Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.Hah - NO WAY do we want this to end! If that is wrong I don't wanna be right. Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Never thought a storyline so different from what we see on TV could be so compelling. Thanks for a refreshing take on AU Pam. I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Wow -- really enjoying this, italianfood! Please, may we have some more?
Author's Response: Yes, soon, it was just hard to write anything angsty after last night\'s episode.
That was great. I really like this story and I eagerly await the next chapter - soon, please?
That was a sweet and satisfying ending...but I must confess to a little disappointment...you had quite a bit of tension and buildup going on at the convention up to this chapter! And steam really barely even hinted at; suddenly, we're jumped ahead into the present time. Just kind of wish we hadn't skipped what (must have?) happened a little later. Not complaining! Loved it and very much enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing! MCC - I completely get what you are saying. I struggled with this last chapter and what to do next in terms of Pam and Jim. In the end - I just thought that the "first date, first time" stuff had been overdone. Now I see it might have been a bit of a cop out - but the truth is I'm struggling lately and really am fighting to get things finished. It's kind of bumming me out truth be told. I'm kind of jealous of those who are starting out writing right now. I'm envious of their endless well of ideas. There was a time where I couldn't stop writing if I tried. Now it's kind of a fight to tell every story. I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. Thanks so much for the review.
Author's Response:
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.Hey Wendolf - fabulous story! It feels very true to Jim and Pam. Love it - anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
(fanning self)...Wow. That is so hot (kevinspeak). This has been one of my favorites - thanks so much, Wendolf, for giving this to us. Sigh.
Author's Response: You\'re so welcome, mintchocolatechip! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Enjoying this! More, please.
Author's Response: Thanks! Stay tuned...waiting for a few more reviews, and I\'ll post the next chapter!
Like it! More, please. Great job!
Can't wait to hear! Fun story.
Awww - sweet! I liked it - cheezwhiz or not. Thanks for givin' the people what they want!
Pam thinks Jim doesn't give his nickname enough credit. Spoilers for Dinner Party.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1300 Read Count: 3161 ePub Downloads: 0
Aww - this was so sweet! Thanks for sharing your little glimpse into JAM's evening. I like your writing and I also like to hear about Andy - he has fast become one of my favorites.
Heeyyyy....that was a little bit mean. This is such a sweet story - love it. Please write some more!
Hey, I really liked this! Thanks for making me feel warm and friendly towards Karen - this was a refreshing break and I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
Thanks for a delightful chuckle.
Author's Response: My pleasure. Thanks for commenting!
"staring into the dead air before him, his face a collision of shock and hopelessness..,"
Love that sentence. Very well-put...this is some quality stuff - looking forward to more!
This was a great read! I loved it. It really meshed nicely with Night Out and what may have been going through his head. Thank you!
Author's Response: And thank YOU for taking the time to review! I appreciate it.
Jim's been acting a little strange these days.One could never forget MST3K. You really have my curiosity going with this one - fun! Thanks for writing and I really look forward to the next one.
“Pam and I have hurt a lot of people, but mostly we’ve hurt each other. There’s no coming back from that.”Ahhh. Thank you!! Some light after all that too-real darkness. Beautifully done, just pitch-perfect. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you enjoyed!
The Season Five Premiere in Script-Fic.
With office morale at a seemingly all-time low, Michael attempts to save the day with a new idea that is sure to bring happiness to everyone. Meanwhile, the couples of the office, and those who aren't quite there yet, react to the events of the Fourth Season Finale, "Goodbye, Toby."
Nice!! I enjoyed reading this - very true to characters. I can see Angela not liking Holly - though it never occurred to me before. Thanks, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: MintChocolateChip!! Hi, thank you very much for the compliment and taking the time to review. Yes, I figured like with the Stamford people that Angela wouldn't like Holly. Not that there is any reason for it, just because she's Angela.
Very brief look at The Merger through The Job from Jim's POV.Riveting as always, Wendolf. Thank you for writing it. I really liked the moment as they held hands at her door - described with such clarity. Yeah, and...the latter part was pretty great too.
Author's Response: Thanks MCC -- that is really sort of how I see that first post-date exchange going: awkwardly, carefully, tentatively. I\'ve written it other ways in other fics, but I\'ve always thought Jim and Pam communicate best when they\'re not using words. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!
10 Cool! I thought it was Roy. Though Roy does have a brother. Plus I like reading about tall girls being attractive...being one of 'em myself. Yes, Pam is delicate and tiny, blah blah. (Love Pam! Not jealous! Honest! Not consciously!)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I figured since Jim is pretty tall, his sister would be too.
It wasn’t supposed to be like this. Costa Rica was supposed to fix him.I loved this!! Toby is one of my favorite characters - so beautifully written. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you. He\'s still one of my favorites too.
Niiice. Can I just say that your Michael moments are spot-on?? Your writing is truly funny, and I find myself actually mixing up scenes you have so vividly described, with the real show. Why aren't you an actual writer on the show???
Author's Response: Boy... from your lips to Greg Daniel's ears.. lol.. thank you so much!
Well done! Thanks for writing - it was sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was very sweet of you :D