit?  Loved it!  Had me laughing hysterically, because Kelly's dialogue was seriously spot-on.  And Ryan's inner thoughts were freaking brilliant.  Poor guy, being banished to Kelly's cubicle!

My favorite part was Pam admitting that she'd painted that over the summer, then Jim saying "I wasn't here this summer," with Pam replying "I know.  I just missed seeing it everyday so I put it in the painting."  Nice touch!  I love the idea.  :)

Thanks for sharing!  I loved it!

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I've never been much of a Karen fan, and your story is just making me hate her all the more.  LOL  Seriously, though, you've really done an excellent job on this.  I love how you write Jim particularly, especially in this part:
“Right,” he said. Are you sure you’re okay? he wanted to say. Do you want me to come over? he wanted to say. Call me if you need anything, he wanted to say. Instead he said, “Well, I’ll see you on Monday then. Have a good weekend.”
That paragraph really got to me; the repetition was brilliant.  Throughout season 3, Jim has sort of been dancing around what he truly wants to say to Pam, and you really captured that in that paragraph, with him always wanting to say something, but instead he says something else.  That's so perfect.  Great job!  But anyway, I'm dying to read more!  I'll keep an eye out for another chapter and until then, keep up the amazing work!  :)

 P.S.  Be honest now:  just how excited are you for Harry Potter book 7?!  :)

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Ooh, a cliffhanger!  :)

So far, I'm loving this.  You've done an excellent job of capturing the characters' voices.  As I reading, I could totally hear each of the characters speaking the dialogue, which is always nice to see in a fanfic.  I'm dying to know what's going to happen between Roy and Jim!  Hope you update soon!  Lovely job on this!  Thanks for sharing and keep up the fabulous work!

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Wow, I think I just melted a little.  I loved that ending.  It's so appropriate for Pam and Jim.  :)  And the fact that Pam gave him the crayon?  Brilliant.

I'm a huge fan of this story but I've only now gotten around to reviewing.  I'm a slacker, and I know this.  :)  Anyway, I seriously love the idea of Jim spying on Pam behind the identity of Squirrel McPants (which, by the way, is a hilarious pseudonym!).  This story is so much fun to read because of how well you've nailed the characters' voices and actions.  It doesn't hurt that you have a lovely way with words, either.  ;)  Keep up the great work, moxie!  I'm eagerly awaiting another chapter!

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Frank Muller and Deanna Sullivan.  OMG.  The names alone had me laughing so hard I was falling out of my chair!  Oh, and the title of this story?  Genius!  LMAO  The fact that you're crossing my two favorite TV shows of all-time in one fanfic is beyond brilliant!  I have no idea where you're going with this, but I'm intrigued and excited at the idea of our favorite special agents "Frank Muller and Deanna Sullivan" making an appearance in our favorite office.  LOL

Seriously, I love you for this crossover.  I'm looking forward to more.  I want to believe that you're going to update soon.  :)

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Favorite Mayer songs: "Comfortable," "Love Song For No One," "Why Georgia," "Good Love Is On The Way," "Love Soon".... okay, wait, there's just too many!  LOL  I love everything off of "Continuum," and honestly can't say I have a favorite.  John Mayer's amazing!

Anyway, to get on to the point of this review, I have to say that I really enjoyed this.  Using those lyrics was a great idea.  I love the reason that Pam was crying.  You did a wonderful job writing from Jim's perspective, especially at this part:  "He fell in love every time her saw her or felt her near. It was like he forgot when she wasn’t around but once she would return, he couldn’t resist falling head over heels every time."  That part was written so simply (in a very good way!), and it sounds so appropriate for him.  Brilliant job!

I look forward to more of these.  Very creative and a fantastic use of Mayer lyrics!  :)  Keep up the beautiful work!

Song suggestions for another chapter:  "Home Life" has always reminded me a bit of Jim, so I think it would be a fascinating look into Jim's mind.  "Not Myself" would be a very interesting glimpse into Pam's thoughts about starting the relationship with Jim.  No matter what songs you choose, I have faith that it will turn out well!  :)  I'm excited to see more of these from you!