More Than That :: heartcarved

Penname: heartcarved Real name: Lindsay

Member Since: September 15, 2007

Bio:

I'm a 25 year old married woman. I enjoy writing (mostly fanfic), reading, movies, knitting, music, and talking to strangers.

I love Jim/Pam with every fiber of my being, but I'm open to other pairings if they're written believably. I live for broken hearts and angst, for unrequited love and paralyzing inner monologues, because I know it will all work out in the end.

I'm interested in beta reading for people but only if you're serious about having one. I'm never mean but I do strive for honesty.

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Wacky Wednesday by Muggins Rated: M [Reviews - 31]

Summary:

Michael watched Pam through the blinds. She was so lucky, everyone always wanted to talk to her, hang out with her, be friends with her. Sometimes he wished he could be her. It would all be so easy if he was Pam.

Pam looked up to see Michael staring at her through the blinds. She smiled to herself before turning back to answering the phones. Sometimes she wondered what it was like to be Michael. It must be strange.

There's a rule of the universe. Never wonder the same thing at the same time as someone else. That's a karmic jinx.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael/Jan
Genres: Humor, Suspense
Warnings: Adult language, Dubious Consent, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22887 Read Count: 10736 ePub Downloads: 2

[Report This] Published: September 20, 2007 Updated: November 01, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Alarm Clock Sounds

Oh! PLEASE keep up with this story! Michael's voice is dead-on and I'm so interested to see where this is going!!!

Author's Response:

More chapters for your viewing pleasure....

The Shrute Questionnaire by malcolm lake Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13]

Summary:

Dwight's responses to the Proust Questionnaire (at least the ones he deemed worth answering)
Categories: Other
Characters: Dwight
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Proust Questionnaire
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 347 Read Count: 1825 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: September 20, 2007 Updated: September 20, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You had me at 'Sean Connery'. This was PERFECT.

Author's Response: Wow. I think that's, by definition, the best review anyone could write. Thanks.

we don't deserve in the first place by sherlockelly Rated: T [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Karen takes the Proust Questionnaire
Categories: Other
Characters: Karen
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Challenges: Proust Questionnaire
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 460 Read Count: 2827 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: September 21, 2007 Updated: September 21, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed
Date: September 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: always looking for prizes

No, it isn't boring! It's spot on. I love the underlying hurt that she feels but doesn't say out loud. :)

Insomnia by Stablergirl Rated: K [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Jim's dreams push him toward his fate.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5482 Read Count: 4059 ePub Downloads: 3

[Report This] Published: September 24, 2007 Updated: September 24, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream...

Oh. Oh. Man.

I love it. I really enjoy desperate, haunted Jim and you wrote him very well! I liked the way you transitioned between the dreams and reality. I also really loved the way it ended. You didn't overdo Pam's explanation... it was succinct and said so much more than if she'd been verbose.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah for some reason I have a habit of making their declarations short and sweet. And they're always asking each other for help. Guess it's just how I roll ;-) Glad you liked it!!! Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

Progression by traceace Rated: T [Reviews - 10]

Summary: Jim and Pam take another step in their relationship.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Jim/Pam, Kevin, Oscar
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1666 Read Count: 4128 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: September 28, 2007 Updated: September 28, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Question: Do you want to know how much I loved this? Absolutely, you do.

This was adorable on so many levels, and it filled my heart with joy! Kevin was brilliant (I love him anyway, and was thrilled with his role in the premiere). Jim and Pam... I don't know what to say that hasn't already been said, but I adored this so much.

let's give it a try, let's keep it for truth by unfold Rated: K+ [Reviews - 6]

Summary:

That first date, drunk on the roof of her building watching stars and airplanes, he talks about going away. Really short, random fluff. Set post "the Job" so no real spoilers for season four.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 295 Read Count: 3832 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: September 29, 2007 Updated: September 29, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This, him them. Perfect. I loved this glimpse into their first date!

Euphoria by thirtypercent Rated: M [Reviews - 65]

Summary:

First date. Anxiety and hope and terror and euphoria.

Last chapter is up! New beginnings, new rating.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5795 Read Count: 54331 ePub Downloads: 9

[Report This] Published: September 29, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: September 29, 2007 Title: Euphoria

Oh, this is lovely and exciting and hopeful and captures that first-date euphoria so well. :) Please keep going!

Someday by traceace Rated: T [Reviews - 7]

Summary:

The change is noticeable almost immediately.

Set post-"Money".

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 649 Read Count: 3935 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: October 19, 2007 Updated: October 19, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, god. This story. How do you manage to fit so much emotion into 649 words?

The amount of what he had been holding back, however, shocked him, and as he left Dwight that afternoon, he felt like he had been struck physically by the weight of it all.

This is my favorite line -- the look on Jim's face when he left the stairwell was so raw and you could see how much he had suffered through. That kind of longing for someone, especially when it's (in your eyes) unrequited really can take its toll.

This was beautiful and breathtaking and I am so glad you wrote it. You pack quite the punch there. :)

I see you at the foot of some mountains by downtown Rated: M [Reviews - 24]

Summary:

What Jim will remember about their night at Schrute Farms.

Spoilers for "Money."

Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 788 Read Count: 6102 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: October 19, 2007 Updated: October 19, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I usually avoid stories written in the second person but this really drew me in. Probably because 'Money' really demonstrated just how much Jim loves Pam, how much he has been aching for her, and your story mirrors that very well. I loved this!

Author's Response: This was my first 2nd person story as well, I just really wanted to get inside Jim's head for a while. He had a real breakthrough/honest moment in this episode. It's been a long time coming! I'm glad you enjoyed.

Insecurity, fear, and other unspoken emotions by Stablergirl Rated: K [Reviews - 16]

Summary:

My (second?) contribution to the Money post-ep business. Jim and Pam have dinner and something's a little off.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2558 Read Count: 5608 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: October 21, 2007 Updated: October 21, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Break my heart, why don't you? This was heavy and beautiful and poignant and I've been where Jim's at, I've felt what he's feeling and man, you really nailed it.

You owe me some kleenex, okay? Beautiful, beautiful work.

Author's Response: lol aw ok. Sorry to break your heart ;-) Glad you enjoyed it, or felt it (if you will). Thanks for the review!!

Popular by Paper Jam Rated: T [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Summary:

falulatonks requested a Pam/Kelly make-over fic based on the song Popular from Wicked. Kelly gives Pam some basic pointers on improving her image and the rest, as they say, is history. Spoilers up the The Job.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Kelly, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Humor, Oneshot, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3187 Read Count: 4188 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 24, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How much do I love this? How can I even begin to describe it? Thank you for giving Kelly some depth! This is just fabulous.

Author's Response: Thank you! I refuse to believe that Kelly's head could be that empty.

Just Like Love by leftofcenter Rated: T [Reviews - 22]

Summary: What if Jim had broken up with Karen at Phyllis' wedding? What if he had decided to go after Pam when she left with Roy?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Karen, Michael, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4021 Read Count: 15995 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: October 24, 2007 Updated: October 27, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Somewhere inside the hallow places

I wanted to review before I move on to the next chapter. I'm so excited to see where this is heading. This was such a painful episode to watch. I felt Pam's loneliness, I felt Jim's wounded expression seeing her leave with Roy. You've got me hooked. :)

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The scars beneath the pretty faces

I love how, when you least expect it, Michael can be so intuitive, so oddly in touch with a situation that he actually has moments where he seems like a normal person. :) I find moments like that, with Michael so touching. :)

And now. Pam has answered the door. What's going to happen?? Great job!!

The Man, the Oath by llorin Rated: T [Reviews - 8]

Summary: it is not the oath that makes the man, but the man the oath.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 873 Read Count: 2096 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: October 25, 2007 Updated: October 25, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: October 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Man, the Oath

Oh! I love the way you write. Your words are so... lyrical, if that makes any sense. I love how real this story is.

Promises may not be real, but heartbeats are.

What a breathtaking line. Wonderful work!

Save the Last Dance for Me by supergirlsudz Rated: T [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Pam's hands grew clammy and her mouth suddenly felt dry. She had to come up with something. There was no way that Jim was ever going to find out what she was really up to. There was just no way.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4990 Read Count: 4616 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: November 02, 2007 Updated: November 02, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"TGIP. Thank God it's Pam!" = WIN.

Oh, I loved this story. So full of that painfully awkward 'does he really like me for me' that makes up all new relationships.

I love that they've known each other for years and years yet there is still so much about each other that they haven't discovered, even if it's their private dorky tendencies. Very, very cute story.

Author's Response: Thank you, heartcarved! I am so glad you liked it. I know the Pam we've seen on the show lately has seemed very secure, but I don't happen to think she got there overnight. Anyways, thanks so much for the review.

all our fitful failures fit every time we kiss by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 13]

Summary: This new feeling, it's in... Season four Pam-centric fluff.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 407 Read Count: 5161 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: so cross your fingers, place your bets

Oh, holding back!Jim = I love it so much I can barely stand it. This was so gorgeously written. Very lush and vivid. I died a little bit inside just now. Beautiful!

Hello, Goodbye by shootingstars Rated: K [Reviews - 90]

Summary:

Completed

“Are you free for dinner tonight?” (Hello)

"Yes." (Hello)

For a long time it's just missed opportunities and crossed wires.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14247 Read Count: 28944 ePub Downloads: 2

[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: January 07, 2008

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night

I love this! I love this! I LOVE THIS! Please update soon! PLEASE. I love angsty Jim. :D You write very fluidly, very vividly.

Author's Response: WOW, thanks so much for your lovely comments. I have the next chapter done, I just need to edit and fix a few parts. Should be up tomorrow or Monday. Thanks for reading :)

so don't stand idle, waiting by oobadnama Rated: K [Reviews - 10]

Summary:

A missing scene (of sorts) from Survior Man.

Spoilers (obviously) abound!

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 305 Read Count: 3192 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: November 09, 2007 Updated: November 09, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed
Date: November 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: will you have carved your mark?

Okay, Amanda. It's official. I love you.

Author's Response: :D I love you too, Lindsay. And you're awesome. And thanks for reading. And yeah. Hee.

from by ExtremelyGruntled Rated: T [Reviews - 14]

Summary:

A series of emails from Karen Filippelli to her unnamed friend. Starts with Beach Games and will continue through Branch Wars, so spoilers for everything in between.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3529 Read Count: 15757 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: November 11, 2007 Updated: November 16, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: subject: buckle up, it's another long one

Oh, this is lovely! I always felt so bad for Karen -- she was caught in the middle of something she had no idea about -- none of this was her fault and it just sucks that she was hurt over it.

These emails are so realistic -- very much like something I'd email to my girlfriends. Please continue!

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: subject: It was great to see you this weekend!

Go Karen! I'm really loving this insight into her character.

Sometimes by carbondalien Rated: K [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Angela dresses in muted colors, lives a muted life... but sometimes she wishes she didn't.
Categories: Other
Characters: Angela
Genres: None
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 610 Read Count: 1604 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: November 14, 2007 Updated: November 14, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes

This is so beautiful -- and so sad. Great piece on Angela... there definitely should be more of it. I really love this.

Too Late... by Shassafrass Rated: M [Reviews - 154]

Summary:

With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...

WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9339 Read Count: 49867 ePub Downloads: 0

[Report This] Published: November 17, 2007 Updated: June 30, 2008

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: ...The Beginning...

Oh, please continue! I'm so enraptured by the way you write, so elegant and ethereal. This story has my complete attention. I'm dying to know what's going to happen next. Very, very lovely work.

A Simple Excuse to Come Over and Have Sex by bitterpill Rated: MA [Reviews - 25]

Summary: Some shower smut because they can.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 804 Read Count: 14434 ePub Downloads: 1

[Report This] Published: November 18, 2007 Updated: November 18, 2007

Reviewer: heartcarved Signed

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Date: November 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the title. I loved such a see-through excuse for Jim to come over. I love the dialogue and the smut was ... yeah. Very nice. :)

Author's Response: You are sweet. I'm the worst when it comes to titles, so I figured I would make it pretty straight forward. Thanks so much for the review:)

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