Penname: brokenloon Real name: Steve
Member Since: March 03, 2007

Bio:

Okay, first of all I'm a guy-are there any others writing here?  Yes, I am of course in love with Jenna Fischer and with the fictional character she has created.  And I would totally have a beer and watch some hoops with Jim Halpert.

I've never written romantic stuff in my life; this show just brings it out of me.  My stories here are sort of little daydreams that seem somehow therapeutic to me.  You can usually count on happy endings from my stuff; plenty of heartache on the actual show.      

Other stuff:  37, divorced, two kids, I live in Northern Virginia

Feel free to contact me.   

author of the month 2017


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Reviews by brokenloon
How it Falls by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 180] 66
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam?  What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on?  What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31793 Read Count: 73220 ePub Downloads: 31
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Don't forget where you've been.

I'll add my voice ot the chorus of those who love this.  The breakup is beautifully done, and Pam absolutely would go to her mom's.  Also loved the closing conversation and Pam grinning a bit as she thinks of what is to come. 

Lost and Found by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 17] 12
Summary: What could (should) have happened after the PLoD in The Merger...
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4746 Read Count: 21943 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really, really well done.  Beautifully paced and satisfying (TWSS, I Guess?)  It just unfolded very naturally, and I appreciate the lack of bells and whistles or shocking plot twists.  Great job. 

Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon! That\'s kind of what I was going for -- short, sweet and to the point (TWSS???). Especially since it was my first one and I\'m just sort of playing around. Thanks for reading and commenting!

When I grow up by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 4
Summary: Jim contemplates a career change
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 488 Read Count: 1955 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 29, 2008 Updated: February 29, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: February 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, very nice.  This whole thing feels just like them, and I love Pam saying just the right thing.  Great stuff.

Author's Response:

One of the flaws I find in my own fic is my inerrant tendency to have Pam and/or Jim masterfully say exactly the right thing at exactly the right time, which real people seldom do. I am reassured by the fact that you think it is OK in this case! Thank you so much!

Recognition by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 26] 26
Summary:

Barrettes, bras, neck ties (things that open and close.)

Set sometime between The Job and Fun Run; no spoilers.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Let Your Hair Down
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1228 Read Count: 7567 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2008 Updated: March 03, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As usual I'm left grasping for words to describe the awesomeness of your words.  No one does grown up in character hot stuff like you.  And, I loved the tie part.  I can totally picture Pam doing that and Jim appreciating it.  Thanks for improving my afternoon with this gem. 

Author's Response: Grown up, in character AND hot? Now I'm grasping for words to say how flattered I am! Glad you agree he'd appreciate the gesture - and I think she'd appreciate being appreciated, lol. It just felt to me like such an intimate thing for her to do - and I liked the idea of it bringing her back to a time when she was recognized (appreciated) by someone else who really loved her. Before this turns into another fic - thanks, brokenloon - I really APPRECIATE this review.

Sheet Music by wendolf Rated: MA [Reviews - 120] 64
Summary: Past Featured StoryA look at what might have happened between The Job and 'round about Money. Lots of steam in the beginning, then some angst for good measure.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14947 Read Count: 55067 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2008 Updated: March 07, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, these two kids.  The past is gonna get them if they are not careful.

I'm really enjoying this story.  I love your characterization...one trait of Jim's that is shown on the show that lot of fic writers seem to ignore is that he is very non-confrontational.  With all he's been through, the closest we've ever seen to him raising his voice or obviously displaying anger is in "Girls and Boys."  Also, I agree that Pam's anger would have faded quickly, and I really liked your Dwight here...it's tough to have him believably ask Jim to lunch, but you managed.  Great work. 



Author's Response: Brokenloon, I agree. Jim, for all he\'s been through, has never really had his say or dealt with his pain out loud. I\'m still not sure I\'ll have him hash it ALL out. But he needs to vent a little (even if it\'s venting with angry sex ;-) Thanks for your comments!

ground floor by kells8995 Rated: K [Reviews - 21] 11
Summary: There were two alternate endings filmed for The Job, and I remember reading GD mentioning what the alternate ending was somewhere. So, this is my take on it. Also, it's sort of a look into what Pam was thinking throughout that day when she didn't think Jim was going to come back.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 Read Count: 3875 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2008 Updated: March 08, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: ground floor

Really nicely done.  I think that's pretty much exactly what it could have been.  And, much as I love what we actually got to see, that might have been even a little sweeter.

Author's Response:

Thanks, brokenloon!  I'm glad you liked it.  I will admit I would have loved to see a hug or something between them at the end, so this is how I work it out, hehe.  Thanks for reading and reviewing :) -K

While You Were Waiting by bebitched Rated: T [Reviews - 24] 14
Summary: What Jim and Pam have been up to during the hiatus, November to March. A little fluff to get through until April 10th.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2421 Read Count: 4291 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, how charming and lovely and perfectly done was that?  Thank you so much for this.

Author's Response:

I love writing them and much as you love reading them ;) Thank you!

Near to You by xoxoxo Rated: M [Reviews - 85] 42
Summary: Updated with a new chapter placed BEFORE the epilogue.  AU version of The Convention.  Jim does know who to call after he breaks into Dwight's room.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13036 Read Count: 40399 ePub Downloads: 18
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: March 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The distance is nothing; it is only the first step that is difficult

I just read this twice even though I've seen most of it before.  Sigh...there were so many realistic chances for them to get together in S3 and spare us all a lot of pain.  The one you depict here is wonderfully realistic and compelling, and best of all it is your writing, with its characteristic warmth and humor and perfect Jim and Pam voices. 



Author's Response:

Ummm...you are obligated to read all of my stories 3 times minimum.  I thought I made that clear. :)

I'm so glad it came across as realistic.  That was what I was struggling to do.  Well - I was actually struggling to write it at all - but you've heard enough about that. 

Thank you - for everything.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: April 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: You ain’t gonna need any more advice.

You go long enough between stories these days that in between them I forgot a little bit how great you're writing is, so each time I get to read something new there is a certain rediscovery.  I have loved this story from the time it was just an idea, and I continue to love it.  I agree with those who say bring on ch. 3.

Also, I'm pleased to see in the reviews that no one has spoken to defend that miserable song.

 



Author's Response:

That is incredibly sweet of you to say.  I'm glad you are still loving the story.  I'm quite fond of it myself.  Chapter 3 is coming together.

LOL!  I was just thinking Cosby/Crosby and how to get a reference to Karen in there somehow.  I did not know how horrific that song apparentlywas/is. 

Thanks for the heads up. :)   LOL!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Do you want fries with that?

I love this fic soooo much.  The Jim and Pam are just right, both the serious stuff and the witty back and forth.  The comic relief of Dwight and Angela is inspired, and I really like the suggestive ending.  I'm so glad this story has bossed you around so well, and look forward to the epilogue. 

Author's Response:

I'm happy to know you love it sooooooooo much.  Because you're going to have to read the next installment before I post and I wouldn't want you to have to read something you hate. :)

Seriously.  This review was a bright spot in my sucktacular day so thank you. 

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: June 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: Summer in the City

Well, I'd say you managed just fine without your betas.  Loved this.     Screw it.  Just say what you're thinking.  Yes indeed, Jim Halpert.  Congrats on adding another great work to your oeuvre, hard fought though it may have been.

Author's Response:

Look at you fancy pants.  Oeuvre.  What's with the French?  This from a man who man who refuses to spell hors d'oeuvres correctly???

Anyway - Thank you.   I probably should have waited.  I hate feeling like I might have rushed this - but if I hadn't it would never have finished - so....double jepoardy. :)

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: August 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: As you breathe out, and I breathe in

Hell yes, indeed.  Wonderful, wonderful.  Just a perfect mix of humor, hot stuff, and tender stuff.  I especially loved the ending; almost above all else thse two are partners in crime.  Glad that something good came out of ebing stuck in Orlando :)  

Author's Response: This is about the only good thing.  :(  Thanks for reading and telling me what you thought.  I'm beginning to be afraid my efforts were futile - since this addition seems to have become the fainest of blips on the radar screen.  Oh well.  I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway.

forever's a while and tomorrow's still cold and gray by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 18] 10
Summary: That’s when she realizes he’s gotten too far ahead and she’s still dragging behind, out of breath as she tries to catch up.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1723 Read Count: 2785 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: April 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A splendid piece of writing, and very easy to imagine something along these lines.  I'm gonna offer a bit of criticism though..I think it would have been more effective with a muddled, uncertain ending, which it seems to me how things would have gone...Jim continuing to pretend things were okay even though they weren't, or something like that.  You went for the full bore angst, in my opinion chosing maximum emotional impact over realism.  That said, this is a tremendous story, and I'm sure others might disagree with me on the ending. 

and still in love like this. by Stablergirl Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 7
Summary:

Pam doesn't like to plan things, anymore.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432 Read Count: 4648 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed
Date: April 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: the same way as she did before

Outstanding.  What a little nugget of gold this one is. You so often manage to go sort of one layer deeper in your characterization with bits like:

She thinks later she’ll be glad she hasn’t thought about yards and bedrooms because thinking about it alone seems unfair to him, and she knows he has plans that he doesn’t speak out loud.

Really well done.

 



Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon I'm really excited that you liked this.  That's actually my favorite sentence in the whole piece, too.  You know me so well ;-)

Quiet and Calm by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 27] 11
Summary:

Spoilers for The Chair Model.  Jim kicks Pam's ass...(quite gently as it turns out.)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 239 Read Count: 4984 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2008 Updated: April 20, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: April 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: She can.

And a very pleasant diversion it was.  I absolutely love this, all 241 words of it. 

Author's Response: Leave it to you to find something to count. ;)   Thank you.  I am glad you liked it.

Goodbye, Jim by Sweetpea Rated: K [Reviews - 38] 14
Summary: Past Featured Story

Three times Jim proposed...with unexpected results.  Spoilers through Chair Model.

I own nothing whatsoever to do with these characters or The Office.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1312 Read Count: 5330 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Outstanding!!!  I swear it crossed my mind that this topic was ripe for a satirical piece, but when I thought about trying to write one I couldn't imagne pulling it off.  You have done so brilliantly.  Some great laughs, and who knows, maybe you got through to someone.

Author's Response: Any day I get a brokenloon review is a good day!  Your mini-rants on the boards have been so inspired and so dead-on - I'm so pleased you enjoyed this.  I don't know if I hold out much hope that I actually wrote some sense into anyone, but it felt very satsying to say "I'm going to punch you in the tooth" to all the doubters, and I mean that in the nicest possible way. :-)  I have no doubt in my mind that Greg and the writers will reward the faithful.  Thank you so much!

Quiet by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 31] 21
Summary:

It’s been a week to the day since he burst into the conference room and started the rest of his life.

Spoilers for Chair Model

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 4581 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2008 Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Quiet

Wow, that was just perfect, the voices, the tone, everything.  I think this is the backstory BJ Novak had in mind when he wrote Jim' talking head about buying the ring.  Really wonderfully done, a joy to read.  Thank you for this.

Chocolate by bashert Rated: T [Reviews - 26] 11
Summary: Past Featured Story"Well apparently, for two people who like to talk, we aren't very good at communicating."


Four times Pam and Jim don't communicate, and one time they do.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2789 Read Count: 4539 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2008 Updated: May 13, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, now that was a debut.  Outstanding work.  Perfect voices and charactrization, very smooth writing with no bells and whistles.  My favorites were Jim's worrying and Pam's despair at her possibly always being a receptionist, but really everything in the whole fic rang true. 

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I figured Jim would be a worrier, constantly worrying about Pam. I was nervous about getting their voices, because I love the characters so much. I\'m so glad you liked it!

Best Laid Plans by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 9
Summary:

*Finale Spoilers* - What I believe happened after the fireworks and before the scene by the copier.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 740 Read Count: 4632 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 16, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lies and Truth

Okay, let's just all agree this happened.  Thank you for giving us this...I know I couldn't write anything after that debacle last night to save my life, so I'm glad you can help us out.

Maybe Pam will give us her account of this in her first talking head in September. 



Author's Response:

Agreed. :)  And I know. There there brokenloon.  It's OK.  I know that you couldn't bring yourself to type while Pam looked so sad.   ;) 

Maybe she will.  Does that mean I get writing credit then?  LOL! 

All The Things That Keep Us Here by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 26] 15
Summary: This picks up post-"Job Fair" and follows through what I choose to believe happened after Toby's goodbye party.  :o) Hopefully it'll leave those of you who were disgruntled by the non-proposal in the finale...well, a little more gruntled.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6360 Read Count: 11044 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2008 Updated: May 22, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This was great...everything I love about a girl7 story in two easy chapters.  (A partial list of what I love in girl7 stories:  The flawless, distinctive writing, the perfectly captured voices and wit of the characters, the realistic, adult romance and sentimentality.). 

So glad to have you rockin' the fic and the boards these days. 



Author's Response: Wow -- I'm really flattered that those are things you see in my stories, seriously, because those are my top priorities when I'm writing.  Thanks so much for all the kind words!

Broadway Is Dark Tonight by nightskiesfading Rated: K [Reviews - 10] 8
Summary: Jim is able to share some sincerity with Dwight, a scene that could preclude the final scene in "Goodbye, Toby"
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Dwight/Angela, Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 961 Read Count: 1848 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Little Bit Weaker Than We Used To Be

Really nicely done, the idea of Jim paying it forward lke that is a nifty one.

Without Swans or Fireworks by Colette Rated: K+ [Reviews - 22] 19
Summary: Two proposals for the price of one.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1018 Read Count: 3785 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2008 Updated: May 26, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: May 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was complaining to xoxoxo recently that we were overdue for some Colette, and was elated to see this.  Of course it didn't disappoint; your stuff never does.  I really like the idea of it happening this way, of the honesty of it all just overwhelming Jim's rehearsed words. 

Author's Response: First, I'm flattered you even noticed I hadn't posted for a while. ;-) Second, glad you agree that in the actual moment, honest, raw, simple emotion would trump the 'perfect words'. Frankly, Jim doesn't need to get fancy to kick Pam's ass - quite the opposite, in fact. Thanks, brokenloon, for your lovely review.

Fireworks and Ferris Wheels by uncgirl Rated: K [Reviews - 11] 5
Summary:

"After all the years, Pam had to admit that part of her wanted a little perfection."  

 

 

Pam rethinks her definition of perfection.  Spoilers through "Goodbye, Toby."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1583 Read Count: 2537 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed
Date: May 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, this was certainly a nice thing to find after a miserable morning.  Vintage uncgirl stuff.  The dialogue is great and the emotions pitch perfect.  This was my favorite: 

She moved her body flat against his side and looked up at him, “I know.”  She desperately wanted to look away, the moment weighing heavy again, but she focused on him trying to reassure him.  That's just so perfect, her fighting her insinct to avoid the heaviness and realizing he might need reassurance.  

Awesome job.

 

Author's Response: Sorry bout your day!  But I liked that line alot too, so I'm glad you liked it too.  Am I old enough to be vintage?

One down, eleven to go by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 57] 29
Summary: Past Featured Story

The first week is the longest. A visit.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Claustrophobic Spaces, Inner Monologue, Romance, Weekend, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2409 Read Count: 13600 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: June 02, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: June 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Air and Water

Oh, hell yeah.  Now that's what I'm talking about.  Vivid and perfect, and also sweaty Pam in cut-off shorts.  I don't think I could possibly love it any more than I do.     

Author's Response: It's only fair - a little sweaty Pam to balance the mega dose of sweaty Jim ;-) So pleased this did the trick for you brokenloon - and thanks, as always!

A Better Version of Me by Talkative Rated: M [Reviews - 94] 59
Summary: "Oh, mister, wait until you see/What I'm gonna be/I've got a plan, a demand and it just began/And if you're right, you'll agree..." Let's have a bit of fun with our dear girl before TPTB let us know what she really did with her summer vacation, shall we?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Week Days
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7471 Read Count: 21572 ePub Downloads: 10
[Report This] Published: June 02, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008
Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10
Date: June 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Second Month

This is marvelous stuff.  Your real affection for the characters, and your deep understanding of them, is evident.  Pam's friendship with Dwight is a sweet touch (he would absolutely send her pepper spray).  The whole vision of them is just beautiful and such an absoulte joy to read.   Thank you so much for this.  Really, really great work.

Author's Response: Thank you, brokenloon. I\'m fairly certain that Pam\'s lucky Dwight didn\'t send her a teeny little gun. Doesn\'t it seem like he might?