10

Well, I'm reviewing here too, because this was so good.  If you manage to make the Karen haters sad, you're doing something right.

Author's Response: Well if you're nice enough to review places, I'm certainly nice enough to respond to both :)  I really appreciate your support of the story, even if it does make you feel sorry for our most hated JAM roadblock.

10

Holy crap, the Creed parts had me doubled over laughing (and possibly goobering - sorry).  Just too funny.

But wasn't DinkinFlicka playing this game just today?  Isn't that an amazing coincidence that you both post the playing of this game on the same day.  Unless that was prearranged.

Ha!  Jim, you idiot!  What are you going to do now?

Anything with copious amounts of Creed is fine by me.

10

Awesome and truly spectacular.  You've managed to do the impossible in making psycho Andy a sympathetic character.

Author's Response: Wow, that is so so so flattering!  Thank you so much for leaving a review!   Glad you enjoyed it!

The Bible says to ‘Love thy neighbor.’  Angela’s eyes narrowed.  Michael was not God’s neighbor when that rule was implemented.

Best talking head ever.

10

There were so many funny bits all the way through this.  I don't know how you do it.

Our kids are going to hate us no matter what.  So very true.  Take that prospective parents!

I just wish you wouldn’t bring up babies while we’re having sex My brother's wife has been talking about babies an awful lot recently.  Pretty much every other sentence for the past week.  He's scared.

And the short jokes and Kelly getting Ryan a chair so he can reach the top cabinet and his family maybe being a little worried that he was gay!  Just too good.

You've certainly outdone yourself this time, Muggins.  She's such a little vixen, isn't she?  And, by association, what does that say about you?

RE: #3.  My brother got his first girlfriend when she said 'bite me' and he did.

Author's Response: Question: Where did he bite her? Because.... I'm just saying... have you ever been lightly biten on the wrist? Amazingly hot.

When I worked in an auto plant, one of the jobs that was forced upon me as bottom head on the engineering totem pole was 'heat stress relief'.  They loaned me out to the Health and Safety department and I would walk around the plant with a high-tech thermometer and record the wet-bulb temperature.  If we got over a certain value (according to a handy chart they supplied me with) I would order extra long breaks and the distribution of popsicles for the line workers.

So basically what I'm saying is that popsicles might fit the bill here.  You know what I'm talking about.

9

Am I the only one taking the 'literally sucking at people' to mean 'literally sucking at people', because knowing you, the gutter direction is where we're headed.  I can't wait.

Author's Response:

The gutter.... now that you mention it... that'd be a GREAT place for this to go! ;)

FIELDTRIP TO THE GUTTER, EVERYONE!

The other husbands are just too funny here.  I think you managed to hit 90% of the old married cliches in this chapter...

10

Dwight and his armour and, of course, in the butt were the best parts.  I don't see how you can top that, but I'd like to see you try.

I'm laughing too hard at the pooping open a beer saga to form a coherent response.