Jim gets fussy and Pam gets fed up.
Spoilers through The Negotiation.
10 This is a really great story. This is so much in character and believable and so sweet. Just wonderful!
Five first kisses and one hundredth one...10 Best... ending.... ever....
I really love your stories!!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying them! And your reviews are definitely appreciated. :)
9 Great story. I think that the thoughts you have for them are very plausible and true to character. Thanks!
This is a transcript of The Newlywed Show, taped in December 2009.10 Great story! Very funny and again your characterization is just perfect. You really nailed Dwight and Angela and Jim and Pam perfectly! Read your profile... I'm also a guy, late 30s, married/kids, in NoVA and I also write sappy fanfic (no Office ones yet, though), so fear not. You are not alone!
Great story! Very funny and again your characterization is just perfect. You really nailed Dwight and Angela and Jim and Pam perfectly! Read your profile... I'm also a guy, late 30s, married/kids, in NoVA and I also write sappy fanfic (no Office ones yet, though), so fear not. You are not alone!
10 How a story this wonderful can only have 7 reviews is a crime! I love this story. I've probably read it 4 times and was ashamed to see I'd not reviewed it yet. I remember the first time, I actually didn't see the twist coming till almost the very end. Thanks so much for sharing it!
Hmm....how to put this? At the end of Season 3, Jim asked Pam out on a date. I thought I might go out on a limb and fill in the blanks.... (SERIOUS FLUFF ALERT!)
You already have him, she told herself. He came back from New York because of you. There is nothing to prove tonight. She wished she could believe it.
10 So cute! What a great story! You rock!
AU After the merger. Pam learns the dreams Jim had before Dunder Mifflin and why he had to abandon them. Will it change how she feels about him?9 Great story. Very touching and sweet. I really enjoyed it.
10 Wonderful story that ended way too soon!
Pam gets a taste of what her life could be like. AU10 Wonderful, beautiful story. I loved it! Off to read the sequel!
9 Wonderful little story. I'm glad I managed to find it in the archive. Very heartbreaking, and very realistic.
What if Pam had gone along with Michael and Dwight to the convention? Was she ready to see Jim? Was Jim ready to face Pam?10 Wow. What an unbelievably good story. So angsty and realistic! Simply wonderful! I'm so glad I found it.
10 To go all Kevin on you... Awesome. Perfect way to tell him. I love it!
Pam wishes she had loved Jim all her life, and Jim rises to the challenge. Pure fluff.10 I've read this before and loved it. My only excuse for not reviewing back then was that the review count was exactly 69 and it felt like I was betraying Kevin to add another. Still, after re-reading it, I couldn't not tell you how simply marvelous this story is. It's incredible. Nothing could make it better. Just perfect.
50 10 I'm guessing from the dates that this story is likely not going to be continued, but I really loved it (and the original). I hope you finish it someday!
Author's Response: Never give up on it - I do intend to finish it; I've been ruminating on the next chapter just this week, actually. Thanks for reviewing!
Post-Benihana Christmas fic!
Remember when Jim and Pam convinced Dwight that a CIA helicopter would pick him up on the roof? Well, neither of them could resist showing up that night to see the prank to it's conclusion.
9 Wow. The slow build here is killing me! You must update soon!!!!!! Great story! Exclamation Point!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, Desslok! I'm working feverishly on chapter 5. I promise it won't be another 11 months between updates!
10 This is so great. I'm a guy and I still wish I'd been on this date!! Wait, what does that... nevermind. Did anyone take you up on the roundrobin thing? If so, how do I find it? If not, can I?
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
9 Great story. I just re-watched the Dundies episode last night and wanted to find a good "post-Dundies" story. This completely fit the bill, and more! Thanks for posting it!
A sequel to "Five Ways Pam Tells Jim She's Pregnant", about a year and a half down the line. Each vignette corresponds to one in the original story, and are five stand-alone realities.
10 Great story. The fluff at the end makes up for the heart-breaking first two chapters! Patrick and Chrissy, huh? I'd love to read THAT fic! Oh, wait! I already have and it rocked too! :)
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)10 This story is just so wonderful. I see hundreds of reviews, very well deserved, and don't know what I add, but it brought a tear to my eye and really moved me. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it.
What if Jim never went to Stamford? What if Pam started making life changes a little sooner?
An AU look at season 3.
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9 Great story. Really looking forward to the rest!!
Jim and Pam, moments from each month, starting with May 2007. Just sort of filling in some blanks. Some fluff, a little angst here and there. Eventually I'll get through a whole year. Spoilers through "The Job," I guess. 10 Another great story. Is it done or might you continue it?
9 Yay! I love MovingOnRoy stories. I need to write a Roy/Katy story. This is very nice and realistic as well. Thanks for sharing it!
When everything reminds you of the past, it is best to embrace it.
10 Another great story, though I kinda wish you'd ended with a proposal. :) I like that you let Jim in on the game and how his memories in Stamford were so different than hers. Great characterization here and tremendous fluff!
Author's Response: Thank you! You know, I've done so many proposal stories at this point that I'm afraid people are bored! Ha. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. This story was fun- each chapter was based on a word issued that day on the forum.
She saw the iPod as she was packing her stuff into boxes. It had been tucked away in a drawer for months. She never listened to it anymore; the memories were too painful.
10 This is a wonderful story. Please continue soon! A lot of stories lose the sense of the characters, but your characterizations are just perfect. I love JustGivenUp!Jim, but only cause I know the fluff lies ahead!
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