Jim and Pam have 24 hours together before he leaves for Stamford. A lot can happen when you're on borrowed time.
9 "Gotta love subtext."
L. O. L.
Gotta love THIS text.
MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.
Story now complete.
Yay!!!
I love. More please!
Things I loved about this:
"New vision can be kind of blinding and scary when you’re used to fuzzy shapes in the dark."
"Avery in Wichita asks,..." --Wichita is MY hometown! Yay!
The reference to Tim's talking head in the BBC version. Kudos :)
And that was a very sweet ending :)
Pam and Roy are fighting when a blackout occurs at Dunder Mifflin. She begins to relize her feelings towards Jim compared to her feelings towards Roy...
Wow guys. I just read back over this uncompleted story. I apologize for how crappy it is. It's one of my first... spare me! [x
9 I LOVE it. Keep going! I want to see what happens next...hehehe.
Author's Response:
hahahaaa, i sure will thann !! [:
thankk you so muchhh !
I like the hug. It doesn't overdo it too soon. It's tentative, but it's also warm and familiar. It's very Jim and Pam.
Good job! Keep going!
Why did she leave? Did she leave by choice, or did she (dare I say it?) die?
SO MANY QUESTIONS!! Please continue!
Wow. No, seriously. W.O.W.
This is really your first attempt? Are you sure you didn't mean to say 101st?
Author's Response: I\'ve written stories before, and I\'m studying to be a screenwriter, but I\'ve never actually done anything for The Office specifically. I am such a huge fan of The Office, and when I saw there was an entire site devoted to exploring the show... I had to join! :)\r\n\r\nThanks for the review!
Truth: You love him, and you can't deny it.
Dare: Step out of your shell and tell him.
Pam contemplates her life in two options, truth or dare.
Great! Just a side note...I think you mean Oprah, not Opera.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh you\'re right! I\'ll go in and change that! :).
After a slight pause, Jim rose as well, moving to follow Dwight. Pam stood and shook her head at him.
“Let me go…I owe Dwight one.”
Alternate Scene for Money I couldn't get out of my head. What if Pam went after Dwight? Short, comments would be great.
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Ok, now that I've gotten that out of my system... great idea! I love it from this perspective. More, almost, then how it really happened on the show. Good work!
It's hot, it's steamy and it's real. This may be more fan non-fiction than fiction. You'll have to read and find out for yourself.
HAHA! What an excellent contrast to all the fairy tale JAM fic that's out there. Unfortunately, yes... this is probably much closer to reality.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review, Pamcakes. I appreciate your having taken the time to read my story.
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
Huzzah! That was wonderful. I loved Jim's speech at the end. Can't wait to see Pam's reaction.
I think I heard that too, about reviews and the strike. Well, here's hoping.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'm going to start chapter 3 with Pam's reaction, and then shoot immediately back to Jim. Still working out all the detail in my head :) And the strike hasn't ended yet, but I still maintain that my theory is true.
Yay!!!! Pamcakes!!!!
I am touched.
Author's Response: Well, of course!! It was all for you :) And, now you know how Jimbles feels about you, too :) -TG
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)I thought it was going to be fluffy! It will get fluffy, right?
Besides that, I loved the tension. Good work.
Author's Response: Hi Pamcakes....well, I'm sorry to say that my summary/description was meant to read sarcastically, but I think I may have missed the mark! Sorry about that...wasn't my intention to mislead. There will definitely be sort of funny moments, but really not fluffy AT ALL. So you may want to turn back now if you're waiting for the fluff because I wouldn't want you to be disappointed. Thanks for reviewing though! I'm glad you enjoyed the tension!
Ok, upon careful reread of the summary, I caught the sarcasm. Nice work! I do like it. It's very raw. That's a good thing :)
Author's Response: "Raw"...I like that description a lot! Thanks for reading Pamcakes!
Real life may not come complete with happy endings, but Jim and Pam find a happily right now.
That's awesome! I literally JUST got back from watching that movie!!! I liked this, it was cute.
I don't know if I would say that I like death fic in general, or that I would seek it out, but I do like what you have got going here! There's only so much fluff and romantic angst a person can take. It's nice to have a different genre. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope this is coming along well and that its not just about the death, but about the journey. THanks for reading and reviewing though!
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.I loved that I could really hear the Australian accents. That means you nailed the lingo :)
Author's Response: Oh, good! I have one Australian friend (named Scott) and I kept trying to hear his voice as I wrote it. Glad it came across okay. Thanks for reviewing, Pamcakes!
Spoilers for The Chair Model. Jim kicks Pam's ass...(quite gently as it turns out.)
I want to be proposed to that way. Absolutely I do.
Author's Response: When you get close show the guy this fic then. LOL! :)
Three times Jim proposed...with unexpected results. Spoilers through Chair Model.
I own nothing whatsoever to do with these characters or The Office.
I actually LOL'd.
Very nice! Way to break the JAM tension :)
Author's Response: What is this tension of which you speak, Pamcakes? There is no tension! None, nada, zip! Glad you had a laugh at this and thanks so much for letting me know!
Jim's been acting a little strange these days.MST 3000! Yes! Did you ever see Game Over, a scary movie that came out a few years ago? Had Frankie Muniz in it? My friend and I went and gave it the MST 3000 treatment because no one else was there. Good times.
Author's Response: I never saw that movie but yeah, I just loved MST 3000. My favorite of all time was probably the one with Ann-Margret... \"Kitten With a Whip.\" Freaking hilarious.
Jim POV! Jim POV! JIM POV!!!!!
Author's Response: That was fast!! Good! I am glad that someone else wants it!