Melissa/Ryan, Ryan/Kelly.
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Kelly, Ryan
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 346 Read Count: 3264 ePub Downloads: 0
Melissa/Ryan, Ryan/Kelly.
This was super adorable! :)
HAhahaha! Oh, that's awesome. Such a Kelly thing to do. And I love how you show Angela's slowly warming side to this story, I grow to love her more and more everyday and I love how she's opening up to everyone else in the office a little bit more now.
The ending was great. :)
Characterization here was spot. on. I loved it. There's nothing greater that well-written fic that adds on brilliant humor and adorableness where the half-hour cut couldn't fit it in :)
Author's Response: Awww thanks Lizzie!! I'm so glad you liked it.
That's a sweet story. :)
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I will review with greater articulation when the overwhelming sense of adorableness has waned off a bit. :)
AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
An unbelievably cathartic return of an Office episode, AND a wonderful, heart-stopping ending of a chapter here. I could not be happier!!!
Love this chapter :)
GAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Jim the ManWhore!!! That was a SHOCKING ending, I've never read of Jim being such an ass before . . . and yet for some strange reason it works . . . hmm . . . :)
Perhaps a chapter 2? We all know and love Jim the adorable, loyal knight he really is . . . this would be very interesting to see a fanfic where Jim's playing the both of them.
Great story, I loved this. Very well written as well which does not often happen I feel with smut. Excellent work. :)
That was AWESOME. Bravo. the Dwight one was my favorite. Sadly, I can see that happening. :)
AWWWWWW!!!!! A wonderful, quirky aftermath-fic of the finale. Braveo. :)
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!! Omg was that an adorable, hilarious story. What words to describe how much I had to bite my tongue to keep from bursting out laughing in my quiet little office as I read this.
You have the characters spot on and the emotion between Jim and Pam was purely adorable.
Wonderful fic, I cannot tell you how happy I am you wrote a sequel to your first story, which was hilarious. Bravo. :)
Ryan may be gone from her life, but that is SO not going to shut Kelly Kapoor up.
An idea of Kelly's "revenge"
Hahahaha!!! I can totally see Kelly doing this. The "voicemail only has a limited amount of time per message" part was especially brilliant/hilarious, there's obviously not enough space on one of those messages to hold a Kelly-rant.
An excellent read. Bravo!
HAHAHAHAHA!!!! Awesome
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! Glad to make you smile!
What if Pam refused to let Angela drop her off at home after the Dundies?
“I want to go to Jim’s,” Pam said, interrupting Angela’s thoughts.
Angela felt as though her head might pop off and land in one of her cup holders. Would the depravity of this night never end?
This was an EXCELLENT first chapter. I love how you have the POV of Angela of all people to start it off, that was excellent and absolutely hilarious characterization. I cannot wait to read more!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Lizzie! I'm working on chapter two right now, and I am *very* excited :)
Oh my God!!! This is wonderful and terribly sad all together. I, too, battle with love and resentment for Ryan in that he has so much potential to be a good, successful guy, and yet his cynicism/condescension to others really brings him down. I hope for his own sake that is fired soon so he has to hit rock bottom and take care of himself. And I hope that when that happens, he realizes he does have people like Kelly that would be there for him. As crazy as that office is, those characters really do a good job looking out for each other.
Would it be too much to hope we could expect some more to this? I think you've got a great start here in detailing the undoing of Ryan and help him get back to himself, I think you've got remarkable introspection here when it comes to his character. I think this beginning has great potential in being built on further, I hope you do! :)
Thanks for a great ready, I was hoping someone would be writing about this episode. Bravo!!
Roy dies, Dunder-Mifflin goes under, and Pam becomes a drug dealer. An AU that begins in late Season 2.
Inspired by the show "Weeds."
Oh my God Oh My God this is wondeful! I love AU Office fics that work, this is such an interesting group you've put together, and as always your Pam/Ryan interaction is brilliant. Your story "Hey Jealousy" made me an official and uncompromising Pam/Ryan lover and I'm not going back. I can't wait to see what you do in continuing this story, it's wonderful!!
Thanks so much for continuing your excellent stories!!
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing, this story is WHACKED but it's hilarious and I love the dynamic you have between all these character, it feels so real and possible even as it's an AU . . . Ryan a drug dealer, Creed his SUPPLIER! (perfect insertion of characters upon AU fic :)) it's all great.
It was sad and perfectly Pam-like to sit and watch "The Notebook" in her wedding dress. And of course the Ryan/Pam dynamic is strong and believable and makes me oogly inside all at once!
Bravo! Can't wait to read more!