8 When true love goes a little too far... bad!fic for the truly twisted Jam fan in all of us.
she left him all her dundies? What sentiment Pam! Wow. This was hilarious Azlin! You rule at bad!fic. Is that a compliment that you can write badly? Haha I don't know if it is or not, but it's sure meant to be a good thing! I love it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! And I'm definitely taking it as a compliment. If I can't write good stuff for real, I'll gladly accept the post of mocking those who can.
I hate you and your stupid pranks!
The fury of a thousand suns.... nice! hehe
Oh Pam put the scissors down and step away from the boy!! wow. I seriously don't know how to comment on this dark yet funny chapter. Wow. Did not expect that.
. . . comes from some other beginning's end. Post-Beach Games. Based around the finale (but no spoilers).
I guess this is kind of AU now ;)
and after the fourth "accidental" bump, Jim took her hand.
Hee! This was a great story. I would totally be okay if this happened exactly this way on the show! I loved the ending *Sigh* great!
A bit of an AU look at Jim and Pam, and a rather depressing relationship. First chapter takes place following Phyllis' wedding and then it goes from there. Does not take into account the events that take place in following episodes.
Not a happy piece of writing, I figured I'd take a different approach from the fluffier post-finale stories. I don't think there will be any fluff in this one.
oooh! Pam and Karen are such the little schemers! The fake slap and the set up... I can't wait to see how that all turns out!
I love this story and how devious they all are! I can't wait to see what happens when Jim gets set up!
Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?
Yay for readiness! Love it! I'm so glad you made the few changes and I can't wait to get more! SO I just realized that someone else (see below) has my TWoP screename! that's going to get confusing! :) I was confused for a second because I thought I'd already commented and then I was like wait.... that's not me. Heh oops! Anyways back on topic: I'll be sending you an e-mail with a response to your ideas soon :) Great job!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Ha. I thought someone else had your name too. Thanks so much for your help on this story. I guess it's getting a good response. YEAH! Thanks a bunch Nicole!
Heh! Too great BeckySue! You have no idea how exciting it is to see the little changes you made due to my suggestions! It makes me happy inside.
You already know how much I heart this story and don't second guess yourself. You rock hardcore. :)
PS: Based on ch3, I am very excited to see where you're going. Hee! Hope to see more soon!
Me too! I heart it. And just so you know I happen to like Risk. That'd be one interesting night playing that with Mose and Dwight? Can you imagine?!!? You're insane!
Anyhoo, I'm still interested to see what other tickets Jimmy boy has received ;) hee! My beta for the next chapter is on it's way soon! I had to perform my civil reader duties first and now, I am off! :) Great job BeckySue!
Nicole, thanks for everything! I appreciate it! Seriously...this story is much better and more exciting to write because of you! Gah, you're great. Thanks!
Risk...I've tried to play before but didn't last but 20 minutes...it was boring to me. So, I can totally see Mose and Dwight playing this for hours on end at night in their farm house. Sad, huh? Wow....
Thanks again for reading Nicole...now, get to beta'ing my next chapter you hooligan!
I'm pondering...... and yes I do like this chapter. The cop, sand castles, and low disguised voices are just tooo awesome to not like this chapter BeckySue! You rock and now I've filled my reviewing duties for the day, *bows* thank you and good night (well... morning. whatever) Lovely, lovely job!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for pondering it. hehehe. Thanks again for working on this with me. You've done a fantastic job in keeping me focused on this story. Having a great beta really helps me stay on top (TWSS) on the plotline. Ha. Thanks.
Reporting for reviewing duty! Just a little side note: where you changed Pam's blog to a "diary" the next sentence it still says journal. ;)
OMG you already know how I feel about this, but the next chapter is seriously..... wow. There are no words. Well I'm sure there are but I can't articulate right now. I'll be able to send it back to you tonight. But wowza! I love the choice you made here without the kiss and the whole Dwight/Jim interaction? Priceless!!
Yay for Norah Jones!! You know that this chapter is pretty much amazing and I've already told you this ten fold but I love how you made a simple hug seem so gratifying and amazing!!
On the issue of continuing: I guess you could leave it here if you don't have any more inspiration or desire to continue. But if you do, I say onward! This isn't necessarily just a first date fic, right? I mean.... it is, but it can still show the aftermath and whatnot. Their first date isn't the end, it's just the beginning! Yay for Jam. Anyways, I love this, you know it, and I e-mailed you.... so check it! :)
Yay for NORAH! I love her and she inspires me to write sappy stuff. Yay for her!
Okay, thanks for the beta and reviewing it. Oh, and recc'ing it over at TWoP! YEAh! So, I'll be chatting with you about continuing. I just sent you the beginning of the next chapter...so, let me know what you think...
Question: Do I get to wear a cape? I think it should be required as part of my duties as Superbeta. And theme music. :)
Kev's list; Pam amost spilling the beans. The Harry Potter reference; and Dwight/Jim 's fight. You rock.
And you accidentally left in one of my comments that says SO Dwight! Hehe it's in red, you can't miss it. oops! :)
You know I love this chapter and the next chapter? Rocks so much I should get it back to you v. soon.
Now my official duties as SuperBeta! are officially done (temporarily) *bows*
Ha. Superbeta reporting to headquarters. One chapter left to beta and return then your mission will be complete. You've done master proud. :)
Thanks again for the help. I can't believe I left a beta marking in there! WHOOPS! Alot of people have pointed that out to me. Oh well. It stinks...but ohwell.
ALright...I'll be talking with you soon, Superbeta.
Ooh! A million gold stars?! And a cape? I feel so special! :) Hee
Seriously tho, you already know my silly feelings on your lovely story but I can't tell you how awesome this was! My favorite part was for sure when Pam leaned and whispered into Jim's ear. So touching and them.
I heart this story and can't wait to put my cape back on although I do plan on traveling during my sabbatical... question: can a million gold stars be redeemed for a plane ticket? That'd be pretty sweet if they could. ha
Anyways, I loved this chapter and story oh so much and I reread it while listening Maroon 5 and that song totally fits! Great great great great great job! :)
Three years have passed since Pam left Scranton for New York, and Jim is still very much on her mind. Will a work-related trip to Rome, Italy be the catalyst that reunites Pam with Jim once and for all?
wow it's like the two most addicting things EVER together ine one: Office fic + Facebook = No life outside the internet. I love this idea and can't wait to see where you're headed!!
Author's Response: I know! I think I spend most of my nights just hanging out on Facebook or scouring TWoP for more Office stuff. LOL Thanks so much for reading.
Takes place after "The Job".
Jim has finally asked Pam out on a date. What happens now? This story follows their relationship as it develops throughout the summer, and shows how the rest of Dunder Mifflin reacts to both this and other recent changes in their lives.
Wow. Oh, Dwight, how did you become the way you are? Seriously. This was good. Very interesting idea to have her ask Jim why she used his phone. I'd always wondered that myself. I hope you keep this up (that's what she said!)
MEMBER'S CHOICE - An alternate universe where Pam and Roy had a wedding, Pam goes to art school in New York, Dwight owns a restaurant and Jim works for a job in advertising that he likes a lot more and gets a lot more money at.
Basically? Dunder Mifflin never exists. And everyone meets under different circumstances.
The characters are pretty much the same -- personality-wise -- they just have different roles and work different jobs.
So good! I love how they've still on the same path even though it's completely different lives. Can't wait for more!
This is so great! I love just the uniqueness of this story and how great you've gotten Jim/Pam voices down. I loved the idea of them talking on the phone telling her life story over the phone while painting. So goooooood! I can't wait for more! :)
Not soon enough Jim!
This was a great chapter! I wish I could go to Paris with JH too! I can't wait to see what happens! Lovely job!
I love Helpful!Dwight! Pam and Dwight do really get alone when they need to. THat was a great touch.
Poor Jim. He's going to miss his baby! Haha bite me. So good. I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes!
A few people run into Jim Halpert at the Super Walmart.Ah too cute! The little family with Pam wearing Jim's shirt and the awkwardness for Katy! I love it! More, please? :) Great job!
EmilyHalpert this is so good! :) I loved it. Especially the chalk one (def. my fave). The funny thing is I can totally see them doing things like this, despite the fact that they are older. There's nothing wrong with being a kid at heart! I love it!
Author's Response: Aww thanks! Yeah, the day I wrote this I got to play with chalk... and then I accidentally sat in it, so I had a very colorful butt the rest of the day. Inner children are the best
16 Jim and Pam think they are keeping a secret.oh to be a fly on that supply closet wall...
can I just say I love this and can't wait already for the next chapter? :) Great job!!! I heart it.
“Ok, well, sometimes the gift is really about the gesture, you know, like what it means, instead of what it is.”
Pre-series.
I remember reading this previously but I still love it. Striped carnations, eh? Never heard of it but it's true. Cute. And he totally should tell her.
And I LOVE that it was inspired by the greatest thing ever: Wikipedia!!! hahaha you know me and Wikipedia are like total BFF
Pam gets a taste of what her life could be like. AUaw, your story makes me smile like this ;D
So great. I love your take on the cuginos first date and how Roy gets upset when he sees them and whatnot. So original and good.
Gah, the ending makes my heart swell and me feel so happy inside, you have no idea.
Lovely, lovely job!!! I can't wait to read more. :) (I hope there's more!)
Thank you so much! That's so nice to hear. Well...read.
There is a tiny bit more coming. I promise!
Despite how awesome it would be to wake up married one day to Jim with kids, I'd be a little freaked out like Pam is too. I love the nervousness yet familiarity of everything that she's going through. I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: I agree, it would be exciting, but extremely weird. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
“You should always buy a girl dinner before trying to get into her pants, Jim. Always,”
My favorite line, hands down. This chapter was so amazing. I love the way you had her tell him was like just a breath of relief and just all falls out and how he was sleeping and when they're laying there... *sigh* It was pretty much perfect the way you wrote it, no joke. :) Lovely job!