Penname: bitterpill Real name: Jennifer
Member Since: July 14, 2006

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A Better Fit by Par5 Rated: K [Reviews - 36] 29
Summary: Past Featured StoryAt first she's all wrong, but in the end maybe she's a better fit.
Categories: Future, Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1226 Read Count: 3908 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2006 Updated: October 05, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job.  Even though I want Jim and Pam together, she is driving me nuts.  Really nice work:)



Author's Response: I totally and completely agree! And thanks to you for posting the Jam piece. I needed an antidote to what I wrote and it was perfect!

Like Hate by proudgirl Rated: T [Reviews - 25] 22
Summary: A deceptively happy Jim/Karen. And, of course, a little bit of Pam thrown in there, because it'll always be about her.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 685 Read Count: 2866 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2006 Updated: October 06, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Like Hate

This was great!  I'm always and forever a JAM fan, and this felt completely right.  Really wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, so am I. And I think part of being a JAM fan means believing that they'll be okay even when great people come into their lives.

Pretty by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 16
Summary:

He had come here to make a fresh start, so he decided to make an effort.  Spoilers through "The Coup," unspoiled speculation thereafter.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Jim, Karen
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532 Read Count: 1253 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2006 Updated: October 06, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw.  Really nicely done. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Too Late? by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 20] 18
Summary:

Jim's been away.  Now he's back.  Pam realizes what she's missed.  No spoilers - just speculation and much wishful thinking.

I added Karen as a character in the story - since she's mentioned.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1186 Read Count: 2968 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2006 Updated: October 07, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Too Late?

I love this!  Perfect way to start the day.  Thank you!!!

Author's Response: You are welcome!!!! 

The List by nomadshan Rated: T [Reviews - 37] 27
Summary: Pam has a list. So does Jim.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Jim, Karen, Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230 Read Count: 2634 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2006 Updated: October 07, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

My head just exploded.  Really powerful. Great structure. 

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the comment about the structure, especially, bitterpill  :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat are you going to do with your time off? Travel. It's gonna be really nice. I'm gonna find myself.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2427 Read Count: 3238 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Find Yourself

Squeeeeee!  This was so great!  Just what I needed!  Thank you!!!

The Gift by xoxoxo Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 19
Summary:

The more things change - the more they stay the same. 

(I went crazy and rated it M -and then changed it back to a T 'cause - you know - it's still me doing the writing.)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1165 Read Count: 2635 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2006 Updated: October 09, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Makeover

LOVE THIS!!!!  So perfect.  Really great job.



Author's Response: Thanks bitterpill!!!!  I'm glad you thought so!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWith apologies to Charles Dickens, here's the real story of what finally prompted Pam to call off the wedding.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Dream/Fantasy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3758 Read Count: 8193 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2006 Updated: October 10, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Past...and maybe future

UNREAL!  Beautifully done. This was just all kinds of great:)

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!

Surprise by nqllisi Rated: T [Reviews - 28] 25
Summary: Past Featured StoryFive ways Jim finds out about Dwight & Angela.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 771 Read Count: 2103 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2006 Updated: October 11, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this was so good.  And with a fever, no less!  You are amazing.  Great job!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You're too sweet.

Summary: Pam thinks about Jim a lot.   But sometimes she thinks about Jon, too...
Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Pam/Other
Genres: None
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2774 Read Count: 1981 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2006 Updated: October 11, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this was fun.  Really great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! 

Her Eyes by nomadshan Rated: M [Reviews - 23] 22
Summary: Jim acts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267 Read Count: 4683 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2006 Updated: October 12, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, shan.  This is so great.  You certainly have a way with words.

Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill  :)

Trust Me by Leely Rated: MA [Reviews - 23] 25
Summary: Smut for smut's sake.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2667 Read Count: 26721 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2006 Updated: October 12, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Bedroom

Wow.  Seriously.  This was beyond hot but still very sweet and very them.  Great job!!



Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad it worked.

Vignettes by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 75] 80
Summary: Past Featured StoryJust a collection of confections from a parallel universe where all the Herr’s potato chips in Montreal can’t keep Pam and Jim apart. I hope it’s as therapeutic to read, as it was to write. A bit saucy.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6924 Read Count: 18493 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2006 Updated: October 18, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Persuasion

Wonderful idea and fantastic execution.  This was sweet, funny, and hot.



Author's Response:

Sweet, funny and hot - a fluff writer's dream! Thanks so much. I kind of dug the idea too, but thought it was too silly to stand as a 'story' - just an amusing moment. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chocolate Pudding

Ummm.....uh....incoherent over here.  Extremely well done(as always).

Author's Response: Not too much then? Thanks for allowing me to make you incoheren!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Second Drink

Another gorgeous piece.  Loved this intimate moment between them.  You really captured it beautifully. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm fascinated by these small moments too...or is it that I'm just too lazy to concoct an entire plot? Ah well... glad I'm not alone.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Liz

Wonderful story.  I really enjoyed this.  I'm sure Liz would be proud:)



Author's Response: Think Liz Taylor a la Butterfield 8, or Giant. In other words WOMAN. Thanks again - off to read your newest!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Hot as a Very Hot Thing

Many different sides to Jim....all of them beautifully written.  Another great read:)



Author's Response: Thanks! And yeah, Jim is a man of many parts...okay that sounds too smutty. 'Different sides' is much better.

Summary: Past Featured Story

This story follows "Grief Counseling". Ed Truck's death makes Pam reach out to someone.

It was too late to change her mind now. She knocked on his front door.


Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Michael, Pam, Roy
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1062 Read Count: 2589 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2006 Updated: October 14, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was sweet.  Pam was so good to Michael in this episode.  Great continuation of that:)

Alterations by xoxoxo Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 18
Summary:

"Time is a dressmaker specializing in alterations." Faith Baldwin

A story inspired by Ms. Fischer herself and her recently publicized version of Pam's backstory that explains what the hell is going on in her mind now that she's made that poor heartbroken boy move away.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1594 Read Count: 5031 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2006 Updated: October 15, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Days of the Week

Instead of blame, I'd like to thank Jenna for inspiring this.  So beautiful.  Wonderful work.

Author's Response:

I only said blame because it was giving me fits this morning.  I actually have another whole variation on the same theme. 

But yes.  Jenna is to thank.  And I thank you for your sweet review.  I'm so glad you liked it.

Taste by PuffingNoise Rated: K+ [Reviews - 12] 9
Summary: Past Featured Story

Inspired by something I noticed about the "Casino Night" kiss.


Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 320 Read Count: 3120 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2006 Updated: October 16, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful job.  It really takes you back to that glorious moment.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Summary: Past Featured StoryI bought a new suit and cancelled a plane ticket.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1136 Read Count: 5903 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2006 Updated: October 16, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  This is so good.  The emotions are all right there.  So sad and so beautiful.

Summary: Past Featured StoryRyan finds an assortment of junk in Jim's desk. He lets Pam decide what to do with it.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 857 Read Count: 2634 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2006 Updated: October 17, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this was good.  Really good.  So sweet and I loved how she wanted to ship herself!  Wonderful work!

Salesman by time4moxie Rated: K [Reviews - 19] 17
Summary: Jim goes shopping and discovered that sometimes a snack food is more than a snack food.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1025 Read Count: 2830 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2006 Updated: October 17, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this!  Single serve for Karen.  HA!  Ahem.  Really sweet idea and great execution.

Author's Response: I'm glad you caught the 'single serving' meaning.  ;-)  Thanks for reading!!!

Summary: Jim's back in Scranton, but he and Pam are worlds apart. What do you do when you can't seem to talk to each other anymore?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3463 Read Count: 6917 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2006 Updated: October 18, 2006
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AH!  This is so good.  Love the tension between them.  Can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, this was so good.  Great reunion!  I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks - I'm really dying to know how it really goes down.  I just hope it doesn't disappoint me.