Penname: Becky215 Real name: CH
Member Since: February 21, 2007

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Summary: AU He held out his hand over the desk for her to shake. Her cheeks reddened as his large hand wrapped around her small, frail one. She forced a small smile. “Oh.”
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14680 Read Count: 33473 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2007 Updated: March 25, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I really like how you've ended this chapter and the dynamic you're making between the characters (even in an AU story). I can't wait to see where you take this next!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This just gets better and better. I can't wait for more. I LOVE the line with them in bed and he says "not tonight" when she asks "hope to die?" So sweet, and I just adore your AU. So you've got me on tenterhooks; keep the chapters coming!

C.

Three Mistakes by Misao7 Rated: T [Reviews - 9] 4
Summary:

Three moments in the life of Pam and Jim when a mistake defines, pulls, and changes things.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 898 Read Count: 1475 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2007 Updated: March 10, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really, really liked this. So simple and sweet, but to the point and quite effective. I would love to see more of these vignettes (and the clever way you wrapped in all of the characters). Nice job!

Summary: Sometime post Return. Jim drives Pam home and smuttiness ensues.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2290 Read Count: 12516 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2007 Updated: March 11, 2007
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Date: March 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: born on a desert floor, you've the deepest thirst

Very, very good, and tastefully written, too. I think the details were amazing and realistic here, but you have to give us more from that ending! Please follow up, even though you said it's finished, and give us the happy ending we need! Surely he can't walk away from her after all of THAT! Haha--fabulous story. Nice job!

The Mole by sharky Rated: K+ [Reviews - 67] 15
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe documentary company needs a little help to finalize a distribution deal, so the head of the camera crew decides to recruit a mole.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Documentary Crew
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7812 Read Count: 17675 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2007 Updated: March 23, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Tuesday

This is such a fun and clever idea, Sharky! I can't wait to see where it goes next, and I love that you've made Phyllis the Jam-champion we all know that she wants to be! Keep it up, and I look forward to reading more of your story!  --C.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you liked the most recent chapter too.

Summary: Jim faces a dilemma in the break room every day.
Categories: Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 569 Read Count: 2049 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: ...worlds turn upside down

I really like this. Good inner monologue, and yes, I enjoyed your cliffhanger! Can't wait to see where this goes next! -C.

Author's Response: aw... i hate to say it, but this was it. i was going to do it differently, but yeah... sorry! still, i'm glad you like!

Summary:

Jim gets two tickets for a Beatles tribute band. Basically, my love for The Beatles and The Office combined.

 Please review!!!!

 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1054 Read Count: 1220 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you, thank you, thank you, for getting rid of Karen, OOH. It brightened my evening!

Fun story, and good job weaving your personal tastes into the storyline. I was happy to see that Jim had better luck with the radio station than Dwight did ("hello Rock 107, am I the 107th caller?")

Nice work!  --C.

Summary: A short example of the type of literary masterpiece that suits the new "Bad Fanfic" challenge. Please enjoy the glory of this great work of art.
Categories: Other, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 300 Read Count: 3361 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2007 Updated: March 14, 2007
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Date: March 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination of the written word.

This is HILARIOUS!!!!! Absolutely genius and too funny for words. It's raining in Boston today, but it's sunny over my computer right now. Fabulous work!

Author's Response: I am so glad I could share the sunshine of horrible prose!   Yippee!

Summary:

My very own requisite, post-"Cocktails" fight/angst/smut fest.

I apologize to everyone who's tired of the FIGHT!ness of all these post-Cocktails stories, but I promise it's worth it. I hope. I also apologize to everyone who has already read this through Livejournal, but it took me a long time to get this site to work for me.

Disclaimer: I own none of these characters, I do not profit off of them, and no infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6643 Read Count: 20116 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2007 Updated: March 26, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8
Date: March 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Just Too Tired To

Very sexy, and I love how you've characterized Jim in the early chapters. I think you really captured his struggle with his emotions, which has fueled his character this season, and it was a delight to see that struggle finally end the only way it should. Keep up the good work!

Summary: Michael is a few minutes late in interrupting Jim and Pam during their break room conversation in The Merger, and the subtle difference means everything.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4213 Read Count: 9318 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
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Date: March 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Natural Emotions

This is coming along well. I'm with you on not liking song-fics, but I like how you wove the lyrics in on this one. I think it flows well, and I'm enjoying the way you took one of those moments from the show that could have turned out so different if only 3 or 4 seconds had elapsed (I still want to know what Pam was going to say right before Jim kissed her in Casino Night!).

Nice work--can't wait for more!  --C.

Summary: Jim and Pam see each other out in a club, set in season 2. Smut happens.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3399 Read Count: 14854 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
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Date: March 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Club

Oh my, VL...Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, CH. It's a high compliment coming from you!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Later That Night

There. Was that so hard?TWSS...

Nice job here. I LOVE that you had him meeting her on the way out the door, going to get her just as she was coming to him. This rounded out the story beautifully, and I love the sweetness/sultriness of the chapter. Very  nice job all around!

-C. 



Author's Response: Thanks, CH! Since it was for you, I'm glad!

Summary:

Originally an entry into the Bad Fanfic Challenge but it grew a life of its own.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Bad Fanfic
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1385 Read Count: 4692 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: April 29, 2007
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Date: April 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The DCMP Signal

"Just let me know when it's my turn to do something," Jim said, polishing up his fingernails as he does every hour to maintain his manicure. "I haven't been used much this season and would appreciate another line or two."

"Hold on a second," said Karen, in a businesslike way. She then said something sincere to a supporting character. "I have to do that every fifteen minutes, they say it's part of my charm."

Hahaha---Too true! This is quite funny, and not too "bad," I should say! Looking forward to more! -CH

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Inside The Fortress

I'm a huge fan of your adverbs like "filing cabinetly & bit partly," and this line: “But I want to prank Dwight. And tease Andy. And grow my hair longer again. Who knew my ears were this big?”

So funny! -CH



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, he said respondingly.

Summary: Karen and Jim are married and they have moved to New York. But there are some people that you can't leave behind. A one shot from Karen's point of view after Jim reconnects with Pam
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1291 Read Count: 3238 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: April 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this! I think it's a story that was told in the perfect amount of words with just the right tone. You hit the nail on the head about "Pam's Jim." There are definitely two versions of the same man out there these days; here's hoping the "Office" writers will take a cue from you and give back "Pam's Jim."

Nice work! -CH

Creaky Mattresses by unfold Rated: MA [Reviews - 23] 9
Summary: Jim. Pam. Hotel room. Set at some point in the not too distant future.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1443 Read Count: 10841 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 18, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
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Date: March 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice work--I loved your happy ending and the ridiculously sexy way Jim counts. Fabulously fun fluff!

Summary: After Pam's first failed art show, her teacher shows her something that leads to an epiphany, of sorts. She had the courage and honesty all along... she just needed a certain someone to bring it out. Post-Business School. General series spoilers including and before Business School.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5101 Read Count: 4936 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2008
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 7
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Aspiro

I like this chapter a lot; I enjoy any story that features Pam having guts we only wish she could have. I think you hit the nail on the head when she asks him, "How did you do it?" Very poignant!  --CH

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 7
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Aspiro

I like this chapter a lot; I enjoy any story that features Pam having guts we only wish she could have. I think you hit the nail on the head when she asks him, "How did you do it?" Very poignant!  --CH

Author's Response: Oh if only Pam could grow a pair and muster up some courage. Lord knows no one else in the office will, so she'll have to do it for them.  *cough*Jim!*cough* But for her to now be looking at Jim in a relationship, being the one wanting the 'taken' person... creepy symmetry, much? Aaaaanyway, thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Fluff and Fold by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 32] 12
Summary:

Pam comes clean at the Laudromat, which in case you didn't know is quite the hotbed of romance.  :)  Post-Cocktails fic. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2922 Read Count: 5478 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2007 Updated: March 20, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 9
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Machine Wash Warm...Tumble Dry Low...

Very sweet and a refreshing take on the post-Cocktails storyline. Nice work!  -CH

Author's Response: Thanks Becky!!!  I'm glad you liked it.

Summary: Post Cocktails. Roy goes after Jim. Updated final chapter: Five years have passed... what has become of everyone?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6727 Read Count: 16548 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 20, 2007 Updated: March 28, 2007
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Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Pam

I just read this chapter with Pat Benatar's "We Belong" playing on my ipod, and what a perfect soundtrack to such a dramatic chapter! I think you really stepped into your stride here, and I like your post-Cocktails perspective. I personally think you have one OR two chapters left in this story, especially since we have yet to see Karen's discovery or (what I hope is the) intevitable "Jim and Pam are going to be together forever" scene.

I really like this story and how you've captured the characters; can't wait for more!!  --CH

Summary: After the death of a fellow co-worker, the rest of the office must carry on with their daily routine. However, when a journal is discovered containing many of their secrets, they all have to confront their secrets and the consequences that go with them.
Categories: Other
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14520 Read Count: 23717 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2007 Updated: April 10, 2007
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Date: March 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: The Puzzle

I really like how you've woven fun mystery into this story while adding careful doses of all the characters. Few stories take the time to explore the other relationships of the office (though we Jammers sometimes struggle to admit that such things exist!), but your Phylllis/Stanley moment is a perfect reason for more authors to try branching out in the same way. Great job, and I can't wait to see where this goes next!  --CH

Summary: Spoilers through Cocktails. Pam has a spill.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8214 Read Count: 11637 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2007 Updated: April 21, 2007
Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 7
Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--To Recreate Us

I really like this. You opened the story in a very original way, and I'm anxious to see where it goes next. Great descriptions and fabulous work on making that moment between Jim and Pam really come alive. I can't wait for more!  -CH

Summary: Past Featured StoryMichael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.
Categories: Other, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Bob Vance, Dwight, Jan, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Phyllis, Ryan, Stanley
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44699 Read Count: 117561 ePub Downloads: 28
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2007 Updated: April 17, 2007
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Date: March 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Lookin' good, Dink! I can't wait to see where this is going. Hopefully it will end better than "Booze Cruise" did!  ;)

Can't wait for more.   -CH



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the start, because there is plenty more to come ;)

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Pam & Ryan? Interesting...

I like this story. It's always nice to see what authors do when they take the characters out of the office, and you're doing a great job with it so far. Keep it up!! --CH



Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that the Pam/Ryan possibilities weren't going to scare the JAM fans away from the story... trust me, jammers should stick around ;)

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed
Date: March 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.

Wow--This Pam and Ryan thing is pretty crazy! I really can't wait to see where this is going next!! You have me on the edge of my seat!  --CH

Author's Response: I'm glad that I've sucked you in! :) Hope you enjoy the rest.