Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10
Date: December 11, 2007
Title: Chapter 20: And that has made all the difference.
What you have done with this favorite (albeit, cliched) poem is nothing short of amazing! I never realized how well it applies to this whole Jim/Pam/Karen love triangle. It was definitely angsty in the begining, but in such a good way. The writing style is different, but it is perfect for the tone you've set. Way to pack a punch in just a few words! When I read the first line of chapter 19, I broke down in tears. I literally sobbed for a few minutes before I continued reading. This is just outstanding!
Author's Response: Thank you! Is it weird that it makes me happy that I made you cry? :-)