Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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There Once was a Show Called The Office... by Par5 Rated: T [Reviews - 37] 20
Summary: Past Featured Story

A collection of limericks about the show and characters we all love. Or in Todd Packer's case, the characters we love to hate.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3982 Read Count: 12480 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2006 Updated: February 07, 2012
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Season One, Part Deux

Absolutely brilliant.  You perfectly captured the episodes.  Thank you for these!!!



Author's Response: No, thank YOU bitterpill! Just trying to go back to my happy place of season 1. ;)

No Longer In Service by Bennie Rated: MA [Reviews - 19] 15
Summary: Ryan/Pam. Set right after The Initiation.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1462 Read Count: 2441 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2006 Updated: October 28, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: No Longer In Service

Wow.  Angst-a-plenty.  Very well done.  Looking forward to more from you:)

Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, this one was angst with a side of angst. :)

Drawn by falldownmore Rated: M [Reviews - 15] 17
Summary: Past Featured StoryShe is drawn to him. May contain spoilers for future episodes.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1057 Read Count: 2563 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2006 Updated: October 28, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is absolutely beautiful and haunting.  Wonderful imagery and execution.  Wow.

Bonding by norelle Rated: K [Reviews - 17] 10
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam endures one of Michael's genius ideas.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Kevin, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 449 Read Count: 2660 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2006 Updated: October 29, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: First and only chapter

Very sweet!  Welcome to the wonderful world of Office fanfiction:)  Looking forward to reading more from you:)

Then and Now by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 52] 43
Summary: This will be a multi-chapter fic - begins post-Stamford/The Conversation but pre-Jim/Pam face-to-face again after Casino Night.  There will be lots of flashbacks to pre-Casino Night Jim & Pam, as well as a healthy dose of sympathetic!Roy. :o)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Darryl, Dwight, Jim/Pam, Josh Porter, Karen, Michael, Phyllis, Roy, Ryan, Stanley, Toby
Genres: Angst, Humor, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18357 Read Count: 7554 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2006 Updated: November 07, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really loving this.  You really capture all sides of their relationship well.  I really like the structure, too.  Looking forward to more:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm having fun writing pre-Casino Night Jim and Pam, really. 

Thanks for the review, as always!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"That's when it truly began."  Indeed.  This was really wonderful.  The dream worked so well in this chapter.  Loved the gifts Jim gave her.  Very sweet touch.  Looking forward to more:)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved, loved, loved the break up scene.  Wonderful job with that....and the entire chapter.  Wow.  Oh, and the scene with everyone talking about their favorite Jim memory?  Heartbreaking.  And I could so see that happening.  All the emotions are there, as always.  Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was uncertain about the Jim memory scene, so it's good to hear that people liked it.  :o) Thanks again!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Cruel!  And mean!  And that was amazing.  And get back to the ice!  Really nice job of effortlessly moving back and forth from past to present.  This is so well done:)



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to be cruel; I'll make it up in later chapters, I swear. :o)

Thanks, as always, for the review!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well, this just gets better and better.  I always love to see what that first "date" at Cugino's was like.  Great job with that, and the sadness that Jim feels "Now."  Wonderful!!

The Silver Frame by sharky Rated: K [Reviews - 12] 14
Summary: Jim decides what to do with Pam's wedding present.

Categories: Present, Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2425 Read Count: 1929 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2006 Updated: October 30, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very sweet.  And I could definitely use fluff where these two are concerned.  Well done!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yea, sometimes fluff is good I guess.

Dear Diary - 5 Reasons Kelly Wants Jim To Come Back by Bennie Rated: K [Reviews - 19] 15
Summary: Kelly needs Jim back. Don't we all?

Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim/Pam, Kelly, Ryan/Kelly
Genres: Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 997 Read Count: 2566 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2006 Updated: October 31, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Diary

This was hysterical!  Really well done:)

Just Conversation by proudgirl Rated: T [Reviews - 8] 8
Summary: Juxtaposition of two separate Jim and Pam moments shared with other people. Inspired by a spoiler for the next episode ("Diwali").
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Andy, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Humor, In Stamford, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 591 Read Count: 2793 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2006 Updated: November 01, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Just Conversation

Oh, I loved this.  Great execution.  I hope this happens tonight!!!!

Something Else by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 15] 12
Summary:

This is a one-shot inspired by last night's episode and Hot!Tortured!Roy. I shall say no more. :o)

Feedback is appreciated!


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Michael, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2621 Read Count: 1043 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2006 Updated: November 03, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really well done.  You captured the loneliness and regret, for them both, very well.  Really lovely.

Moving by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 16] 13
Summary: Five times Pam has moved to somewhere new.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 883 Read Count: 1535 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2006 Updated: November 04, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So sweet.  Really loved this.  Now, if they could only move in the same direction on the show:)



Author's Response:

I am holding on to hope for now! Thank you!

That Girl by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 20
Summary: What happened after drunk!Jim got into Karen's car?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, In Stamford
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2896 Read Count: 3322 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2006 Updated: November 05, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this was fun!  You made me like Karen:)  Really great job.

Message in a Bottle by Colette Rated: MA [Reviews - 21] 23
Summary: Past Featured Story

A scene from sometime down the road…viewed with rose-colored glasses. Through Diwali. Little bit steamy.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2671 Read Count: 6982 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2006 Updated: November 05, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful, as always.  l like the idea of her text message being his "message in a bottle."  So sweet.  Nicely done.

Author's Response: Well, very kind, as always! And, I really did used to search for bottles with messages on the beach...one more thing JH and I have in common. Thanks so much!

Movement by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 11] 14
Summary: Post finale PamJim oneshot. She tells him all of this even though the trembling in her voice conquers her words in some places and they come out as tears or fragments.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2639 Read Count: 2764 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2006 Updated: November 12, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was so moving.  I'm glad you brought this over.  Wonderful!

Written by Bennie Rated: T [Reviews - 11] 12
Summary:

So they can remember...Spoilers through Branch Closing. 


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 703 Read Count: 2187 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2006 Updated: November 12, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Written

Really beautiful imagery.  Wonderful work:)

Hide and Seek by Paper Jam Rated: M [Reviews - 26] 25
Summary: Past Featured Story

Jim, Pam and Karen, kidding themselves about how things really are.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5673 Read Count: 8078 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2006 Updated: November 13, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Closing In

This was really beautiful and so well done.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Rhythm by nqllisi Rated: K+ [Reviews - 20] 19
Summary: Past Featured Story

Pam's awaiting the "Merger" (based on promos but mostly unspoiled).


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200 Read Count: 1810 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2006 Updated: November 16, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply beautiful.  Thank you for this.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Merging by Par5 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 16] 14
Summary: Pam can't sleep and looks back on the merger. No spoilers, just speculation.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 936 Read Count: 1722 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2006 Updated: November 16, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: November 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love!  This was definitely needed!!  Thank you!

Author's Response: My pleasure! I needed this too. Now I need some wine. Thanks bitterpill!

What Love Tastes Like by Paper Jam Rated: MA [Reviews - 30] 14
Summary: Jim "coaxes" a confession from Pam on New Year's Eve. Spoilers up to A Benihana Christmas, to be safe.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5008 Read Count: 21227 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: December 28, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: December 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: What Love Tastes Like

This is unbelievably hot and so in character.  Loved every minute of it.  Great job!!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you, bitterpill!

Sand by Paper Jam Rated: M [Reviews - 78] 19
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam. Tropical elopement. You do the math.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6502 Read Count: 23870 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2007 Updated: January 19, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: January 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Diamond

I love everything about this.  The conversations flow so beautifully, and who can resist them finally together, happy, and getting married?  Wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: January 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Be In Love And You Will Be Happy

GUH.  You have outdone yourself.  Sweet and hot and just perfect.  Beautiful work.

Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!

Touch by Bennie Rated: M [Reviews - 22] 7
Summary: ...all he wants to do is touch her and the tips of his fingers tingle.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 919 Read Count: 3296 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2007 Updated: January 25, 2007
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed
Date: January 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Touch

This was gorgeous.  Heartbreaking, but gorgeous.  Wonderful voices for them both.